AJAngelique

I remembered more details. Maybe someone will point me in the right direction. As previously mentioned Ichigo and his sisters were raised by Urahara after the Grand Fisher killed their parents. The story pretty much follows the manga and anime, Ichigo meets Rukia and all that. But Byakya thinks and tells Yamamoto that Ichigo is Urahara and Yuroichi's son.

I have been told on more than one occasion that my grammar is bad ad i need a second pair of eyes to catch those little mistakes that I seem to miss on my proof reads I work in a lot of topics but right now it's modern fantasy adventure and i've got plans for a horror story that's like an american version of Bleach meets Rasetsu. Can you help me?

I'm looking for someone who's interested in proofing original works of yaoi I'm currently working on a horror/supernatural themed yaoi and i need help with my grammar and catching the minor typos my computer seems to keep missing *heavy sigh* if you're interested, pleased drop me a line either here or at aj_angelique@yahoo.com