Fandom: Naruto

Status: WIP

Pairing: Naruto/Hinata

Genre: Angst, Romance, Smut and Fluff, Drama, Slice of Life

Warnings: Explicit Sexual Content, Language, Manipulation, Drug and Alcohol Usage, Implied Child Abuse, Mental Illness, Bullying

Link: https://naruto.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600106979

Beta Needs: Grammar, punctuation and spelling correction of past and upcoming chapters, the former of which can be done at beta’s convenience. General writing advice and suggestions. Honest opinions and critiques (respectfully delivered of course). If you can offer only one of these needs, that’s cool too, just let me know what you’d like to assist with.

About Me: I’m generally laid back and friendly though I tend to stress about a minor things. I am primarily a smut writer, but I don’t do the whole porn-without-plot, so there’s always plot along with my smut. I’m trying to learn how to be more plot driven, though my biggest worry with that is feeling as though my characters are rushing through emotions and situations. I strive to create realistic, relatable, human characters that feel, hurt, adapt and interact with the world around them the way most people would. I am obsessed with NaruHina, though I also enjoy NaruHinaSasu.

Contact: Reply to this thread, or find me on tumblr, AO3, and ff.net under the same name; Sessakag

Misc: I update this story at least once a month. If you have an example of your work as a beta, please share. I’ve been looking for weeks for a beta reader, and I hope my search will finally come to an end soon. If you are not interested in betaing this fic, but know someone else that may be interested, please pass this on to them! Have any questions, feel free to ask me.

Thanks all!

Fandom: Naruto

Status: WIP

Pairing: Naruto/Hinata

Genre: Thriller, Romance, Smut and Fluff, Drama, Slice of Life, Action

Warnings: Character Death, Explicit Sexual Content, Language, Violence, Moral Bankruptcy, Moral Ambiguity, Blood, Gore, Manipulation, Drug and Alcohol Usage, Dom/sub Elements, Angst, Gangs, Guns, Implied Child Abuse

Link: https://naruto.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600106980

Beta Needs: Grammar, punctuation and spelling correction of past and upcoming chapters, the former of which can be done at beta’s convenience. In depth knowledge of street life, organized crime and slang(American). General writing advice and suggestions. Honest opinions and critiques (respectfully delivered of course). If you can offer only one of these needs, that’s cool too, just let me know what you’d like to assist with.

About Me: I’m generally laid back and friendly though I tend to stress about a minor things. I am primarily a smut writer, but I don’t do the whole porn-without-plot, so there’s always plot along with my smut. I’m trying to learn how to be more plot driven, though my biggest worry with that is feeling as though my characters are rushing through emotions and situations. I strive to create realistic, relatable, human characters that feel, hurt, adapt and interact with the world around them the way most people would. I am obsessed with NaruHina, though I also enjoy NaruHinaSasu.

Contact: Reply to this thread, or find me on tumblr, AO3, and ff.net under the same name; Sessakag

Misc: I update this story at least once a month. If you have an example of your work as a beta, please share. I’ve been looking for weeks for a beta reader, and I hope my search will finally come to an end soon. If you are not interested in betaing this fic, but know someone else that may be interested, please pass this on to them! Have any questions, feel free to ask me.

Thanks all!

Fandom: Naruto

Status: WIP

Pairing: Naruto/Hinata/Sasuke (Contains Naru/Sasu yaoi)

Genre: Romance, Smut and Fluff, Drama, Slice of Life, Action, Supernatural

Warnings: Explicit Sexual Content, Language, Bisexual Males, Violence, Gore, Angst, AU

Link: https://naruto.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600106982

Beta Needs: Grammar, punctuation and spelling correction of past and upcoming chapters, the former of which can be done at beta’s convenience. In depth knowledge of Naruto universe and supernatural lore to assist with plot ideas. General writing advice and suggestions. Honest opinions and critiques (respectfully delivered of course). If you can offer only one of these needs, that’s cool too, just let me know what you’d like to assist with.

About Me: I’m generally laid back and friendly though I tend to stress about a minor things. I am primarily a smut writer, but I don’t do the whole porn-without-plot, so there’s always plot along with my smut. I’m trying to learn how to be more plot driven, though my biggest worry with that is feeling as though my characters are rushing through emotions and situations. I strive to create realistic, relatable, human characters that feel, hurt, adapt and interact with the world around them the way most people would. I am obsessed with NaruHina, though I also enjoy NaruHinaSasu.

Contact: Reply to this thread, or find me on tumblr, AO3, and ff.net under the same name; Sessakag

Misc: I update this story at least once of month. If you have an example of your work as a beta, please share. I’ve been looking for weeks for a beta reader, and I hope my search will finally come to an end soon. If you are not interested in betaing this fic, but know someone else that may be interested, please pass this on to them! Have any questions, feel free to ask me.

Thanks all!

Fandom: Naruto

Status: WIP

Pairing: Naruto/Hinata/Sasuke (Non-yaoi)

Genre: Romance, Smut and Fluff, Drama, Slice of Life, Politics

Warnings: Multiple Kinks, Heavy BDSM Elements, Explicit Sexual Content, Language, Cheating, Angst

Link: https://naruto.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600106191

Beta Needs: Grammar, punctuation and spelling correction of past and upcoming chapters, the former of which can be done at beta’s convenience. In depth knowledge of Naruto universe to assist with plot ideas, Clan inner workings and Konoha history. General writing advice and suggestions. Fetish innovations and creative, chakra based ideas. Honest opinions and critiques (respectfully delivered of course). If you can offer only one of these needs, that’s cool too, just let me know what you’d like to assist with.

About Me: I’m generally laid back and friendly though I tend to stress about a minor things. I am primarily a smut writer, but I don’t do the whole porn-without-plot, so there’s always plot along with my smut. I’m trying to learn how to be more plot driven, though my biggest worry with that is feeling as though my characters are rushing through emotions and situations. I strive to create realistic, relatable, human characters that feel, hurt, adapt and interact with the world around them the way most people would. I am obsessed with NaruHina, though I also enjoy NaruHinaSasu.

Contact: Reply to this thread, or find me on tumblr, AO3, and ff.net under the same name; Sessakag

Misc: This is book one of two. I update this story at least once of month. If you have an example of your work as a beta, please share. I’ve been looking for weeks for a beta reader, and I hope my search will finally come to an end soon. If you are not interested in betaing this fic, but know someone else that may be interested, please pass this on to them! Have any questions, feel free to ask me.

Thanks all!

Fandom: Naruto

Status: WIP

Pairing: Naruto/Hinata

Genre: Horror, Romance, Smut and Fluff, Drama, Slice of Life, Action

Warnings: Character Death, Explicit Sexual Content, Language, Violence, Disturbing Horror Elements, Blood, Gore, Tragedy, Light Dom/sub Elements, Angst

Link: https://naruto.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600106180

Beta Needs: Grammar, punctuation and spelling correction of past and upcoming chapters, the former of which can be done at beta’s convenience. In depth knowledge of Naruto universe to assist with plot ideas, jutsu mechanics and logistics. General writing advice and suggestions. Creature design input. Honest opinions and critiques (respectfully delivered of course). If you can offer only one of these needs, that’s cool too, just let me know what you’d like to assist with.

About Me: I’m generally laid back and friendly though I tend to stress about a minor things. I am primarily a smut writer, but I don’t do the whole porn-without-plot, so there’s always plot along with my smut. I’m trying to learn how to be more plot driven, though my biggest worry with that is feeling as though my characters are rushing through emotions and situations. I strive to create realistic, relatable, human characters that feel, hurt, adapt and interact with the world around them the way most people would. I am obsessed with NaruHina, though I also enjoy NaruHinaSasu.

Contact: Reply to this thread, or find me on tumblr, AO3, and ff.net under the same name; Sessakag

Misc: This is book one of a trilogy. I update this story at least once a month, and there are only 20 chapters remaining until completion. If you have an example of your work as a beta, please share. I’ve been looking for weeks for a beta reader, and I hope my search will finally come to an end soon. If you are not interested in betaing this fic, but know someone else that may be interested, please pass this on to them! Have any questions, feel free to ask me.

Thanks all!

Anyone interested in being a beta reader for it? I feel it might need some work.

Wanted: Second opinion on oomph, intensity of suspense/threat, and cliffhanger.
Fandom: Dragon Ball/Dragon Ball Z. There’s maybe two canon characters identified on-screen.
Type of story: Drama/family/romance, heavily influenced by the characters’ traumatic histories and recovery from them. There won’t be any real romance until the OCs Rio and Sierra start getting their shit together and recovering from the damage they’ve done themselves, and any smut will have to wait until after that.

The basic setup of the story (I’m heavily paraphrasing so this is gonna be weird, feel free to skip.) Main OCs are three sisters (Sierra, Rio, and Cordelia) and Rio’s teenage daughter Rowan. Rio got involved with an older man as a teenager, was nearly killed after she wound up pregnant and went to him for help, and has raised Rowan despite mild-to-moderate brain damage, serious post-traumatic stress, and stalking/abuse/physical attacks from the father when he’s not in prison. Rio’s sister, Sierra, was always there to help but when Sierra needed help (her health started failing, she got a diagnosis of something that would eventually cripple her, their parents died, and a few other crises) Rio shut her out and threw blame. Cordelia washed her hands of the entire family and shut herself away because she’s an asshole. In a fit of pique, depression, and desperation, Sierra ran away to a forest in hopes she’d die there instead of have to actually keep living with her new medical problems and her family falling apart. Instead, Piccolo and Gohan find her and bring her to Bulma, and Piccolo’s attitude and shouting helps her realize she’s throwing her life away over nothing.
Sierra has spent the last several months getting medical help, undergoing counseling, and working up the nerve to confront her family and take back her life. Meanwhile, Rowan found herself on Dende’s radar (and he commenced guardian-stalking her because he’s an awkward teenage alien with a crush and nothing to do) and Rio still hasn’t figured out that Sierra’s running away was partly her fault. Cordelia is still moping at home with her dog. Most recently, Rowan’s sperm-donor was paroled, Rio got warning and they started packing to leave town until he’s gone. In this chapter: Rio is an asshole, we see that she’s not just an asshole and how her anger issues have affected her relationship with Rowan. Planning. More drama. Shtuff. Dende finds out Rowan’s sperm-donor is coming after them and sends help, it doesn’t go as planned, a family ally beats the tar out of Dad on the front lawn, and Rio and Rowan are brought from their home to the Lookout for their own safety. Sierra FINALLY reaches out because she knows her niece is in danger, but the call goes unanswered because Rowan forgot her phone. Cliffhanger followed by furious readers with torches and pitchforks.

  A whole list of triggers in this chapter alone:

• violence
• some mild referenced gore
• panic, panic attacks, and Post-Traumatic Stress 
• complicated relationship between a mother with PTSD and her teenage daughter
• references to previous physical assault, child abuse, coerced sex between an adult and a minor resulting in pregnancy, stalking, attempted murder
• physical assault and threatening with a firearm (happens mostly off-screen)
• alien abduction (because...ya know...they get taken to safety...by aliens. It fits the canon.)

...suffice it to say this is WAY out of my usual writing boundaries and I’ll be slapping some heavy warnings on it when it’s posted. The scenes in question have no romance or sex, just impending doom followed by DOOM.

Work examples: I’d love to read examples of y’all’s work – or, alternatively, some examples of what you would consider well-written stories – but it isn’t an absolute requirement. Again, I’m just looking for an opinion on the impact of the last few scenes here!

I’m looking for some people to beta read the first in my new original m/m series, loosely titled ‘The Invader Episodics’. It follows the non-con/dub-con love story of Kolbu, a huge Murkuri berserker chosen to inherit an army, and Fray, a slender Elbiyan nobleman with a rape fetish who can’t seem to stop getting captured. The entire story arc spans a decade, from when Fray is 19 and Kolbu is 23 to when they are both in positions of power among their people. But the first novella is just their first encounter.

Over time the power balance shifts to a more equal one and there is romance, as well as some action/adventure and intrigue. I’m not sure how long the series will be yet but I have two written and at least three more planned. 

Tags: rape, master/slave, humiliation, Stockholm syndrome, dubious consent, violence, angst, hurt/comfort, anal, m/m, fingering, oral, bondage, romance

Each novella is around 10k words, 7 chapters. Here’s how it’ll work:

• You link me an example of your writing
• I send you a link to the first chapter 
• you read it
• if you like it then you leave feedback on it and I send the other 6
• you read those and answer the questions I provide, and give me your own thoughts that aren’t covered if you so desire
• if you don’t like it, I thank you for your time and you go on your merry way

If you’re interested, reply here or shoot me a DM, or an email at eden(dot)blythe(dot)author(at)gmail.com

Ideally I’m looking to find some people to beta the entire series out of this thread, but even if you just do the first one I will be glad of your help. Full disclosure, I’m aiming to publish these on the ‘Zon (along with an erotic art Patreon), but I will post the first novella on AFF and it does work as a stand-alone. If you’d like to get a sense of my writing style before you take the plunge, here’s a link to my M/F story containing similar kinks and themes, published without any betas: The Price of Himself

Thanks for reading and hope to hear from you soon.

Three chapters is posted so far out five planned, average chapter length is 12k words. I have chapter 4 on my harddrive...but self editing is a drag.

I much rather trade beta service with somebody else. Anyone that can be of assistance?

well, someone who can be edited and be something like a co-writer for current and etc... stories because I soo get suck too often and would love if some could give ideas and opinion on what should happen to make these stories great.

my stories are 90 to 95 percent original anthro mostly m/m pairing really m/f and anything goes and I do mean anything ~wink~ ( lol)

I use to have one but that was years ago and they were great but I just found some of my old written work in a book and I to finish everything and possibly write more.

this is so funny because it sounds like some dating service thing.

if you can help please email

at devilladyx@yahoo.com

anyway HELP!!!

The piece is part of the Animaniacs/Pinky and the Brain fandom

The story is essentially an M/M slash fic. Some use of drugs involved. So if you’re interested . The story will be broken up into one chapters for easier /faster reading and commentary.

The work I’d like Beta’d is a crossover of True Blood & Harry Potter (Mainly based in TB world)

This story will have some sex scenes (eventually) with Eric/Godric/OC as well as possible Eric/Godric and magic work. 

I would like to see a few examples of beta’ing done to make sure we could be on the same wavelength. :)

If you’re interested please let me know. The story already has a word count of 17,831 according to MS Word.

I'm looking for someone, who can thoroughly check for any mistakes language-based (grammar, spelling, suitability for daily use), for english isn't my native language, I'm german. (Perfect would be someone who can speak/write german as well so contact will be easier.)

Someone, who knows himself around Japan, japanese suffixes as well as daily life there would be nice.

I do need someone who knows Detective Conan good and could help me to have the characters stay in character. (Example: Heijis dialect)

About the story:

The main theme is Detective Conan. It's no AU and no Crossover. I think it will be Hurt/Comfort, Angst,... something like this.

The characters I want to use are Conan, Ran, Heiji as "main characters" and I invented some criminals. The rest will surely show up at one point or another.

The story is really dark. I'm going to hurt Conan badly and I need someone who doesn't mind or enjoys storys like this. It will have really adult content, so the betareader should at least be of full age.

Right now I've got 20000 words written and I think I'm halfway through. I would like to finish the story, before I'm going to officially post it anywhere.

About me:

I'm 30 years old and mother of soon 3 children, married and own a dog and a cat. I'm a nurse for children and live near Frankfurt am Main in Germany.

I'm looking forward to finding someone,

thank you for reading this,

Tanja

This will have lots of smut too

I’m looking for a beta reader that would be able/willing to help me with grammar issues, possible sentence structure, and story flow. Alternatively, I’m also looking for someone to read over the work and give me their opinion on it without helping with the previous stated issues.

What I have is a two-shot in the Harry Potter fandom. It features Sirius Black and my own original female character in a sexual encounter and is, to be frank, PWP.

I’m not looking for intensive beta reading. I need opinions on the general plot and such, not grammar help or anything like that. If you enjoy shifter books, you’re the person I’m looking for. 

The first book is already contracted for publishing in the summer of 2019 and they’re just waiting on me to get them the second to set the date for it also, so I’m offering a free copy of the books once they’re published, and if you’d like I’ll include your name in the acknowledgements. 

Please either comment here, send me a pm or you can reach me by email at bangbangramallama@gmail.com

I’m looking for a beta for some Slam Dunk fics, I'm working on. Right now, I’m working on a one-shot, so it should be easy but if the beta wants, they can continue doing the rest of my SD fics.

Basically, my Slam Dunk fics are yaoi with Sendoh/Rukawa as the main pairing. They are mostly 15+ but a couple of them are R-rated and have some rape references.

What I want from my prospective beta is to look out for grammar and spelling mistakes, the correct use of words and sentences, and the consistency of the plot and characters. I’m open to hearing your honest opinion on the flow of the story, the characters’ consistency or whatever constructive criticism you may have.

Thank you.

The originals especially, I’d be willing to trade beta. I have self published, but there is no way I can afford to pay for professional editing.  Here is a filler cover for my one NaNo: Let me know if you need more information.

1. I have a problem with my tenses, staying in the proper one at the right time, I just slip up, I also need help making it more marketable for mass readers without taking away it’s original juice, but I would like this done with someone who uses my word processor at least (which is Microsoft’s Word) so it’s done with as little work for you and me together.
2. It is a totally original story, no fandom, I made all of this crazy shit up myself and I want all the credit durnit so please, if I give it to you, do not publish, share, do anything with it other than possibly keep it for yourself and maybe in case I lose my copy that way I have an emergency with you, but that’s up to you. I’m a squirrel when it comes to files, but I recently lost my entire history, so I’m massively starting to save again, like a squirrel, crazy.
3. It’s set in present time, about a girl who’s just graduating high school and she has these psychic powers and shit happens that’s kinda really bad, and stuff and stuff and it’s got a lot sci-fi/fantasy of setting up a world as I plan on writing four books all together in this universe.
4. I would like to see at least a few things that you have done, so I have an idea if we mesh or not, I hope to find some one!

Mostly I just want someone to help point out any gaps that I should maybe fill, better ways to word or describe things. Just want help fixing the little things I overlook as I write.

Looking for one or more people to generally look over a huge story I'm writing, twelve chapters as of now. I’d like to have feedback/suggestions on the writing, and the story too if possible.

The main character is 13 at the start of the story, and there is sexual activity between minors and between adults and minors, plus explicit medical and other fetishes, plus abuse, BDSM, basically a bit of almost everything.

Please let me know if interested.