Guest ABigFan Posted March 29 Report Share Posted March 29 Hello Chross, That is lovely to hear, looking forward to new adventures of our favorite heroine! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrossroadsMk2 Posted March 31 Author Report Share Posted March 31 Hello everyone. The next chapter is finished and I'm partway through proofreading. It should be posted in the next few days. I ran out of room for any special events, like the black tape modelling runway show, so that'll have to wait until next chapter. This chapter shows a typical day for Lara at Green Manor (formerly Croft Manor), and expands upon Lara's sexual conditioning, Sarah's psychological manipulation and Lara's relationship with Sam. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest LHunt Posted March 31 Report Share Posted March 31 We waiting in the wings as Sarah continues with Lara's mind fuckery....while Sam continues Lara's play room fucking. Awesome! 😎 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrossroadsMk2 Posted April 2 Author Report Share Posted April 2 Hi everyone, Chapter 16 has posted. It ended up being a rather long chapter, but there was a lot I wanted to cover. I needed to show what Lara's typical days at Green Manor (formerly Croft Manor) are like, to establish the baseline before I move on to special events. Hope you enjoy it, and the direction that I'm taking Lara and Sam. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Indubitably Posted April 2 Report Share Posted April 2 I love your writing style! Will you ever do a happy ending for Lara? Where she comes out on top and turns the table on her "captors". Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest LHunt Posted April 2 Report Share Posted April 2 Hey CrossroadsMk2, Just awesome as usual….hotter than a cattle branding iron. From the time Lara gets up till she goes to sleep -constant manipulation. The 15 minute shower with Sarah was a nice touch I think. You know me, anything with her BFF Sam, gives your story that special touch too. Now, Lara thinking it’s not Sam using her, then wishing it really was –cooler than three day old grits! The photo shoots, and then adding them into provocative poses were priceless as well. You rock! Lead the Way Sir! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrossroadsMk2 Posted April 3 Author Report Share Posted April 3 Hi LHunt, as always, thanks for reading and glad you liked it. I think next chapter will be some nude modelling and then the next Charity event - a fancy dress party with Lara appearing as Lady Godiva. I was going to use the black tape modelling as a way to trick Lara into public nudity, but I've decided to go in a different direction. I want the nudity to be Lara's decision. Again, Lara's instinct will be to refuse Sam's idea to do a tasteful nude shoot, but after a couple of weeks of maid work and bullying from the other maids (and Sam refusing to let her see fan comments until she agreed - so no attention or validation either), she'll agree. Then she'll do more nude shoots. When Sarah tells her about the fancy dress party and her idea for Lara's costume, Sarah can counter Lara's resistance by saying she's already done naked photo shoots, so what's the big deal? But what gets her over the line is that if she agrees to go a Lady Godiva, she can attend as a guest instead of a servant. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest LHunt Posted April 3 Report Share Posted April 3 Hey CrossroadsMk2, Yeah, when you first mentioned a while back the Lady Godiva dress up, that would be awesome and fit better. As sexy as black tape modeling is….nude is totally better. After the first time Sam denies showing Lara her fans comments, I think Lara would be more and more willing…..just to get that rush of reading what her fans are saying. To think about it, that’s the only connection to any outside communications she really has that’s positive, at least to Lara. But Sarah dressing her up as Godiva and allowing her to attend as a guests – love where that could go. I can see Lara weighing the pro’s and con’s….fucking maid duty – or reading how her nudies please her fans. Party or servant… Keep up the great work, and continue to Lead The Way! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrossroadsMk2 Posted April 5 Author Report Share Posted April 5 Hi Indubitably, sorry I missed your post somehow. In terms of happy ending for Lara, I hope none of the ends are too despairing for her. I would argue the ending to Professor Croft was a "good ending". I suppose I haven't given it much thought because endings where Lara wins out against her enemies is basically the plot to every mainstream story, so I feel like it wouldn't be adding much. That said, I'd be open to it in the future. After Voluntary Enslavement is finished, I'm going to focus on Short Stories like BDSM Raider and Bliss (still have to finish that one as well). Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest ABigFan Posted April 5 Report Share Posted April 5 Hello Cross, I enjoyed the story. I love how you amazingly pace your stories, they smoothly transition from one point to another. Loved the moment when Sam was thinking and making conclussions about Charity event and people in it. That was a brilliant touch! Highlight for me is Lara losing her inhibitions and begging to be ruined. I love when her inner whore, her true self, takes over and bursts out from the facade of a strict aristrocratic woman As always, looking forward to more to come. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrossroadsMk2 Posted April 6 Author Report Share Posted April 6 Hi ABigFan, glad you're enjoying the story and pacing. Bringing out Lara's inner whore is the direction I'm going in. At first, I was going the route of having Lara tricked into doing stuff - for example, the black tape modelling was going to feature a deliberate wardrobe malfunction. But I think it's hotter if Lara decides to do stuff - albeit it being manipulated into doing it. The nude modelling in the next chapter, for example. Lara will hold out for 2 weeks, during which time she experiences the hell of being an actual maid. Then Sam says she's convinced Sarah to give her not only the day of the shoot off, but the day after she gets a full pedicure, manicure, massage and hairwash/style - basically hours of pampering. She wants it so badly, and her fans keep begging her for more, and Sam promised the photos would be very tasteful and artistic... And so she talks herself into it. And there is our slippery slope. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest ABigFan Posted April 6 Report Share Posted April 6 Love the direction of the story. Forgot to mention that idea of her having an OF account which she knows nothing about is great. Makes Sarah earn more money from Lara. Also I love messing with woman’s hair and that was another great touch by you. Women pay so much attention to their hair and have special relationship with it so any kind of messing with hair is very degrading for a woman. I believe it was in Scandalous Adventures that men came in her hair and she was angry about it. Would love if you could use that idea more in the future. Hope my ramblings sound coherent to you Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrossroadsMk2 Posted April 7 Author Report Share Posted April 7 Hi ABigFan, I'll keep the hair idea in mind. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Extreme Posted April 8 Report Share Posted April 8 Hi Cross, I'm late but I really enjoyed the new chapter and can't wait for the next one which sounds interesting based of what you described Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrossroadsMk2 Posted April 9 Author Report Share Posted April 9 Hi Extreme, thanks for the comment. Glad you're enjoying the story so far. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest New Fan Posted April 11 Report Share Posted April 11 Great new chapter and love the direction you are taking the story. Lara begging to get stretched and ruined was a highlight. Can’t wait for the next chapter! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrossroadsMk2 Posted April 11 Author Report Share Posted April 11 Hi New Fan, welcome to the forum and thanks for the comment. I'm glad you're enjoying the direction of the story. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest LHunt Posted 11 hours ago Report Share Posted 11 hours ago Hey CrossroadsMk2, I think the hair idea copies the real games. Ever time she gets out of water, before getting ready to fuck someone up, or discover a hidden relic, she fixes her hair. Maybe, Sam can use some cum matted hair shots for her Fans at some point. Put her in a mix of bulls before the next running of the bulls somewhere in Spain. Lead the Way Sir! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrossroadsMk2 Posted 5 hours ago Author Report Share Posted 5 hours ago Hi LHunt, yeah I think the hair thing is a good idea. It'll have to wait a few chapters, until Lara is further along her sex addiction. How do you think she should react to it? Angry, annoyed, turned-on by the humiliation? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest LHunt Posted 5 hours ago Report Share Posted 5 hours ago Hey CrossroadsMk2, I think initially, both angry and so annoyed, but in her throes of passion, a super turn-on for Lara. Don’t remember how long her hair is really, but as her hair gets matted and stuck together especially close to the ends….maybe stick some strands in her mouth when being used. Lead the Way Sir! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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