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Guest Extreme

Lara can still be afraid of catching STD but that not must mean that these guys have STD she could simply dont know if these guys are healthy or not

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Hi SailorNemesis, sorry but this story will have a lame happy ending, although you still have a wolf scene to look forward to. I did promise you a custom ending for Natla's Revenge, so get your ideas together and if you want Lara to wind up as a lesbian sex slave horse fluffer (reading that part made me laugh out loud!) then I'll write it.

 

Hi Extreme, unless criminals in the USA are different to those in Australia (and I kind of doubt it), then pretty much all of them have Hepatitis A through Z, along with any other diseases you can think of. There's a reason why police down here wear gloves and safety glasses when dealing with crooks (now with COVID, they're wearing masks as well). I fully get the romanticized portrayal of criminals on TV and in movies, but the reality is somewhat less attractive: they're dirty, they're smelly (hygiene does not seem to be high on their list of priorities), most of them are drug users and a sizeable portion of those have mental health problems, and any time you go into one of their houses, it looks like a cross between Hoarders and American Pickers (sometimes with the Walking Dead thrown in). That is of course just the low level street criminals - I'm sure the higher level drug dealers driving around in Mercs and BMWs would be pretty clean, but they're hardly the sort of folks that you'd expect to be populating a small town sheriff's holding cell.

 

Just my 2 cents. I'm not trying to put anyone down and if your experience is different, then I'm not saying you're wrong. This is just my experience dealing with crooks.

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Guest Mr dead
23 hours ago, CrossroadsMk2 said:

Hi SailorNemesis, sorry but this story will have a lame happy ending, although you still have a wolf scene to look forward to. I did promise you a custom ending for Natla's Revenge, so get your ideas together and if you want Lara to wind up as a lesbian sex slave horse fluffer (reading that part made me laugh out loud!) then I'll write it.

 

Hi Extreme, unless criminals in the USA are different to those in Australia (and I kind of doubt it), then pretty much all of them have Hepatitis A through Z, along with any other diseases you can think of. There's a reason why police down here wear gloves and safety glasses when dealing with crooks (now with COVID, they're wearing masks as well). I fully get the romanticized portrayal of criminals on TV and in movies, but the reality is somewhat less attractive: they're dirty, they're smelly (hygiene does not seem to be high on their list of priorities), most of them are drug users and a sizeable portion of those have mental health problems, and any time you go into one of their houses, it looks like a cross between Hoarders and American Pickers (sometimes with the Walking Dead thrown in). That is of course just the low level street criminals - I'm sure the higher level drug dealers driving around in Mercs and BMWs would be pretty clean, but they're hardly the sort of folks that you'd expect to be populating a small town sheriff's holding cell.

 

Just my 2 cents. I'm not trying to put anyone down and if your experience is different, then I'm not saying you're wrong. This is just my experience dealing with crooks.

Ending up as lesbian sex pet that also like doing it with horses look like a pretty good ending to me, as long as she is happy with it.

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Hi Mr Dead, thanks for the comment. I think the Lara sex pet idea is probably the direction that the "Lara ends up with Sarah" ending to Natla's Revenge will play out (but I'll get more input when I'm ready to start). The plan is for 4 alternative endings, each showing Lara's life 6 months after the events in Mary's Stables: one she winds up with Sarah, one with Mary, one with Sybil and one with Natla herself. However, that won't be until after I finish Professor Croft, which probably has another 3 chapters to go.

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Guest Extreme

I was saying about criminals like serial killers, hitman, boss bodyguards or someone that is dealing with dirty job some etc i think these guys can be healthy and dont have any STD as a last resort you could write that cops gave them condoms.

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Hi Extreme, thanks for the comment. I see what you meant. I think if I were writing another version of the Takamoto Yakuza type scenario, I'd probably go with your idea, but I don't think criminals of that calibre would be in a small town police jail - I think it would mostly be drunks, drug users (and maybe some low level dealers), petty thieves etc. My intention at this stage is to go with the pornstar idea, but if Lara being passed around the underworld and used by high level criminals is an idea you'd like explored, hit me up again with some specifics when I start writing the alternate endings to Natla's Revenge. 

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Hi everyone, I hope you're all well. I'm starting on the jail gangbang and to distinguish it from the previous Fan Club gangbang, I want to make it a lot more brutal and humiliating. S&M isn't really my thing, so all i've got in mind at the moment is the kind of stuff you'd see in a hard Rocco Siffredi video: slapping, spanking, hair pulling, choking, spitting in the face and verbal abuse (Lara will also be cuffed throughout). If anyone else has any ideas, please let me know.

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Guest Mr dead
12 hours ago, CrossroadsMk2 said:

Hi everyone, I hope you're all well. I'm starting on the jail gangbang and to distinguish it from the previous Fan Club gangbang, I want to make it a lot more brutal and humiliating. S&M isn't really my thing, so all i've got in mind at the moment is the kind of stuff you'd see in a hard Rocco Siffredi video: slapping, spanking, hair pulling, choking, spitting in the face and verbal abuse (Lara will also be cuffed throughout). If anyone else has any ideas, please let me know.

On 11/23/2020 at 3:46 AM, CrossroadsMk2 said:

Hi SailorNemesis, sorry but this story will have a lame happy ending, although you still have a wolf scene to look forward to. I did promise you a custom ending for Natla's Revenge, so get your ideas together and if you want Lara to wind up as a lesbian sex slave horse fluffer (reading that part made me laugh out loud!) then I'll write it.

 

Hi Extreme, unless criminals in the USA are different to those in Australia (and I kind of doubt it), then pretty much all of them have Hepatitis A through Z, along with any other diseases you can think of. There's a reason why police down here wear gloves and safety glasses when dealing with crooks (now with COVID, they're wearing masks as well). I fully get the romanticized portrayal of criminals on TV and in movies, but the reality is somewhat less attractive: they're dirty, they're smelly (hygiene does not seem to be high on their list of priorities), most of them are drug users and a sizeable portion of those have mental health problems, and any time you go into one of their houses, it looks like a cross between Hoarders and American Pickers (sometimes with the Walking Dead thrown in). That is of course just the low level street criminals - I'm sure the higher level drug dealers driving around in Mercs and BMWs would be pretty clean, but they're hardly the sort of folks that you'd expect to be populating a small town sheriff's holding cell.

 

Just my 2 cents. I'm not trying to put anyone down and if your experience is different, then I'm not saying you're wrong. This is just my experience dealing with crooks.

Ending up as lesbian sex pet that also like doing it with horses look like a pretty good ending to me, as long as she is happy with it.

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15 hours ago, CrossroadsMk2 said:

Hi everyone, I hope you're all well. I'm starting on the jail gangbang and to distinguish it from the previous Fan Club gangbang, I want to make it a lot more brutal and humiliating. S&M isn't really my thing, so all i've got in mind at the moment is the kind of stuff you'd see in a hard Rocco Siffredi video: slapping, spanking, hair pulling, choking, spitting in the face and verbal abuse (Lara will also be cuffed throughout). If anyone else has any ideas, please let me know.

Loving the chapter already from the looks of it.

Here's my suggestion.

-gags,wax play, forced feeding/pieing,nipple piercing and last but not least-pube torture(pulls,slight burn till singe for intimidation and bullying etc.).

Let me know what you think .Enjoy

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Hi Mr Dead, thanks for the comment. I get that not every chapter will be to everyone's liking.

 

Hi Donkingkong, thanks for the suggestions. I don't think that the ones requiring props (wax play, nipple piercings) will work. They're in a jail, so I don't think the criminals would have access to that stuff, and pube torture (aside from Lara's crotch being smoothly waxed) is a bit too far out of my comfort zone.

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Guest BigOof

Like the ideas so far, wrapping up to be a good chapter it seems! Regarding the STD stuff, it is there as more of an angst theme for Lara? i.e. she has a fear she might get it but she’s not actually going to get one? Also, will Gordon find out about this as well?

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Hi BigOof, yes the STD angle will just be an angst thing for Lara - she'll worry about it initially but forget as the gangbang progresses. When she wakes up the next morning in an empty cell, naked and covered in cum, she'll have a minor panic attack until she finds out it was a setup.

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General question for everyone: 

I feel like there's a lot of pushback on the rough prison gangbang idea and the lack of "real" criminals. I could easily re-write the last few paragraphs of the previous chapter and do something else.

I could go with the stripclub idea for example, with rough criminal patrons that Lara will have to dance for on stage, flirt with and then give private lap dances with blowjobs. Higher class of criminal, so no STDs, and could perhaps end with Lara invited to a private room to dance for a mob boss and his lieutenants, with a gangbang at the conclusion.

I could even bring out characters from Lara's past (Asian strip club operated by Takamoto and the Yakuza etc). I've only just started this chapter, so it'd be easy to change if you guys would rather have a this scene instead. It depends of what you think is hotter - Lara taken against her will or Lara forced to act like she's enjoying it. Also, if you vote for strip club, tell me whether you'd prefer original characters or Takamoto.

 

I'll hold off writing until the end of the week and see what most of you vote for. Thanks.

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Guest BigOof

In my opinion, I think replacing the prison gangbang with high-class, organised crime bosses gangbang would be better (including their lieutenants etc as you said). You can still make it rough (however far you’re comfortable taking that kind of stuff) but I think it’ll add nicely to making Lara look like a cheap whore for Angelica’s pleasure. It is subjective though i.e. I would prefer reading this theme whereas I’m sure some would prefer the common criminal gangbang. 

As far as original characters or referenced past characters: no opinion here, either one would be fine by me. I’m trying to think of who else you could add on top of the Yakuza; which Italian mob did Lara run into in TR2?

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Hi BifOof, thanks for the comment. I think I agree with you: I also find it hotter when Lara has to act like a cheap whore, rather than being forced (raped). The humiliation of her having to serve men she despises with a forced smile is very appealing. I'll see what the others have to say, but this is the way I'm leaning.

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Guest iamppo

I much prefer the jail cell, it's such a  much more dirty and gritty situation for Lara to find herself in, it's somewhere in which Lara would never thought she'd find herself in. The idea of Lara having to fend for herself against the bottom of society with no escape is hot. The sexual depravity they'd be able to put her into, the limits to which they'd be able to push her, it's a masive turn on.

I'd wouldn't mind seeing her in a blacked gangbang in the jail cell, they'd call her all kinds of demeaning things as they take her white holes.

A double anal for her feom the cell mates would also be hot, and how about shoving her face down into the ground as they take her from behind, or into another cell mates ass and making her eat their buttholes. They could shove her head into the toilet or sink as they use her. And finish her off with a golden shower. Pretty extreme, not sure how comfortable you'd be with the above but I'd enjoy it if you did it. 

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Hi iamppo, thanks for the comment. The toilet stuff and rimming (unless it's lesbians) aren't really my thing, or the rape/violence if I'm being honest. I'm leaning towards the strip club idea, but I like the idea of a BBC gangbang as well, so I'm thinking either a black-owned strip club in a predominantly black neighbourhood. It'll make the men flock to Lara as something new, because all of the other strippers working will be either be black or Asian. Or an underworld strip club with lots of different criminals and at the end of the night Lara hired to entertain a black crime boss and his lieutenants in a private room.

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Guest HK-47

I really really liked the double anal and I hope there will be more of that in future chapters, otherwise I enjoyed all of the story.

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Guest SailorNemesis

Thank you very much for the custom ending, that would be great.  My idea for the set-up is that while Gordon may have money, Angelica is clever and has access to criminal contacts.  She sets him up on drug charges complete with witnesses who she has bribed or blackmailed and he gets sent to prison for 10+ years.  Lara may or may not be blackmailed into becoming Angelica’s permanent sex-slave, either to avoid Gordon going up for 25+ with more evidence or else because once he’s gone Lara is able to finally accept, at least in her heart, that she is an exhibitionist slut who really likes to be mounted by horses and being Angelica’s slave though she will never admit that.  I’ll think about the more fun specifics and get back to you.

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Guest SailorNemesis

I have a suggestion about the prison gang-bang that might make most people happy.  Keep the dirty cell and Lara taken against her will but instead of criminals, the cops can gang-bang her.  A bunch of corrupt cops are not gonna share such an amazing piece of ass with scummy crooks.  They take turns on her and maybe bring in some of their sons to lose their v-cards in the process.  That’s my thought.

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Hi SailorNemesis, sorry for any miscommunication - the custom ending will be for Natla's Revenge, not the current story. I want a happy ending or Professor Croft.

 

Hi HK-47, thanks for the comment. I'll make sure to include some double anal for you in the next chapter.

 

For everyone, I've thought about it and decided to go with the strip club angle (I feel more inspired to write it than the prison gang rape scene). Still happy to hear suggestions for specifics that people want (like HK-47's request). Thanks.

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Guest iamppo
On 11/30/2020 at 6:45 AM, CrossroadsMk2 said:

For everyone, I've thought about it and decided to go with the strip club angle (I feel more inspired to write it than the prison gang rape scene). Still happy to hear suggestions for specifics that people want (like HK-47's request). Thanks.

Not gonna lie, kinda disappointed you choosing the strip club over the jail cell but oh well. 

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