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CrossroadsMk2 - Ideas for next story

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So, I got spanked by the TOS Team for posting author's notes in the AFF chapters, so I'm finally posting a topic in the forum (AvidReader told me to do it this way, but I kept putting it off. I just hope I've posted in the right place).

 

So, I'm finishing up the last chapter of Natla's Revenge (it might end up being 2 chapters, if I can't tie up all of the loose ends), and I'm looking for general ideas for the next story, and more specifically what characters people would like to see.

 

The story will be loosely based around a comic idea from TR_FAN (The comic is on E-Hentai and is called Professor Croft and The Misogynistic Lesson).

 

The basic idea is that a 26 year old Professor Croft has been teaching at Oxford University for a couple of months.  One of her students gets some blackmail material and uses it to force Lara to engage in increasingly risky and public sexual acts.  This leads to a series of scandals that slowly ruin her precious reputation.  This results in the Dean of the University (who doesn't like her and doesn't consider her a real archaeologist) wanting to fire her for bringing the University into disrepute.  Lara is only able to keep her job by prostituting herself to the Dean, but as the number of scandals increase, so too do his sexual demands.

 

Characters decided on so far:

Davie Davis - student from Lara's archaeology class.

Professor James Harrison - Dean of the Archaeology Department

 

SailorNemesis has suggested a female character as well.  I want to include a bitchy female character to be cruel to Lara.  Do you think she should be another student or a jealous co-worker? If a co-worker, would you prefer an older female lecturer or a younger tutor?

 

I'm also interested in any other character ideas people might have.

 

Finally, I'm looking for ideas for the blackmail material.  At this stage I'm toying with either some scandalous photos, incriminating evidence that Lara plagiarized some research to get the job, or possibly Davie witnessing Lara commit a crime like a hit-run or something. Let me know if you have any other ideas.

 

Thanks,

 

CrossroadsMk2.

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I shifted this to the right thread, since you’re not looking for a story, but want to develop one, and talk about what you’ve written. This is also a terrific place to reply to reviews, since readers don’t need to be registered on the forum to reply here.

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I’m not familar with the comic you mention, but the name Davie Davis struck some old memory cells – and I wondered would the comic be based off the stories of AFF’s own porn eater, which have been up and down more times than [insert old fashioned underwear joke]?

http://members.adult-fanfiction.org/profile.php?no=1296900485&view=story&zone=games

The Misadventures of Professor Croft had a dude called Davie Davis and Lara was a Professor (and taking it back further, Davie’s name was apparantly – based on an old comment, possibly on one of the old uploads – inspired by a character called Davie from an old grey archive story called, I shit you not, “Davie and the demonic Tomb Raider”. )

If so, you might enjoy the stories! and, you know, want to credit porn eater’s OC… :p

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Personally I prefer a female as the main abuser.  Either way i expect it would be good.  My idea for a female character is a fellow professor, middle aged who joined the department before Lara and has been passed over and eclipsed due to Lara’s beauty and `grand-standing’.  This professor was a one-time lacrosse player or some such (maybe rugby since it’s England) and she is muscular, tough, a butch lesbian type.  And she has a dog.  A big male mastiff or similar breed who she plans to mate Lara with often.  As far as blackmail, Lara does not seem the sort to plagiarise, though maybe there is evidence that would make it seem like she did.  Like an obscure paper in the school records that Lara did not know about but it reads just like her doctoral thesis.  Or perhaps in order to get access to some lost relic, Lara needed to steal something from the Royal Museum and somehow the blackmailer gets proof of this.  Looking forward to it.

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Sounds cool.  As far as blackmail...I guess someone could uncover proof that Lara paid a bribe to get her professorship.  She merited the post but paid money to speed things up or some such.  Or else maybe her enemy has a diplomatic contact who obtained proof that Lara did some crime, maybe killed guards at a foreign embassy, etc.  Just some suggestions.

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Hey SailorNemesis. I've started the first chapter of Professor Croft. I've decided to go with Lara causing her own issues this time. She's going to seduce and have a taboo affair with a very well hung student (I think she deserves a fuck buddy). Her nemesis will catch them in the act and film it, and then the blackmail can begin - an escalating series of tasks that while they won't get her fired, they will be very humiliating and embarrassing and will quickly tarnish her reputation.

 

I'm probably going to ditch Chapter 9 of Natla's Revenge and leave it at the 8 Chapters for now and have it end on a cliffhanger. I'm just not feeling it at the moment. I might revisit it later, if I get some inspiration.

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Glad to see you working on a new story. Hopefully this time you have outline for the whole thing and we won’t end up with patchwork of different ideas not necessarily working well together. That being said maybe blackmailing teacher could not outright reveal her identity and pretend to help Lara find real culprit while sabotaging her efforts and recording her humiliating tasks for more leverage.

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My thoughts exactly, avR. Now I'm looking for some embarrassing things Lara could be blackmailed into doing. Here are some ideas, but I'd be keen to hear more:

(1) Lara's forced to pose for a student calendar to raise money for charity - Lara has to pose in increasingly revealing swimsuits. She's told that she'll only be one month, but then discovers that the entire calendar is of her. Even worse, she then has to sell them around the University campus.

(2) Visit to a nudist beach - Lara has to swim at a nudist beach. Several students will be tipped off and film her, with the photos end up online and all over campus.

(3) Something to do with pet play - I want Lara walked around campus on a leash, I'm just trying to think of a plausible reason to make that happen. Maybe a sorority hazing or something?

Thanks for the input.

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Maybe Lara is a new sorority supervisor and blackmailer works with sorority president.

This allows sisters to treat Lara as new pledge and haze her together with other new girls. They could even force Lara to illegally assign extra funds for sorority (more blackmail material).

Now we can have beach trip, but only new girls (and Lara) gets naked. 

Beach volleyball game - losers get back to campus in micro bikini.

Cheerleading practice - Lara is forced to take part without wearing anything underneath to small uniform.

Lara coerced to create topless version of calendar sold by sorority. They could claim its deep fake if anybody asks.

Pledges are forced to sit on paper towels, without underwear, and watch lesbian porn. Pledge with the wettest paper towel has to clean other girls.

Pet play could be part of protest against animal cruelty or some kind of "artistic" improve. But like with your previous story if you expose Lara to everybody on campus she will get expelled, 
blackmailer will lose all leverage. Game over. So either wait with it to the last chapter or maybe have Lara do it in dog mask.

 

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Too Bad about Natla final chapter, I was looking forward to that.  I hope to enjoy the new story.

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On 3/28/2020 at 6:09 AM, CrossroadsMk2 said:

Hey SailorNemesis, I will finish it later, but I'm planning on doing 3 alternate endings: one she ends up with Sarah, one with Mary and one with Sybil. I'm worried I've gone too SciFi with the age regression thing.

I’m looking forward to your alternate endings and don’t worry about the age regression being too sci-fi it works fine 

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I’ve finally finished the first chapter of The Scandalous Adventures Of Professor Croft.  Here’s a rough outline of the story:

(1)    A 26 year old Lara Croft gives up the life of tomb raiding to become an archaeology professor at a US Ivy League University.  Going through a dry patch in her love life, she has a short, illicit affair with an extremely well-hung student.  At the end of the year, the student graduates and Lara believes that she has gotten away with her indiscretion.

 

(2)    Lara receives a blackmail email, stating that they know what she was doing in her office.  The email has a link to videos, which Lara watches.  She sees that there was a hidden camera installed in the smoke detector in her office, and it captured everything.  Lara meets with her blackmailers, to find out that they are members of a campus sorority.  Lara initially thinks they want money, but they aren’t interested in money, as they’re all from wealthy backgrounds.  Instead, they want Lara to falsify her academic records and enrol a large number of sorority girls in her archaeology classes.  This will give the girls a lot of free time, and a subject credit without having to do any work.  They brag that they have done the same to other teachers, who they’ve caught having extra-marital affairs or using illegal drugs.

 

Later, one of the sorority girls does a google search and finds out that Lara is semi-famous and blackmails her into appearing in the swimsuit calendar that the sorority produces each year for charity.  Lara is told she will only appear in one month, but she becomes suspicious when she is made to model multiple different swimsuits, each more scandalous than the last, although the photographer assures her that this is only so they have more choices in editing.  Several weeks later, the calendar is released, and it’s all Lara.  Even worse, Lara is blackmailed into helping to sell the calendar around campus, while wearing one of the swimsuits.

 

(3)    Lara is called into the Deans office for a chat I’m not sure whether to make the Dean an older male or female, so looking for input.  The Dean firstly congratulates Lara for getting more female students to enrol in archaeology.  With Lara packing her classes with sorority girls, her male to female class ratio is one of the best at the University.  This praise makes Lara uncomfortable, as she knows that she’s illegally manipulating their grades.  Then she is chastised for accessing pornography on her university computer in violation of university policy.  The Dean reads the title of the videos she watched (British Anal Slut and other degrading titles) and Lara is very embarrassed.  Unable to tell the Dean the real reason she watched the video, she has to apologise and have the Dean believe that she likes watching dirty porn videos.

 

Then the Dean tells her off for modelling for a swimsuit calendar without seeking prior approval.  She is scolded for bringing the university into disrepute and is reminded that her teaching position is still probationary.  She is then told that the Dean will excuse her behaviour, if it doesn’t happen again, and if she agrees to be the new model for the Art Department’s Life Drawing Class (the previous model quit without giving notice).  Lara models naked in front of a class of students.  The poses become more and more sexualised, culminating in her being forced to use sex toys on herself, so that the students can capture the essence of passion.  Several weeks later, Lara is forced to attend the exhibition of her artwork.  She is extremely embarrassed having to talk to students, teachers and art critics while surrounded by naked drawings and paintings of herself.

 

An old friend, Lady Mary Bucksomby, is a guest at the exhibition and decides to buy the whole collection.  She announces that she plans to donate some of the pictures to the bars around the University, so that all of the teachers, students and locals can enjoy such fine artworks.  She then tells Lara that she will be donating the rest of the pictures to the pubs around Lara’s Abingdon estate.  She’ll see to it that there’s a naked picture of Lara hung above the fireplace of every pub within 20 miles of her home, so that everyone can see exactly what sort of slut she is.  Back at the University, Lara notices that all of the students and teachers are looking at her differently.

 

(4)    Another blackmail event with the Sorority.  I’m thinking something involving a kissing booth and gloryhole.  Later on, Lara will be dressed in nothing but a gimp mask to hide her identity, and lent out to some of the campus fraternities.

 

(5)    The Dean finds out that Lara has been doctoring academic results.  I see the Dean (older male or female) as being involved in the BDSM swinging lifestyle, but has recently broken up with their long-time partner.  In return for not publicly firing Lara for her indiscretions, she is blackmailed into attending a sex club with the Dean.  Lara is forced to perform sex acts with and in front of all of the club’s patrons.  Several of the club’s patrons are teachers at the University, and Lara’s reputation takes a further dive.  Everyone at the University thinks she’s a nymphomaniac.

 

(6)    Looking for another public humiliation event like the swimsuit calendar or life drawing class – something that will be deeply embarrassing for Lara, but won’t get her fired. 

 

(7)    Its summer and the end of the semester.  The sorority girls take Lara with them on their summer holiday.  One of the girl’s parents owns an enormous lake house.  There, Lara is forced to serve all of the girls sexually, going down on them and letting them fuck her with massive strap on dildos.  They dress her up like a dog, with floppy ears and a butt-plug tail and walk her around the property, making her play fetch.  One of the girls has brought a large pet dog with her and suggests that they breed Lara with it.

That’s as far as I’ve gone.  I see two parallel blackmails occurring: one with the sorority girls and one with the Dean.  I’m not sure whether to make the Dean male or female, so looking for people’s preferences on that.  I know SailorNemesis would prefer an older female, but I’m worried this might be overdoing the FemDom element, given that she’s also being blackmailed by the sorority girls.  Let me know what you think.  Thanks.

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Hi TR_FAN, I will be keeping Lara as a Countess this time - I think it makes the gossip and rumours about her misbehavior sexier. I've been following your comic and saw you updated it - I'll be looking forward to the next installment.

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Hi SailorNemesis, glad you're enjoying the story so far.

Hi Harbinger_Of_Kaos, yes I'm planning for a happier ending for this story. As per the rough plot outline above, Lara will be embarrassed and humiliated, but with remain a rich and famous aristocrat.

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Planning on having her getting tattoos as well? That was really hot on Natlas Revenge. It adds a Lot to the degraetaion.

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Hey cross, I’ve been reading since the Natla story started and had moments where I thought to share thoughts and ideas, but never felt up for taking the extra step. I do tonight with the Professor Croft concept. Your stories have both been good of course, but that’s something everyone else has said already. :P

As far as ideas, I’m partial to increasingly public humiliation scenarios. Things happening behind closed doors feel like they’re missing something. Not that behind closed doors can’t be good too of course. I’ve written my own fair share of that.

Given the background of the blackmailers, I agree with the guest avR’s idea of Lara forced to take part in cheerleading practice. What I’d add is Lara’s family crest put on a uniform made just for her. Maybe Lara donating her family crest for a new sorority position that’s very lowly and humiliating. It could be a new symbol worn by pledges, and Lara could “insist” that she get initiated like one with hazing and all because she “doesn’t feel comfortable” serving as president due to no past experiences in a sorority. Another option, she could be forced to live in the sorority, or donate her manor as the new sorority house.

Again, only ideas!

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Hi Salarta, thanks for taking the extra step and posting. Extra ideas and comments are always welcome.  I like the cheerleading practice idea and the idea of Lara having to go through hazing and initiation. I probably won't use your idea regarding her donating her manor house, as it's back in England, so I don't think it makes sense for a US college sorority. I also don't want to mess with her social status this time (she won't lose her title, estate, family crest etc.), as that was the main idea behind the last story - having Lara lose everything. I think Lara's public humiliation has more impact when she still has something to lose.

 

Going forward, I see Lara's adventures being split into 3 main categories:

(1) Public humiliations - things that everyone sees. These will necessarily have to be more tame so that she doesn't get fired from her job. Things like the Swimsuit Calendar and Cheerleading Practice.

(2) Private humiliations that her students and colleagues gossip about, feeding the rumour mill and destroying her reputation. Things like the sorority hazing would fit in here.

(3) Private humiliations. These will be the most extreme and degrading, and Lara will be in constant fear of her shameful activities being discovered. Most of the hardcore sex stuff will be here.

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That was great chapter and I’m definitely not saying that to bribe you into using rest of my ideas :P Can’t wait for next one!

If you are still going with double blackmail path dean could be middle-aged woman who always wanted to have adventures like Lara, but her strict parents forced her into more conventional career, so she secretly hates Lara for being able to achieve her dream.

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