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In a alternate universe where the Omnitrix doesn't exist and was never part of Bens life, Ben Tennyson and his family decided to move to Echo Creek Los Angeles, he also had a nasty break up with Julie in this story. Ben tries his best to get use to this new life, but when he meets a strange girl with a weird pair of scissors, things go insane real fast. He also becomes powerful as the story progresses. 

Requirements:

  • Ben also gains a harem in the story.
  • He also still part alien, but it's up to the writer which kind. (Anodite or Osmosian)
  • Marco doesn't exist in this universe, but you can add him as a female if you like.
  • Story will have sex scenes, but will be more plot centered.
  • You can add other Ben 10 girls such as Elena Validus, Jennifer Nocturn, and so on for example.
  • Tom is also female in this story (Star is Bi)
  • Girls should possibly be more busty and curvy
  • Anal is also a must.

Harem members:

  • Star Butterfly
  • Jackie Lynn Thomas
  • Janna Ordonia
  • Hekapoo
  • Fem Tom (Toma, not sure of a feminine name)
  • Elena Validus (Jenna's cousin in this AU)
  • Jennifer Nocturne
  • Kelly
  • Marca Diaz (if the writers want to add her)
  • Higgs
  • Attea (Neice of Bull-Frog)
  • Looma (possibly a demon)
  • Ester                        

Allowed:

  • 69 position
  • Analingus
  • Cunnilingus
  • Spanking and boob slapping
  • Degrading dirty talk 
  • Clothes ripping

No-nos:

  • Bashing
  • NTR
  • Blood

If you have any questions, thoughts, suggestions or would like to take this challenge up, please leave a reply or PM me.

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So, instead of aliens in this world, Earth has a secret society of magic where elves, orcs, and vampires roam? The plumbers are a society of people fighting for peace between the mundane and magical? And all the enemies ben faces are either magical, interdimensional versions of themselves or just hyperly advanced instead of aliens?

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5 hours ago, Guest Bleakerson said:

So, instead of aliens in this world, Earth has a secret society of magic where elves, orcs, and vampires roam? The plumbers are a society of people fighting for peace between the mundane and magical? And all the enemies ben faces are either magical, interdimensional versions of themselves or just hyperly advanced instead of aliens?

That's a good way to put it. 

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I can see it now:

In an alternate universe where Earth is touched by the arcane instead of the extraterestrial, Ben Tennyson along woth his cousin Gwen both learn of their harritage as all powerful Anodites, being completely made of living magic who are essentially demigods, just one step below the godly Celestines (i.e. Alien X). While Gwen had trouble accepting this fact, Ben embraced the idea of having "superpowers" and used them to fight crime. While he admitadly wasnt as well versed in the magical arts as his cousin, Ben's ability to quickly adapt to the situation as well as his tallent in shapping mana to cast powerful spells made him cappable of taking out threats like interdimentional demons, evil wizards, and world-eating eldritch abominations. He was viewed as a hero by many, but this didnt mean he got what he wanted.

Despite his efforts, along with the Plumbers (Battle Mages and abnormals races seeking for the mundain and magical to coexist) magic was still seen as a controversial subject matter. While beings like wizards and arcane creatures were accepted, they were still heavilly descriminated against, including Ben himself. This eventually caused him to lose his girlfriend, Julie, who just couldnt get passed him being what he is. He eventually closed himself off from others and his parents moved him to a place were the abnormal was much more accepted, leading to a fateful encounter with a magical princess from another dimension.

Ben's natural powers in mana manipulation would be extreamly powerful, letting him create constructs of mana like a green lantern as well as the standard hex blasts similar to DBZ ki blasts. He's also good at shapping the physical elements and energies arroubd him (water/earth/fire/air). But he still carries a spell book on him incase he needs a very specific effect to happen like dealing with spirits, reading and controlling minds, and other more "metaphysical" things. 

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4 hours ago, Guest Bleakerson said:

I can see it now:

In an alternate universe where Earth is touched by the arcane instead of the extraterestrial, Ben Tennyson along woth his cousin Gwen both learn of their harritage as all powerful Anodites, being completely made of living magic who are essentially demigods, just one step below the godly Celestines (i.e. Alien X). While Gwen had trouble accepting this fact, Ben embraced the idea of having "superpowers" and used them to fight crime. While he admitadly wasnt as well versed in the magical arts as his cousin, Ben's ability to quickly adapt to the situation as well as his tallent in shapping mana to cast powerful spells made him cappable of taking out threats like interdimentional demons, evil wizards, and world-eating eldritch abominations. He was viewed as a hero by many, but this didnt mean he got what he wanted.

Despite his efforts, along with the Plumbers (Battle Mages and abnormals races seeking for the mundain and magical to coexist) magic was still seen as a controversial subject matter. While beings like wizards and arcane creatures were accepted, they were still heavilly descriminated against, including Ben himself. This eventually caused him to lose his girlfriend, Julie, who just couldnt get passed him being what he is. He eventually closed himself off from others and his parents moved him to a place were the abnormal was much more accepted, leading to a fateful encounter with a magical princess from another dimension.

Ben's natural powers in mana manipulation would be extreamly powerful, letting him create constructs of mana like a green lantern as well as the standard hex blasts similar to DBZ ki blasts. He's also good at shapping the physical elements and energies arroubd him (water/earth/fire/air). But he still carries a spell book on him incase he needs a very specific effect to happen like dealing with spirits, reading and controlling minds, and other more "metaphysical" things. 

Really like the idea here. Could really work in the story

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19 hours ago, Rexfan12345 said:

Really like the idea here. Could really work in the story

Well, since we're fundamentally changing the character, might as well change the world to fit the mold, right? It will be fun seeing star react to the different types of magic and creatures earth has to offer.

Also, I forgot to mention that Ben can also transmute and reform earthly elements ala Fullmetal Alchemist style. But he has issues changing living matter (people, animals, plants) as it requires more focus and an innate knowledge of biology. Plus he’s had several… issues in the past when transmuting living matter caused him to nearly ruin several lives and accidentally turned Kevin into an elemental chimera. Also, Ben has become a full anodite since his human body has been destroyed several times (like in the show) and forcing him to reconstitute his body using only mana and his will (with some help from Professor Paradox). His new physical body was made from a dying tree.

Also, some character changes:

Kevin Levin/Homunculus: Artificial, golem like being capable of transmuting his body into any matter he touches. He has a small identity crisis as he tries to confirm to himself and others that he is a real person.

Vilgax/Interdimensional Devil Lord: His name feared across countless dimensions for his brutal conquests, genocides, and destruction. He’s defied those considered gods on multiple occasions, mostly for fun.

Michael Morningstar/Fallen Angel: Egotistical and power hungry, Michael was once a capable archangel who sought to use the powers of hell for his own needs. This caught the attention of his kin and he was stripped of his title and forced into the mortal world. He seeks power to stave off his impending mortality and to one day seek revenge on his brethren.

Zs’skayr/Lesser Reaper: Once a simple reaper seeking lost souls to bring to the afterlife for his master, Death, he broke protocol by consuming wayward souls to gain power and become the new aspect of death. He sees life as fundamentally hollow, and seeks to control both the living and dead by controlling the very concept of death itself.

Malware/Magitech golem: Created by using a combination of arcane magics and advanced technology by imps, Malware was designed to protect against threats until he developed a sort of brain from the CPU. This new brain made him instantly self aware and confused at everything around him and he lashed out against both his creators and all life in general.

Forever Knights/Literally the same: A band of humans who inexplicably hate anything abnormal, they use advanced technologies and some magic (hypocrites) to fight against anything seen as inhuman.

Plumbers/Battlemages: Once an inquisition made to better study magics in order to use it for humanity's own gains, they’ve since changed to a peacekeeping force for humans and demihumans as well as a shield against other threats who want to take over/destroy the world.

Khybr/Orc hunter: A hunter/merc who puts humanity in danger by bringing in monsters for him to hunt illegally. Khybr’s magics and expertise makes him essentially a terminator, and he has a new, butterfly like pray.

You get the idea, all of the characters Ben meets have a magical twist to them. Except those who actually are magical, they’re essentially the same.

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This looks fantastic,

Some ideas based on more recent star vs developments:

Malware's replacement after his breakdown was Rhombulus, and the snakes were added as a calming influence just in case. He hates him as a result and plans on assimilating him for his newer hardware.

Vilgax could be globgor's replacement, frosen away but still able to commu icate to the outside world and tribgbto areange his freedom and has gained his fearsome and mysterious reputation deapite being sealed away all this time.

HEKAPOO, high ranking officer in the magic police, interdimensional crimes division. Staffed almost entirely by her duplicates. Bit of a flirt, may or may not be a succubus. Probably the one to teach ben alchemy, but a very sink-or-swim mentor

Star, an exchange student from andother kingdom in an all-girls colledge with her friend marcia. Her parents have sent her away due to the heavy political strife of her home and attacks by the forever knights, which star knows but refuses to get her down. Star is enamoured with the idea of superheros and easy talked into it by her friends, even when they aren't trying. She was at least partially inspired by ben himself. She's attracted the attention of the forever knights unknowingly due to her nighttime heroics. Closer to ben's age in this. Considers Marcia absolutely vital to what she does and does not understand bisexulaity or her attraction to marcia. Oscar is some street musicia  who works near the colledge and occasionally gives ben advice.

Ester, a magical clone experiment or demon hybrid and leader/caretaker ot the magical homeless population. Disguises as a human girl at the relief ahelter and does most of her interaction/bonding with ben there, but runs into star more in 'monster' mode

SOME SPOLIERS

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Ms heinous, head of an anti-magic re-educayion camp under the forever knights, secretly vilgax's  and eclipsa's daughter, giving her a very different monster form

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SPOLIERS END

Ben's enthusiasm and rushong into it is the reason he lacks skill and aptitude, as gwen's taking her time and doing the homework let her ease into it and underatand better. However, ben's power is highly personalised and suited to him as a result. Maybe he could conjure 'hero' familiars as a nod to his other self?

I think julie should meet ship and through him warm up to the idea of magic and realise how wrong she was, then have a subplot of trying to apologise or work up the strength to apologise to ben. She could anonymously help him out using ship as armour ajd disguise until she does.

The story ahould be divided into the ben and star parts, to make each easier to digest and allow a bigger supporting cast.

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On 5/31/2018 at 9:19 PM, Strange_idea said:

This looks fantastic,

Some ideas based on more recent star vs developments:

Malware's replacement after his breakdown was Rhombulus, and the snakes were added as a calming influence just in case. He hates him as a result and plans on assimilating him for his newer hardware.

Vilgax could be globgor's replacement, frosen away but still able to commu icate to the outside world and tribgbto areange his freedom and has gained his fearsome and mysterious reputation deapite being sealed away all this time.

HEKAPOO, high ranking officer in the magic police, interdimensional crimes division. Staffed almost entirely by her duplicates. Bit of a flirt, may or may not be a succubus. Probably the one to teach ben alchemy, but a very sink-or-swim mentor

Star, an exchange student from andother kingdom in an all-girls colledge with her friend marcia. Her parents have sent her away due to the heavy political strife of her home and attacks by the forever knights, which star knows but refuses to get her down. Star is enamoured with the idea of superheros and easy talked into it by her friends, even when they aren't trying. She was at least partially inspired by ben himself. She's attracted the attention of the forever knights unknowingly due to her nighttime heroics. Closer to ben's age in this. Considers Marcia absolutely vital to what she does and does not understand bisexulaity or her attraction to marcia. Oscar is some street musicia  who works near the colledge and occasionally gives ben advice.

Ester, a magical clone experiment or demon hybrid and leader/caretaker ot the magical homeless population. Disguises as a human girl at the relief ahelter and does most of her interaction/bonding with ben there, but runs into star more in 'monster' mode

SOME SPOLIERS

-----------------------------------

Ms heinous, head of an anti-magic re-educayion camp under the forever knights, secretly vilgax's  and eclipsa's daughter, giving her a very different monster form

-------------------------------------

SPOLIERS END

Ben's enthusiasm and rushong into it is the reason he lacks skill and aptitude, as gwen's taking her time and doing the homework let her ease into it and underatand better. However, ben's power is highly personalised and suited to him as a result. Maybe he could conjure 'hero' familiars as a nod to his other self?

I think julie should meet ship and through him warm up to the idea of magic and realise how wrong she was, then have a subplot of trying to apologise or work up the strength to apologise to ben. She could anonymously help him out using ship as armour ajd disguise until she does.

The story ahould be divided into the ben and star parts, to make each easier to digest and allow a bigger supporting cast.

Really Interesting ideas here. I like the ideas of the Ben 10 girls being part of the universe as well.

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3 hours ago, Rexfan12345 said:

Really Interesting ideas here. I like the ideas of the Ben 10 girls being part of the universe as well.

this may seem a weird example,  but i was watching cheaper by the dozen 2, and it shows how you can pull off an absplutely massive cast, by having simeltaneous interacting narratives and using parralels and contrast to provide definition to indivuduals via context.

My idea is to have ben and star's story running parralel to each other and showing different sides to the same characters. The better you define and the more unique the characters, the larger a cast you can have. Plus, you shouldn't waste characters.

It also helps you show off the crossover from both a ben 10 and svtfoe perspective, and having unique relations between the characters. It's a more interesting harem that way

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Part of the reason they both end up with ben is that star and marcia are so affectionate people assume they're dating. (Star is ver huggy and a personal space invader, marcia is a worrier and very attebtive). Since they find this out when they're having a bit of an argument over both liking ben and feeling guilty, they realise that not only would it give them their best friend back and end the fighting, they don't mind thr dea at all, and since they both like ben as well.

They probably start the trend.

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also, attea could be buff-frog’s neice. she’s apathetic towards the whole steal-the-wand thing and treats it like a summer job due to being underwhelmed with ludo, while scheming to seize real power and that handsome ben she keeps seeing about. she’s like regular attea, but with wing ears.

not sure how she feels about star

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i thought about making the girls into replacements fr the omnitrix aliens but that seemed a bit one-note.

 

still working on charmcaster (who would fit SO well), looma and mina loveberry.

maybe charm uses a fake-wand. she could be trying to mimic the mewman royal legacy, an attempt pased down from her godfather. not all that bad a girl, just anti-mewman government. OR she’s part of a human world attempt to mimic it.

Looma…. not sure. maybe she’s a combat demon

Mina loveberry would probably have a history with the forever knights, who probably are the reason she’s so loopy

 

 

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Okay the idea isn't quite formed here yet, but i think i might have a plotline yhread, or at least the start of one. 

 

Eunice. The omnitrix avatar girl. Well, in a setting with no omnitrix theres a lot she, and only she can do. Lets say she can still switch species. Well that's an incredible tool for research, or as a weapon. Partivularly if she collects magic species too. Let's say she can still modify Dna. Well she can cure almost anything, or mayne rob someone of magic. Or GIVE them magic. She could be any of the classic aliens, or let the girls have a turn. Janna would LOVE to get a turn as ghostfreak.

So ludo would want her, vilgax would want her, the forever knights woild want her. If she's dangerous or interdimensional, officer hekapoo would want her. If humans and nonhumans are biologically incompatible, anyone with a crush on another species (such as most of ben's girls) would want her.

 

But what is she? Interdimensional contraband? A forever knight experimental weapon? A working, upgraded artificial wand? Another part game from mewni?

 

Any building on the idea would be welcome.

 

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