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Review responses for "Hot Yoga" [Phineas and Ferb]

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From DaBomb on February 18, 2017

Tease! But in a good way. Has me hard and dripping in anticipation.

As I always say, there’s no higher praise than an involuntary physiological response. :)

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Can't wait to see Jenny worship some fat cock and balls. I'd imagine she'd have to do some "convincing" of the official observer

Oh, I wouldn’t worry; Melanie’s going to be rather busy...

Thanks for the comment!

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From discord_the_lunatic on April 03, 2017

Re: chapter 2

Very good, especially the shifting perspectives, but what a stopping point.-_-

Glad you liked the shifting perspectives: I wrote about two thirds of the chapter before I realized that it really needed more sensory detail, and it couldn’t have that without different POVs, so I went back and rewrote it to make that happen.

As for the stopping point, I can never resist a cliffhanger. :)

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When will the 3rd chapter come out, im waiting every day to see if there’s more and its so good

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Another job well done.

Given your taste in reading material, I assume you've read this story http://cartoon.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600093704. Of course, if you haven't, now you can and I think you'll enjoy. Anyway, I wonder if you ever considered writing a story for Johnny Test. It would seem to feature characters you'd like and a premise you could use much like Phineas and Ferb.

 

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Just now, GeorgeGlass said:

Glad you enjoyed “Hot Yoga.”

I’ve never watched Johnny Test. It’s not still on the air, is it?

I don't believe so. It was on air some years ago, but I honestly stopped playing attention until I started reading the story I sent you.

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A few author’s notes about “Hot Yoga”:

 

I deliberately wrote it to be different from my previous Phineas and Ferb fanfics in a couple of ways:

  • It is light on plot and very heavy on porn.

  • It features only B-list characters. (Stacy is the only arguable A-lister in the bunch, but I consider her an A-minus-lister at most because she doesn't appear in every episode of P&F.)

 

Even though I wrote about a dozen Phineas and Ferb fics before this one, some of the characters in “Hot Yoga” don't appear in any of my previous stories (Dr. Hirano, Monty Monogram, Balthazar Horowitz, Melanie), and others make only brief appearances (Jenny, Coltrane).

 

This is the first time I've ever written a full-on orgy. Although I've written stories involving threesomes, or multiple couples having sex at the same time, I had never before written about a group of people who all have sex with one another in various ways and combinations. Making this work required a huge amount of outlining -- not only to keep track of who was doing what with whom, but also to time events such that characters would be ready to switch partners at the right moment.

 

Dr. Hirano has no first name in canon. I considered giving her one for the sake of this story, but given how many characters are involved, I didn't want to give readers one more thing to keep track of throughout the story. So the character is simply referred to as “Dr. Hirano” throughout.

 

I kept the ratio of male to female characters low because, given that the incense seems to induce bisexuality along with horniness, I didn't want to have to do a lot of plot-gymnastics to avoid having any guy-on-guy action. Not that I never write that sort of thing, but for whatever reason, I'm generally only comfortable writing it for furry characters. Also, judging from the people who comment on my P&F stories, the readership seems to be entirely male and mostly straight, so I don't think many people were reading “Hot Yoga” in the hope of seeing some Monty-Coltrane action, anyway.

 

That said, there was a time or two when I was writing this story when I wanted a female character to take on two or three guys at once, and I found myself muttering, “Damn it, there's not enough dicks to go around.”

 

Overall, though, I'm pretty happy with the results. I hope y'all were, too.

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Great story, why did you put the coltrane/dr hirano part in the story, because that is one of the most good things about this story, and also I have another question,  could you please, and I mean please make a sequel to this story, and just a little advice, maybe you should have more of the coltrane/dr hirano pairing than the last story, anyway, love your stories and if you can, please make a sequel to this story and keep up the good work

 

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On 11/15/2017 at 11:39 PM, Guest Star wars player 1 said:

Great story,

Thanks!

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why did you put the coltrane/dr hirano part in the story, because that is one of the most good things about this story

I wanted the story to focus on B-list characters who don’t get a lot of screen time on the show, and Dr. Hirano and Coltrane both fall into that category. Also, I kind of have a fetish for moms acting as sexual mentors for their children (some call that the “mother’s duty” fetish), and in this case, that extended to her child’s boyfriend, too. Plus, horny MILF + horny teenage boy is a good match.

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and also I have another question,  could you please, and I mean please make a sequel to this story, and just a little advice, maybe you should have more of the coltrane/dr hirano pairing than the last story, anyway, love your stories and if you can, please make a sequel to this story and keep up the good work

I have no immediate plans to write a sequel, but it’s always possible that I’ll be struck by an exciting idea for one and write it. In any case, glad you liked it.

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