CloverReef Posted July 13, 2019 Author Report Share Posted July 13, 2019 Review For The Captain’s Cabin Quote From tcr on July 12, 2019 Well... Wasn't sure what to expect from the two prompts, but I have to say, I wasn't expecting that. I loved the tiny details, like the wind billowing in the sails catching Itzcali's attention. And I have to admit the burping sex was... interesting because of the hilarity of it mixed with the seriousness. All in all, recommended. Well done as always. @Tcr Well that’s good. I didn’t want to do the burp porn in a super predictable way. It was short but I was aiming for some semblance of ambiance lol. I’m glad it was still kinda funny though, because… well, it’s fucking burp porn. Thanks for the review. Review for Dying for the Devil Quote From InvidiaRed on July 12, 2019 Cloudy with a chance of tentacles. =p @InvidiaRed Man I would have totally watched that movie till the end instead of wandering off randomly halfway through the climax if there were more tentacles in it. TY for the review! InvidiaRed 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
InvidiaRed Posted July 13, 2019 Report Share Posted July 13, 2019 1 hour ago, CloverReef said: Review For The Captain’s Cabin @Tcr Well that’s good. I didn’t want to do the burp porn in a super predictable way. It was short but I was aiming for some semblance of ambiance lol. I’m glad it was still kinda funny though, because… well, it’s fucking burp porn. Thanks for the review. Review for Dying for the Devil @InvidiaRed Man I would have totally watched that movie till the end instead of wandering off randomly halfway through the climax if there were more tentacles in it. TY for the review! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CloverReef Posted July 20, 2019 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2019 Review for Dying for the Devil Quote From SinfulWolf on July 20, 2019 Well you certainly captured the fresh out of prison feelin with Liam. It's a few little things here and there that sell it. Keep that up. The build up to the sex was pretty good, building that sexual tension right from the get go of Chapter 2. Which is great for an erotica tale. The sex itself was good as well, for those fans of M/M. Overall I'm very curious to see where and how this goes. It'll be a fun ride if your previous work is anything to go by. My only concern at the moment is that Liam turns out to be a gay shark. As i always letting people know how gay he is, to the point it consumes his character. I know it was good to set up that conflict with the father right out of the gates, and it's nice not to mince words, just one thing to watch for. @Sinfulwolf That’s a tough thing, ain’t it? Trying to capture stuff and making it consistent without overdoing it. I’m glad the prison shit is coming off as authentic enough so far, it’s kinda one of those things that I’m really into, besides pirates lol: prison, so the compliment is much appreciated! And thanks for the heads up! I’ll try to keep his gay shark thing from getting too obnoxious. Well, it’s meant to be obnoxious, but you know what I mean! TY for the review <3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CloverReef Posted July 22, 2019 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2019 Review for Trust the Dead Quote From ANON - on July 21, 2019 This started off good ! Can't wait for the next chapter. I’m so glad! I’ve been wanting to do a zombie fic forever and this one’s been nagging at me, so I’m happy its going over well so far. Thanks for the review! Quote From InvidiaRed on July 22, 2019 The cult leader looked to his cabal. "For the last time, The necronomicon is not a sex aid." And to his lasting shame his entire flock replied. "Not with that attitude its not." Before they strapped him to the sacrificial alter and the orgy commenced. @InvidiaRed Hey! No spoilers! LOL That legit made me laugh tho. TY for the review! InvidiaRed 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CloverReef Posted August 12, 2019 Author Report Share Posted August 12, 2019 For Trust the Dead Quote From SinfulWolf on August 02, 2019 Good and dark start as usual. Love the profanity that ladens your stories, makes the characters feel more grounded. More human. Mannie seems a good character to follow, but I'm unsure about Adam as it stands. He seems... very stalkery. We shall see won't we? That ending was good. Love that dread when you call 911 and there's no response. I know it's slightly tropey, but damn is it dread inducing. Especially in the characters. Sure fire way to say "Shit has hit the damn fan". Looking forward to seeing more from this one. Looks like its gunna be a gory one too. @Sinfulwolf A little bit of approval of my profanity is going to make a monster out of me, I hope you realise, because that means fucking everything, lol. I’m so glad you enjoyed this first chapter. It’s a genre I love soooo goddamn much, and I’m actually pretty proud of this atm. Thank you so much for the review <3 Sinfulwolf 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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