AlexisRiddle Posted March 2, 2016 Report Share Posted March 2, 2016 Hey everyone I'm looking for beta readers to go over a long-term story as I write it - set in a Pokemon AU. It will have a decently substantial plot and the naughty bits will focus on Futa/Female or Futa/Futa relations, and will occasionally contain furry characters. It will also contain incest - just a fair warning to those of you who might be squeamish about that. The world will be quite a deviation from the regular pokemon universe; All pokemon will be represented as anthropomorphic versions of themselves and treated as equals (not caught in balls), and humans will share the same powers that were once exclusive to pokemon. In other words, humans will also have types - like fire or steel - that will allow them to shoot fireballs or create metal barriers. While I'm more than open to receiving any willing beta, those who feel confident in giving feedback concerning the characters and plot, and not solely the technical aspects, will be especially appreciated. And while feedback centered around what I can improve upon is paramount, I also would like betas who can identify what my strengths are. I'll post the first (very short) entry of the story below so you can get a gist of my writing. Please let me know if you have any questions, and thanks for reading this! Toodles! https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_lG3-ylqZ342tBZtD7jzsDThruM4rrGy5CLikoCZWjU/edit?usp=sharing Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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