Kage Sexbomb Review Responses

[SniperJoe]

I assume this is where I put this.

Right into it, I will adress the reviewer questions and observations in a general sense.

It's nice to see a story where it's not Sasuke cuckolding Naruto

A large reason behind the story was this. Sasuke and Kiba, for whatever reason, are seen as the characters to commit adultry. But I like the fetish and I prefer Naruto to be the protagonist, so putting those together I saw no reason not to write the story. It just means you need more of an excuse, but that's what writing is about.

I admit I have a bit of a prejudice against Sasuke. Rather, I don't see what the appeal is. But making fun of Sasuke isn't a particular objective, even though it probably seems that way. But someone had to be cuckolded, and he really is the perfect choice.

I'm eager for Temari/Tenten/ect to come in.

In terms of characters to come in, the story is a catch-all for the fetishes and pairings I wanted to vent. Ino's there because the saku/ino/naru triangle just feels so perfect. Rivalry and similar positions. Perfect. Then Hina because she's hinata.

Right now I don't have concrete plans for different characters.

I do want to cover the Inazuka sometime, just because it's so simple and easy with this story.

I have plans for Kurenai, more Anko, Temari, and I could also do Sarada. If I do sarada, i'll put a warning lable.

I can also easily do OC's. I think there is untapped potential in just saying 'x inazuka' because you can modify an archetype very easily.

Do I intend to follow up the Hyuuga chapters?

I loosly intend to follow up with it in some way. I left it so that I could revisit the theme if the fancy struck me. So in other words, if I wanted to do something Hyuuga, I can just go back to that area.

Edited December 7, 2015 by SniperJoe

[Guest Fullbuster]

Your story is gone form aff you gotta do something about is please

[Guest naruto17]

i really love your story.

cuckold humiliation is my favorite fetish.

i really hope you pour on the humiliation with the husbands. sai seems like the perfect cuckold.

hope you add karui as well. black girls are the best!

also tsunade. that way the uzumaki will have dominated the uchiha and the senju.

[Guest naruto17]

how closely are you following the canon timeline?

as in is anko still fat? (i would assume not because of chapter 1)

which children have been born? like Ino and Sai's son.

and do bolt and himiwari know their dad is a manwhore?

[antt]

Your Story is not available atm on aff

[SniperJoe]

Okay so, the story may not get updated for a while.

Let's see.

Continuity? What about x from cannon? Basically, as long as it's hot I'll keep it. If cannon gets in the way, I discard it. The same problem came to me with Bolt. I struggled with how to reconcile Naruto's harem lifestyle with having a male child. Until I just thought 'eh, let's pretend there's no bolt.'

It's a story where everything is decided based on the porn. It's also why the chapters are out of order. The timeline is back and forth but it's a natural progression in regards to the porn. When there's been so much of a scene that it might get stale, we switch scenes. New conquest chapter, old conquest chapter. There's been an overload of dom sex, we throw in the tsunade chapter as a breather.

I don't know anything about Anko being fat. But it's not hot unless Naruto's knocked her up, so I'll ignore it.

Karui! Other characters! Also, the movie princesses!

I'm interested in Karui as well. But laying out the scene has been hard. I don't know anything compelling about the character, and I don't want it to be bland.

I really want to cuckold the Raikage, since there's a lot of raikage in hentai and stories now. Tit for Tat, let's cuckold the Raikage. So I was thinking of something like between Naruto, Karui, Choji, and the Raikage.

Or I would otherwise have to make up a wife for the Raikage, literally just so I could cuckold him over it.

I never really nailed the idea down.

As for other characters, of course there's Shizune, Kurenai, Temari, Tenten, Himawari, Ino's daughter (I know she has no daughter. But fuck that). And the mizukage. So there's a ton.

One that has never, ever been called out, which I always considered a candidate for chapters, was Karin.

I could also do time travel at some point, for Kushina and Sasuke's mom. Maybe the Shodaime's wife. I could also do young Naruto rewriting the anime with just getting all the girls.

So the ideas are endless. That's why I say that the story can go on forever, until I run out of not reviews.

[Guest naruto17]

all those ideas sound awesome.

for raikage you could say he got married to mabui, mizukage, or samui.

time traveling for kushina and mikoto sounds cool.

i also really love your idea of a younger naruto and rewriting canon. you could make a whole spinoff story with that idea.

older naruto teaching younger naruto all he knows and then wishing him luck.

[Neo_Shepard]

I’d like to see some Haku or Tayuya action as well.

Keep up the awesome work and I can’t wait for more chapters!

[Guest Sniper Joe]

I’m back.

 

Things I’m noticing right now the most from reviews would be: A desire for tenten?

Well I don’t have any particular ideas on how to do tenten though.

I mean I have a few of course but it’s hard to say any of them stand out.

[SniperJoe]

 

Reviews that stand out as needing a response for chapter 17

 

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From Zephyr_Fauchelevent on May 13, 2018
 

Well I'm glad to say that Slut Ino is really entertining! The scene where she all but shout that she's cheating on her husband and calling herself a slut was the hotest thing in the chapter. I'd suggest having Naruto claiming a girl he can pass around for favours like in those corrupt politic offices, but he's not the sharing type. As for suggestions of other girls, maybe those other Daimyos he saved like Haruna from Vegetable Country and Toki from Bird Country and the Priestess Shion from Demon Country and even the medic Amaru from the second movie.

I don’t know much about the movie girls other than Spring Country Girl

I’m glad Ino is being well recieved as I really did feel I might be overdoing it. I intend another Ino chapter soon so it’s a little nuts

The girl he could pass around would be, I think, Anko. But my heart is split right now on the issue for the reason you state.

 

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From suikofan on May 10, 2018
 

Love the story. Hoping for a chapter where on a important mission Naruto underminds and belittles Kurenai in front of the client.

That’s specific. I’m not sure what the background would be but I guess the point is to take Kurenai down a peg?

 

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From kakashihatake.7799 on May 10, 2018
 

As always another awesome chapter and another heart felt thanks from another fan!

after the long break b/w chapter 13 and 14 things are looking good for Kage Sexbomb again. Though I love the way you are handling Ino ( my first anime crush) I just wanted to make a suggestion and post in a few important names.

Please consider doing Tenten, Temari and Kurenai. I know you already have Anko and Shizune along with Tsunade to write about, but please do consider these names as well.

cheers!  

I’ll look into it. I’m not too hot on Temari, but enough people have pointed me that way that I’m thinking about her now and then.

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From zerowj on May 10, 2018
 

do you plan on adding tenten soon or a kunoichi from another village like temari kurosutchi or one of the girls from kumo?

Tenten soon-ish I think. Temari not sure when/if. I need an angle. Every girl should have a distinct role.

 

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From Ana72 on May 09, 2018
 

Damn, Naruto just keeps on breaking Ino's mind over and over again to the point where she's just speaking random nonsense. And hinata, sakura, and that stranger lady are just watching it all go down lol. Nice chapter my dude 

Deeply appreciated

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From TheJusticeFriends on May 09, 2018
 

Are you seriously anxious about including more Ino? Helllllll no! It’s hot as hell! I want more! Maybe even a pregnancy involved. I’m assuming he’s already impregnated tsunade, which by the way you need to include in the present chapters and not just the past ones, so what’s stopping him from spawning a few (read many, many, many) kids with his girls?

 

although I will point out that at the beginning there were quite a few typos and missing words, so I’m the essence of giving criticism please take more time. As much as I want these chapters every day (which I know is impossible to ask of you) I don’t want the disconnect when i’m in the middle of reading and have to re-read a line 3 times to see what it really meant. Other than that, keep em coming!

Thanks. I fixed what stood out to me early thanks to you.

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I like the fact that you like Ino so much in this story. By all means, please don't stop including her in future chapters after you're done with the 'Onsen' chapters. 

Yeah she’s become main character material.

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From Lou on May 09, 2018
 

For the love of god do a Tenten

I’ll look into it.

Edited May 13, 2018 by SniperJoe

[Hanmac]

I don't know if that fit into this but I would like to see more with Sarada. Or with a flashback where Naruto is doing it with Sakura while she is pregnant with Sarada.

Or can there be scenes with Naruto x Kushina outside of dream?

Don't know if they fit but can there be Tayuya or Naruko too?

[SniperJoe]

On 6/5/2018 at 5:29 AM, Hanmac said:

I don't know if that fit into this but I would like to see more with Sarada. Or with a flashback where Naruto is doing it with Sakura while she is pregnant with Sarada.

Or can there be scenes with Naruto x Kushina outside of dream?

Don't know if they fit but can there be Tayuya or Naruko too?

1. Yes, the sakura and sarada stuff is planned. After the Onsen chapters get to a certain point. Also the Kushina stuff is more of a focus right now. But the Sarada stuff will be picked up
2. Outside the dream, it’s planned. But I’m not sure if the story will run long enough for that to come out.
3. I’m not big on Naruko myself. Tayuya I always thought was hot and interesting, but she’s not high on my list right now.

[Guest Hex]

It would be such a pity if you were to cancel this. You have managed to create a complex interlaced story the likes of which are rarely seen, although I am not a fan of your Kunisha chapters, they tie in well to create a strong story. Furthermore, your Sarada and Aftermath chapters have, in my opinion, the greatest potential now that the Onsen chapters have reached a natural ending point.  

[Guest Hex]

Out of curiosity, have you considered other Boruto characters? A perfect one would be, Wasabi Izuno, she has characteristics that would fit into the whole domination and submission theme of your writing. furthermore, unlike the Inuzuka (Dog) the jutsu the Izuno uses is more cat-like and opens further avenues of domination, personally a tsundere sex slave addicted to Naruto and his scent would both be hilarious (as she could steal his clothes and smell them, stalk him) and really really hot, who knows, maybe Naruto will collar this kitty. It could also tie into the Sarada chapters. Or Hanabi (If you use the anime) could be tied in as the Sensei of Team 15. 

[Guest Frank]

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[Guest brasheril_holmestalentsmas]

Hi,

I left a review for each chapter of your story, I hope you take a look at each of them with a gentle eye.

I hope you can take something good from them.

Keep up the good work and stay safe.

Over and out.