mannahpierce Posted November 18, 2015 Report Share Posted November 18, 2015 I am onto my third book and I am desperate for some feedback on my latest chapters. Book One, Cast Adrift, and Book Two, Foothold, have been published. I am paying for editorial services. What I need is feedback about stuff like: Can you imagine the scene? Do you believe what the characters are doing and saying? Are the emotional messages too muted? Are there parts of the writing where you are 'thrown out' of the story? I have had two people doing a great job but one is a bit tied up and the other has fallen silent. I do need someone (or more than one person) who can reply within days rather than weeks. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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