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Willow Gangbang BtVS Challenge

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Hey,

I recently stumbled over an story from 'Forgotten Concience' called 'Willow Group' which was nice but first person and many spelling/grammar errors bugged me a bit.

In this story Willow gets lured to a party by Percy. The party solely consist of men... and Willow (which of course she doesn't know beforehand)

Wasn't a rape or 'retroactive consensuality' story. After some convincing she goes along. Simple porn story. Minor plot

So here's the challenge:

Should involve:

+ Rating : NC17/Adult++/FR21/Fiction MA etc

+ Warnings: Gangbang/DP/tripleP/deepthroat/facefuck (as in balls slapping in face etc)/cumbath/dirty talk/light humiliation(like slap on ass, calling her a slut, recording it on film and selling it on school campus etc.)/ cock whiping (as in cock = whip, don't know if there's a common therm)/anal/gaping holes/rimming/pussy licking/sex-toys/everything else you pick up from the average porn clip a few mouse clicks away...

+ Pairing: Willow / At least 25 men or more (species doesn't matter but should appear human), no chicks

+ Plot: If anybody can come up with something to this very profound challenge, he or she is more than welcome. But it should be more than the clip 'Worst porn dialogue ever' implies(can be found among others on liveleak.com, don't worry nothing bad in there). I think this is the main challenge here

+ Should play in BtVS S03 or S04

+ Third Person!

+ no rape (at least not the physical force variation)

+ no heavy BDSM

+ the act itself should be very detailed (several thousand words, better more). After all, she gets screwed by 25+ men; that takes time

+ Willow should be in character as much as possible (hah!)

IF I could write, I would write it myself and not making this challenge. But I could make it a threat when nobody writes something, I do it myself and you'll see what I mean :eyebrow:

This challenge is very blunt but serious. If somebody writes something I'll be very grateful.

Cheers

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Doing this story, while coming up with a plot and keeping Willow as much in character as possible, and keeping it cons, really appeals to me.

I think I could only fit it in to the two bits where Willow was very low over her relationship with Oz, ie after the Lovers Walk reveal of her kissing Xander or after he left in S4 (can't recall the episode name). Once she had come to identify as a lesbian and stop lusting after men (except maybe Giles plus guitar) I don't think I could make it work within the terms of the challenge.

I'm not available to take the challenge right now but I guess this is expressing an interest if nobody else gets it done. There may be the odd typo if I pick it up, but no first person.

I read the new challenge forum rules and I don't think this post is against them, but if so then ban/delete etc etc and I'll take it in my customary good humor.

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Doing this story, while coming up with a plot and keeping Willow as much in character as possible, and keeping it cons, really appeals to me.

I think I could only fit it in to the two bits where Willow was very low over her relationship with Oz, ie after the Lovers Walk reveal of her kissing Xander or after he left in S4 (can't recall the episode name). Once she had come to identify as a lesbian and stop lusting after men (except maybe Giles plus guitar) I don't think I could make it work within the terms of the challenge.

I'm not available to take the challenge right now but I guess this is expressing an interest if nobody else gets it done. There may be the odd typo if I pick it up, but no first person.

I read the new challenge forum rules and I don't think this post is against them, but if so then ban/delete etc etc and I'll take it in my customary good humor.

Hi,

read your story 'Pleasurable Evil' and spelling is okay. Also liked your style even though the plot was a bit morbid for my taste. No offense. I'm definetely intrigrued if you decide to write something. As for cons: just no physical force; passive aggression, drugging etc. is permitted but not requiered.

Cheers

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That was a request fic! I've done a few requests - I don't have to kill off all the characters. Nobody died in my other Buffy story :)

As I said, busy right now but I will keep it in mind and post an update here if I get going on it - I've already been thinking over plot, and descriptive passages that would fit, plus possible dialogue.

"Nobody's a demon here!"

"Hey!"

"Oh, except Demon Jerry. But only on his mother's side. You wouldn't know to look at him."

Perhaps if I do manage to get it done you'd be willing to check the spelling before posting so I can fix any howlers?

In the meantime, I hope someone else takes on the request as it could only benefit from different authors' approaches.

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Sorry, I didn't noticed that it was an accomplished request. I read your other story and left a review.

Your dialog sample is promising :)

I can proofread the story if you like, though I think I'm only qualified to recognize typos or simpler grammar flaws due to being no native speaker. Like if you'd accidentally switch from past into present or confuse punctuation marks etc. And hey... I'd have the honor to be the first reader.

I quote this: 'In the meantime, I hope someone else takes on the request as it could only benefit from different authors' approaches.'

Good Luck!

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Alrighty, I've been real busy but now hoping to start some prep for this soon. As this is the request thread I'll put further thoughts comments for my attempt in my Buffy writers thread - I figure I might need some more detail on what you like.

http://www2.adult-fanfiction.org/forum/index.php/topic/18175-jaydees-review-reply-thread-buffy-subdomain/

And then, as you say, anybody else can take a shot at it too or express interest etc below this post.

Edited by JayDee

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Hi all, Just wanted to throw out there that it’s now looking unlikely that I’ll be able to finish this request due mostly to time passed and my lack of writing time.

I’m very sorry to Julpups, especially and they provided a lot of extra detail and info and took time to work on thrashing it out with me. Should anybody else wish to take this idea up for them and wanted to use anything I’d suggested/put in, please feel free.

I hope to one day manage something on a smaller scale with a Willow gangbang and hope that someone else still takes the story up and writes it as Julpups envisaged.

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These are sad news but I respect and understand your decision which had loomed ahead for quite some time anyway. It’s very decent of you to drop this statement. Thanks, anyway, for our talks. They were fun! And you know, when your time, passion and muse should come back… – I’m already too old to grow out of this kink anyway. 

3 hours ago, JayDee said:

I hope to one day manage something on a smaller scale with a Willow gangbang

You mean 20 instead of 30 guys? :angel:

3 hours ago, JayDee said:

and hope that someone else still takes the story up and writes it as Julpups envisaged.

You’ve heard it, folks. Come, all of you talented porn fanfic writers and regale me for no money but lots of prestige! Consider this challenge timeless, active and topical. 

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