NecroNOMNOMicon Posted June 11, 2015 Report Share Posted June 11, 2015 Hello, this is where I will address reviews and comments regarding my story "What Is Bugging Her?" which was written in response to the AFF Forum’s biweekly prompts 31 May 2015 No. 217: fatuous, fame, faerie Here is the info: Story Link: http://cartoon.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600094749 Type of fic: Drabble, 100 words exactly! Rating: Adult+ Fandom: Peter Pan Pairings: Peter/Tinkerbell, Peter/Wendy (sort of...) Warnings: Beastiality When I mention the pairings, well... this story doesn't so much contain them as it is about those pairings. Well, you'll see... All reviews/comments welcome! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NecroNOMNOMicon Posted June 12, 2015 Author Report Share Posted June 12, 2015 Well, the story is getting some hits, and now the reviews are starting to trickle in. The honor of the first comment goes to registered member SailorNemesis: SailorNemesis 2015-06-12 id # 3000070622 TERRIBLE. Nemesis is a Sailor of few words... and gets right to the point. Sorry you didn't care for the story (okay, okay, you hated it!), but thanks for reading and taking the time to share your feelings. -NecroNOMNOMicon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NecroNOMNOMicon Posted June 12, 2015 Author Report Share Posted June 12, 2015 (edited) Now comes word from frequent contributor JayDee: JayDee 2015-06-12 id # 3000070624 "“Now, fuck me till your carapace cracks!” surely the one line I never expected to read in porn. I guess Spiders get most of the porn action and poor old Beetles don't get any! The Catapiller's brief line actually gave me a mental image of the opium fiend from Alice! I think she may have misunderstood the idea of revenge porn, but what the hell, it's a great mental image. Well, it just so happens that among Neverland beetles, it is perfectly acceptable to refer to the creature's exoskeleton as a carapace -- just as it is with some species of beetle here on Earth. Yes, it appears that willful little Tink didn't quite grasp our idea of revenge porn... I was imagining that she was very frustrated that Peter did not see her as a sexual being and she wanted to demonstrate otherwise, but perhaps she could have chosen a more suitable partner. She was probably just thinking how cool it would look in video... -NecroNOMNOMicon Edited June 12, 2015 by NecroNOMNOMicon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JayDee Posted June 12, 2015 Report Share Posted June 12, 2015 She's barking up the wrong tree there! He'll never grow up. Or if he does, it's as Robin Williams. No, it's Hook she ought to get in with. The man! The legend! Captain James Hook! ...I'll go now. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NecroNOMNOMicon Posted June 12, 2015 Author Report Share Posted June 12, 2015 She's barking up the wrong tree there! He'll never grow up. Or if he does, it's as Robin Williams. No, it's Hook she ought to get in with. The man! The legend! Captain James Hook! I understand that Hook is very popular among the ladies of fandom... I guess he's a classic Bad Boy! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NecroNOMNOMicon Posted June 16, 2015 Author Report Share Posted June 16, 2015 Here's a nice comment... BronxWench 2015-06-15 id # 3000070631 Well, this certainly puts Tinkerbell in a whole new light, or spotlight, as it were. I have a feeling that her command to the beetle is going to have me chuckling for days, although her revenge might not have quite the effect she was hoping for... Well done! Yeah, the general feeling is that Tink will not elicit the response she was hoping for from Peter. I did some reseach into the character, and it seemed to me that Tink was originally very headstrong and jealous and seemed to resent Wendy, She also didn't really think things all the way through. And apparently she doesn't quite grasp the idea of revenge porn! Thanks for reading and liking! -NecroNOMNOMicon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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