KoKoa_B Posted April 13, 2015 Report Share Posted April 13, 2015 Hi there! Can I be honest with you? No? Oh, well; it's gonna happen, anyway! I'm a bit on the tipsy side and decided to post a story that I know needs some work! So, here is the thread to discuss that story: Sunflower. As of now, it's only a oneshot but if you read my author's note, you will know that I may have plans on making it into a longer story. Anyway; go ahead and discuss if you like! As always, concrit and feedback is especially wanted! http://comics.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600061320 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CL Mustafic Posted April 13, 2015 Report Share Posted April 13, 2015 I read it and I think as far as PWP goes it was well written. Of course I needed to look up your martian, he's green! For some reason that made me laugh... KoKoa_B 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
magusfang Posted April 13, 2015 Report Share Posted April 13, 2015 I read it and I think as far as PWP goes it was well written. Of course I needed to look up your martian, he's green! For some reason that made me laugh... LOL, but he's supposed to be green, Kokoa went old school with the little green men! And CL is right, it wasn't badly written, it just doesn't have any plot...but so what... But what is the wifey martian up to, playing a tune on her extraterrestrial squeeze box...this whole voyer thing normal or are they just kinky martians? Things like this keep me awake at night...mainly because I'm insane KoKoa_B 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KoKoa_B Posted April 13, 2015 Author Report Share Posted April 13, 2015 Ah... now that I'm sober, I see that some clarification is needed! LOL Tabitha is in no shape or form a Martian. She's 100% human. She has lightning abilities but that really wasn't important to dwell on in this fic! I got a bit more plans for this that will explain further why Tabitha wanted the two to have each other... besides the fact that she's just a kinky horndog! I think maybe two more chapters and I can just chalk this up as a very short story! Anyway; thanks guys for reading that! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KoKoa_B Posted September 18, 2015 Author Report Share Posted September 18, 2015 Dat was hawt Tahn: ... thanks... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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