Ferestor Posted July 7, 2014 Report Share Posted July 7, 2014 Hey guys/girls, I'm from Germany and I would like to post a part of my German-Stories on English. There for I need someone who would read my Story, who speaks English and tell me, if the Story is readable. I don't need Tips for the Stroyline, but critic is welcomed. the Story is about Naruto who is feral and creates his own pack. This is a Harem Story with a storyline and lemons, no Yaoi. I really hope someone will help me, otherwise I must use google translator. :help: Greetings Ferestor Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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