Rescue25 Posted July 19, 2015 Report Share Posted July 19, 2015 DA Why don't you get your own either by getting him to post another chapter OR posting a nice long CH2 of your own? B Flexy68 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
magusfang Posted July 19, 2015 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2015 I've been trying but Max and crew are not cooperating...thats right I just passed the buck to make believe people Rescue25 and Flexy68 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MajorMarioc Posted July 19, 2015 Report Share Posted July 19, 2015 Yay gold star 😊 Flexy68 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sniper014 Posted July 19, 2015 Report Share Posted July 19, 2015 Major liked your gold star. Really neat looking. Keep up the great work of walking again. I am getting a little better. Was able to mow the front yard today and one side of the house before my right leg started hurting so bad that my wife made me stop and quit for the day. Guess she really does love me even if she said that if I was to do something stupid like getting injured again at my age she was going to make sure that it would be a long time before I was able to walk straight again. So since I know she really loves me I not only give her a gold star but also a silver one also. Like I said keep up the walking and hope you have a speedy recovery. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Missyg Posted July 19, 2015 Report Share Posted July 19, 2015 Ok, I just dropped in to have a quick look around and I have a quick question. Why have you disrespected Suzi and Becca by naming Max's and Nadi's son Tommy. That was the name of Becca's father. Is it because you have so many characters that you use for fillers that you can't remember who is who? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BigMan7307 Posted July 19, 2015 Report Share Posted July 19, 2015 Ok, I just dropped in to have a quick look around and I have a quick question. Why have you disrespected Suzi and Becca by naming Max's and Nadi's son Tommy. That was the name of Becca's father. Is it because you have so many characters that you use for fillers that you can't remember who is who? Mr Wu was Thomas.... not Tommy. Could have always named it Max Jr. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darthel0101 Posted July 19, 2015 Report Share Posted July 19, 2015 Magus, Email sent via The Pub. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
magusfang Posted July 20, 2015 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2015 Ok, I just dropped in to have a quick look around and I have a quick question. Why have you disrespected Suzi and Becca by naming Max's and Nadi's son Tommy. That was the name of Becca's father. Is it because you have so many characters that you use for fillers that you can't remember who is who? Oh shit! It was supposed to be Timmothy, crap....ok, I'll fix that but for now when you see Tommy, it should read Timmy... Sniper014 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gamascal@gmail.com Posted July 20, 2015 Report Share Posted July 20, 2015 Oh shit! It was supposed to be Timmothy, crap....ok, I'll fix that but for now when you see Tommy, it should read Timmy... Timmy indeed!!! I wonder if Legion showed his capabilities too quick! I am also wondering if Max can do anything about it because what Legion did was something that Max would think before doing and, they are all full of nanites. Suppose one of them did something that Legion did not like, KABOOM??? Don't like that Legion just went off and kill the SG that was invading the hacienda. But, maybe Max programmed him to do that. Don't know! This is too much guessing now. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
that-one-guy Posted July 20, 2015 Report Share Posted July 20, 2015 Timmy indeed!!! I wonder if Legion showed his capabilities too quick! I am also wondering if Max can do anything about it because what Legion did was something that Max would think before doing and, they are all full of nanites. Suppose one of them did something that Legion did not like, KABOOM??? Don't like that Legion just went off and kill the SG that was invading the hacienda. But, maybe Max programmed him to do that. Don't know! This is too much guessing now. Since he died this early on, I seriously doubt the grey haired man was really in charge. Illuminati? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gamascal@gmail.com Posted July 20, 2015 Report Share Posted July 20, 2015 That was a hint Magus Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
magusfang Posted July 20, 2015 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2015 (edited) Masons Or, gasp, Templars! Edited July 20, 2015 by magusfang Flexy68 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rescue25 Posted July 20, 2015 Report Share Posted July 20, 2015 The major already said he needed to contact "control". Obviously "they" are a small group of a larger organization. B Flexy68 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DirtyAngel Posted July 20, 2015 Report Share Posted July 20, 2015 So Max lays waste to the eastern seaboard and becomes emperor of the united states and renames it wallyfworld after his favorite chevy chase movie Flexy68 and COJimmyV 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crazychickhull Posted July 21, 2015 Report Share Posted July 21, 2015 I haven't commented for a while soooo here's me commenting. Flexy68 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rescue25 Posted July 21, 2015 Report Share Posted July 21, 2015 So Max lays waste to the eastern seaboard and becomes emperor of the united states and renames it wallyfworld after his favorite chevy chase movie So very unMax like. Come in DA let's have another chapter either his or yours. B COJimmyV and Flexy68 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
magusfang Posted July 22, 2015 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2015 Sorry its taking so long but I have a real World project monopolizing my time, as well as a budding writer who has my ear. I have most of the chapter written, just trying to piece the end together so it shouldn't be much longer. Thanks for your patience. Flexy68 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darthel0101 Posted July 22, 2015 Report Share Posted July 22, 2015 a budding writer who has my ear. Are you sure about the part of your anatomy in her grasp? Flexy68 and Rescue25 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DirtyAngel Posted July 22, 2015 Report Share Posted July 22, 2015 Are you sure about the part of your anatomy in her grasp? It changes periodically COJimmyV, Flexy68 and Rescue25 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joe Long Posted July 22, 2015 Report Share Posted July 22, 2015 and that's magus on the bottom? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DirtyAngel Posted July 22, 2015 Report Share Posted July 22, 2015 Ha ha...nope, I'lll never tall who that is but it looks like she'll be earning her wings soon Rescue25, COJimmyV and Flexy68 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rescue25 Posted July 22, 2015 Report Share Posted July 22, 2015 @DA I like your new graphics. Now let him go long enough to get a new chapter posted. B darthel0101 and Flexy68 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rescue25 Posted July 22, 2015 Report Share Posted July 22, 2015 I think your original title was probably more in line with the story. Snakes vs shadows. B Flexy68 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BigMan7307 Posted July 23, 2015 Report Share Posted July 23, 2015 Don't like that Legion just went off and kill the SG that was invading the hacienda. But, maybe Max programmed him to do that. Keep in mind that Legion is sentient now... capable of going against what it's programing is. Just like Alice can make her own decisions. How many times in a fit of rage has a person done something that they normally wouldn't do? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gamascal@gmail.com Posted July 23, 2015 Report Share Posted July 23, 2015 Keep in mind that Legion is sentient now... capable of going against what it's programing is. Just like Alice can make her own decisions. How many times in a fit of rage has a person done something that they normally wouldn't do? But, do you think that Max would create something that he has absolutely no control of in the final analysis? There must be some sort of destruct switch, at least I think there should be. These things are too dangerous not to have one. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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