Flexy68 Posted July 6, 2015 Report Share Posted July 6, 2015 Well you certainly have NOT lost your touch with the cliffhangers!!!!! Good grief Man!!! What the holy heck???? I sure hope you're NOT planning on disappearing on us again anytime soon!!!!!! Rescue25 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
magusfang Posted July 6, 2015 Author Report Share Posted July 6, 2015 told you it was gonna be messy Not over yet Rescue25 and Flexy68 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rescue25 Posted July 6, 2015 Report Share Posted July 6, 2015 OK some hope here. engulfed his seemingly dead girlfriend then continued to flow towards the wild eyed and terrified men. Oh no, didn't I tell you Max dies...oops thats in chapter 9...just kidding Really hope so. He's artificial enough already. B Flexy68 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gamascal@gmail.com Posted July 6, 2015 Report Share Posted July 6, 2015 Too much mechanical people are "self aware" and not doing their jobs! Everyone around them having sex and that is affecting their usefulness and effectiveness. I thought that this building, or whatever it is, was secure but it seems not to be. Why the hell did Max have to go and save, if he could, Joanna. He should have interrogated the SG guys that were captured a long ago. He would gotten some measure of the man and what he was capable of! It is probably a good thing that some of them left otherwise quite a lot more would be dead. Thank you for that Magus. Rick used to work with these guys he should have insisted that Max interrogated the prisoners. They have been there long enough! The place is not as secure as everyone thinks. Ok enough with the complaints. I do not think that all the people shot are dead because of Legion and the nanites. The love of Legion's life was shot and I want to see what he is going to do. Alice seems to have been taken so Max, and Amy, will be on the warpath. Why did they not think that an attack could come from the sea. After all, that is how he left on his excursions! If they can use the satellites the the bad guys can use them too which they have been doing a lot longer than Max and Alice! Ok Magus, you have wet my appetite for the next chapter which, I hope, will be along one to deal with the happenings in Chapter 8. Max, Rick, Sarah and the rest have to think about the security of the homestead, it is not safe! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
magusfang Posted July 6, 2015 Author Report Share Posted July 6, 2015 The beach is covered but Max didn't think to cover the cliff side...he's still a kid after all. The ex spec ops guys and Rick should have said something but everyone makes mistakes...besides it was a cliff! As for the sensors, well the storm mixed with the thermal suits spoofed poor jeeves and the house is secure but lexon, while bullet resistant and very touch, can be cut with a shaped charge but yeah, I agree way too much sex and these guys need to stop banging everyone and start paying attention! But what are ya gonna do, characters are worse than children, they just don't listen sigh Rescue25, Flexy68 and Sniper014 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Guest Posted July 7, 2015 Report Share Posted July 7, 2015 Has the SG taken the viper into its mist? Alice comes to and acesses all the subs operating systems and floods it arms the torps but locks the outer hatches. Fun & games for all. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
magusfang Posted July 7, 2015 Author Report Share Posted July 7, 2015 Ssssoooooo close...but no Flexy68 and Rescue25 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest 7330 Posted July 7, 2015 Report Share Posted July 7, 2015 The beach is covered but Max didn't think to cover the cliff side...he's still a kid after all. The ex spec ops guys and Rick should have said something but everyone makes mistakes...besides it was a cliff! As for the sensors, well the storm mixed with the thermal suits spoofed poor jeeves and the house is secure but lexon, while bullet resistant and very touch, can be cut with a shaped charge but yeah, I agree way too much sex and these guys need to stop banging everyone and start paying attention! But what are ya gonna do, characters are worse than children, they just don't listen sigh The problem is that the characters ARE children. I don't think that Alice will flood the sub. What I think that she could do is to send the coordinates to the family. If I remember right May can 'see' through Alice's eyes like at the school. Therefore, everyone who can see through her eyes will be able to see and hear everything that is going that is done and said to her. The tribe is coming and in a very vengeful mood too! Amy is going to town! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Guest Posted July 7, 2015 Report Share Posted July 7, 2015 The took the wrong girl! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gamascal@gmail.com Posted July 7, 2015 Report Share Posted July 7, 2015 Sorry guys. Those last 2 posts were from me but I forgot I had close my iPad and went to play a domino game! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gamascal@gmail.com Posted July 7, 2015 Report Share Posted July 7, 2015 I hope the taser didn't scramble some of her programs when everything went dark. Wonder if her personality will be messed up. She might not recognise Amy. That would be a riot. She would probably want to kill them more than once! Flexy68 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
COJimmyV Posted July 7, 2015 Report Share Posted July 7, 2015 (edited) Holy crap, it's the cliffhanger from hell. Legion just gets Mika and now she's gone? Gotta think there will be hell to pay for that one. Carol, Stella and Hans? Hoping they're just out and not dead. And who the hell kills off the dogs? Yes, I used hell three times. That's what I'm feeling after reading this chapter. You are a cruel man, Magus! Hoping Alice and Amy go nuclear. Shame on me. After seeing the title, I should have known not to read it until the next chapter was out. I hate cliffhangers. Serves me right for being so anxious. Edited July 7, 2015 by COJimmyV Rescue25 and Flexy68 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gamascal@gmail.com Posted July 7, 2015 Report Share Posted July 7, 2015 Holy crap, it's the cliffhanger from hell. Legion just gets Mika and now she's gone? Gotta think there will be hell to pay for that one. Carol, Stella and Hans? Hoping they're just out and not dead. And who the hell kills off the dogs? Yes, I used hell three times. That's what I'm feeling after reading this chapter. You are a cruel man, Magus! Hoping Alice and Amy go nuclear. Shame on me. After seeing the title, I should have known not to read it until the next chapter was out. I hate cliffhangers. Serves me right for being so anxious. Alice may be kidnapped! May, not sure yet. It depends on whether the spider can catch the Major from the SG. Flexy68 and Rescue25 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jelad Posted July 7, 2015 Report Share Posted July 7, 2015 They killed the dogs, I hope they die bloody and painfully. Especially the guy in charge and when he dies I hope it's Max and he can't figure out how this kid beat him. Flexy68, COJimmyV and Rescue25 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MajorMarioc Posted July 7, 2015 Report Share Posted July 7, 2015 the dogs... I CALLED IT THE BEACH lol thats how i would of went in Flexy68 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darthel0101 Posted July 7, 2015 Report Share Posted July 7, 2015 I tend to avoid this conversation because magus tends to drop red herrings like no tomorrow. I had to comment, though, because of this most recent chap. Alice captured, Joanne rescued, the main battlers of the younger generation are away, Legion's love "seemingly" dead. I think Max is gonna be the lesser of two storms to cross the sadistic bastard's bow. Remember that Legion has no need for breathing and can take any shape. How long does anybody think he is gonna wait to find out where the assault came from? COJimmyV, Rescue25 and Flexy68 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
that-one-guy Posted July 7, 2015 Report Share Posted July 7, 2015 I say legion is gonna wipe out any members of the SG within his capable range. They all wondered what would happen when he came, what about when he's angry? Flexy68 and COJimmyV 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
magusfang Posted July 7, 2015 Author Report Share Posted July 7, 2015 So thanks for all the replies and sowwy I killed the dogs (not really) I didn't know Mia had so many fans But that's the way it goes; hope everyone liked the chapter other than the deceased canines I mean Rescue25 and Flexy68 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
that-one-guy Posted July 7, 2015 Report Share Posted July 7, 2015 So thanks for all the replies and sowwy I killed the dogs (not really) I didn't know Mia had so many fans But that's the way it goes; hope everyone liked the chapter other than the deceased canines I mean Every form of media producer should know that killing animals (mostly dogs) is a tear jerker. Many a sad film I can watch without crying hut as soon as the main characters dog dies I'm fucked. Flexy68, darthel0101 and COJimmyV 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joe Long Posted July 7, 2015 Report Share Posted July 7, 2015 and they never killed kids until "The Thing" Flexy68 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rescue25 Posted July 7, 2015 Report Share Posted July 7, 2015 So thanks for all the replies and sowwy I killed the dogs (not really) I didn't know Mia had so many fans But that's the way it goes; hope everyone liked the chapter other than the deceased canines I mean I think we liked it - I did anyway. HOWEVER this cliffhanger is a bit different than the others. Some relief please. Flexy68 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
magusfang Posted July 7, 2015 Author Report Share Posted July 7, 2015 Nearly half done Flexy68 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gamascal@gmail.com Posted July 7, 2015 Report Share Posted July 7, 2015 I believe that I should think about some things other than raining vengeance on the SG. Max, Legion, Amy and the rest of the family are coming! This is a suggestion for a few chapters down de road. When Max discover how Alice and May can make a baby, and the genius will, let the babies father be Rick. Max can't want to hog up everything. Plus he will have earned it with getting shot up and all and the family need some new blood!! Just a thought. Magus, now that the appetiser is consumed I am ready with my knife and fork, well sharpened, for the main course. ETA? Rescue25 and Flexy68 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
magusfang Posted July 7, 2015 Author Report Share Posted July 7, 2015 day or two, having a lot of distractions lately LOL Welcome distractions, but they do slow the writing down. Flexy68 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rescue25 Posted July 8, 2015 Report Share Posted July 8, 2015 day or two, having a lot of distractions lately LOL Welcome distractions, but they do slow the writing down. "We" understand distractions especially welcome ones. HOWEVER you are the one that left the cliffhanger on such a sharp edge. Put monkey & company back in their cage/room for a while and give your suffering public/fans a little relief. B Flexy68 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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