JustS Posted August 30, 2014 Author Report Share Posted August 30, 2014 You're most welcome. I'm not certain how adroit I am (thank you for saying so),but perhapse bombastic is closer than I want to admit. Really, you would not believe the number of eulogies, and political speeches I'm asked to write... by the loosing side. Just kidding. I will again say you have great talent, and a well intentioned, well earned army of admirers. As far as the trolls who have no bollocks, or any real talent to bring to bear in defense of their impotent bashing? Don't bother with them at all. A wise man tosses fresh piles of shite on a barren field, doesn't respond to their noxious stench by engaging them in conversation. Let their stink fill the air till it fades... it'll hurt them more if you ignore them. Keep the wolves happy; both the ones reading Lara, and the ones reeming Lara. Never thought I'd get a stiffy reading about this... fuck! B. I continue to doff my cap at you, sir! I didn't think I would end up writing this sort of material when I began penning adult fics, but hey, here I am, nearly eight years later! Once again, I encourage everyone to check out my past stuff for more quality entertainment while you wait for more on Wolf's Snare - I've got a variety of genres to pick from: http://members.adult-fanfiction.org/profile.php?no=1296802924&view=story Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest WolfCock Posted August 31, 2014 Report Share Posted August 31, 2014 Minor gripe: Stop repeatedly using the phrase "From that moment forth" or "From that moment forward" It's been used on at least three occasions and I feel that it's a little dull. Perhaps a rephrased version. Story is still great though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JustS Posted September 16, 2014 Author Report Share Posted September 16, 2014 Minor gripe: Stop repeatedly using the phrase "From that moment forth" or "From that moment forward" It's been used on at least three occasions and I feel that it's a little dull. Perhaps a rephrased version. Story is still great though. Noted, I will look for that and reword if there are too many. Thanks for the feedback. FYI everyone, I am still working on this story but I'm finding it hard to get up the spirit to write anything outside of work. I will keep you apprised. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest WolfCock Posted September 17, 2014 Report Share Posted September 17, 2014 Their locations are 2 in Chapters 8/9: After Lara get's fucked by a wolf outside, and at the end of the chapter. At the end of Chapter 14/15: Final line. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest chen Posted September 22, 2014 Report Share Posted September 22, 2014 Good to know you're still writing it. It really is a great, superbly written story. But if you hit a writers block I'm sure many will understand. Do you write for a living? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JustS Posted September 30, 2014 Author Report Share Posted September 30, 2014 Thanks to a week off of work, I've made good progress on the next chapter, which is now about 90% done. I think you guys might like it. It's straight smut again and I'm pretty happy with how it's shaping up. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest What_Up Posted September 30, 2014 Report Share Posted September 30, 2014 Yaaaaaay! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JustS Posted October 4, 2014 Author Report Share Posted October 4, 2014 It's here, enjoy: http://games.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600088799&chapter=16 Note, that this counts as both the path A and B versions. I saw no reason to mention the pregnancies nor post the exact same text twice for this chapter. Hopefully you have been using some of your imagination while reading so just continue to infer that they're pregnant at all times if you're a path 'Ber'. Hope that makes sense. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Wolf_Cock Posted October 5, 2014 Report Share Posted October 5, 2014 I honestly would like some exposition on how Lara is so good at dedpthroating.did she do it with men before she was stranded nded? I doubt she is just natural good at it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest KeeWee Posted October 5, 2014 Report Share Posted October 5, 2014 I honestly would like some exposition on how Lara is so good at dedpthroating.did she do it with men before she was stranded nded? I doubt she is just natural good at it. Not to be a dick but really? That just seems excessively needy.... A large part of reading is being able to use your imagination on the little unexplained things. And thanks for another great chapter JustS. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JustS Posted October 7, 2014 Author Report Share Posted October 7, 2014 I honestly would like some exposition on how Lara is so good at dedpthroating.did she do it with men before she was stranded nded? I doubt she is just natural good at it. You can infer what you like on that. Maybe she had a lot of practice in her past life, or maybe she was one of those people born without a gag reflex. Up to you. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Guest Posted October 10, 2014 Report Share Posted October 10, 2014 No gag reflex probable. Walked through a tit deep river of piss, shit in the game, and never yacked. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest GuestReviewer1887 Posted October 11, 2014 Report Share Posted October 11, 2014 It's great to see you continuing this work. I just have one thing I don't like... Jennifer... I just feel this story was son much better when it was just Lara. There are plenty of brilliant ways to eliminate Jennifer... during the birthing process, or maybe have a jealousy concept involving Lara as her mind is continually warped into madness and have her kill Jennifer (like Cain and Abel) and have Lara bask in her sole position in the pack. Idk... just one man's opinion, but Jennifer has to go. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest What_Up Posted October 11, 2014 Report Share Posted October 11, 2014 It's great to see you continuing this work. I just have one thing I don't like... Jennifer... I just feel this story was son much better when it was just Lara. There are plenty of brilliant ways to eliminate Jennifer... during the birthing process, or maybe have a jealousy concept involving Lara as her mind is continually warped into madness and have her kill Jennifer (like Cain and Abel) and have Lara bask in her sole position in the pack. Idk... just one man's opinion, but Jennifer has to go. Nah, Leave Jennifer. Something I'd rather See is more Lara and Jennifer sex. The Wolf stuff is great, but a little repetitive. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JustS Posted October 12, 2014 Author Report Share Posted October 12, 2014 Thanks for the range of opinions guys. The contents of the next chapters are still up in the air, so keep the feedback and suggestions coming. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest What_Up Posted October 23, 2014 Report Share Posted October 23, 2014 Maybe some more Jen and Lara kissing while their fucked, or boob stuff, in all this time, no one has sucked anyone's tits. Also, Are you just going to end this when the pups are born or is it gonna turn incestuous, or do you have an endgame yet. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest 1887 Posted October 31, 2014 Report Share Posted October 31, 2014 Jennifer served her purpose. She explained the situation. Time to off her and focus on Lara's insanity. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest TIMMY!!! Posted October 31, 2014 Report Share Posted October 31, 2014 Jennifer served her purpose. She explained the situation. Time to off her and focus on Lara's insanity. No, fuck that. I don't want to turn this into a sanity thing. There's no call for it and it would just make the whole thing horrible. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest 1887 Posted November 4, 2014 Report Share Posted November 4, 2014 No, fuck that. I don't want to turn this into a sanity thing. There's no call for it and it would just make the whole thing horrible. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest 1887 Posted November 4, 2014 Report Share Posted November 4, 2014 I'm pretty sure it turned into a fucking sanity story the moment she gave into the wolves brother. Lol Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest What_Up Posted December 8, 2014 Report Share Posted December 8, 2014 So what's the status on the next chapter? Any Progress? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Guest Posted December 20, 2014 Report Share Posted December 20, 2014 Yeah... We could use another chapter. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Guest Posted January 9, 2015 Report Share Posted January 9, 2015 Maybe have a triple penetration thing... have one wolf go ass-to-ass vaginal, another climb over it to go doggy-style anal, then have the rest get in a line for her mouth. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest What_Up Posted January 9, 2015 Report Share Posted January 9, 2015 Maybe have a triple penetration thing... have one wolf go ass-to-ass vaginal, another climb over it to go doggy-style anal, then have the rest get in a line for her mouth. Don't you think he has an awkward enough time writing this? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JustS Posted January 11, 2015 Author Report Share Posted January 11, 2015 (edited) Don't you think he has an awkward enough time writing this? This is my new favourite comment Sorry for the radio silence in this thread guys. I'm not sure if I've mentioned this here already but I took a break from writing fics due to illness, work and general life crap. Upon returning, I decided to finish off my also long-in-the-making Samus Aran/ Pit fic just to cleanse my palate. So, that exists if anyone here cares to check that out. My once again my too ambitious plans for Wolf's Snare haven't exactly inspired me to get back to it. However, I have what I think will be the last three chapters planned and have begun writing the first of those. The second is mostly for plot so I wanted to sandwich that between two that are pretty much just smut to maintain a good balance. I've got no ETA for you as usual, but the next chapter is now my top priority in terms of fics. I am now doing less hours for work each week so that will probably help me be a bit snappier. Stay tuned. Edited January 11, 2015 by JustS Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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