Hyperminimalism Posted April 24, 2014 Report Share Posted April 24, 2014 (edited) I'm in need of some critique from a beta/crit partner who is willing to go over the last two chapters of my story. Everything else has been read and edited, although I do--in the future--hope to find someone who is willing to beta the entire thing. For now, I think that the last two chapters will be sufficient as I have not had a chance to go over them with critique from a second pair of eyes. I am looking for things like sentence structure, flow, if anything needs to be omitted/added, rewritten, grammar, punctuation, stuff like that. In this particular section, there are no slash scenes, but there is a meeting between my MC and the character he slept with in the last chapter. I'd also be curious to hear if their interaction is believable or if it makes sense. At this point, it is 8,373 words long, so not a huge chunk. Please message me if you're interested. I can be contacted by PM or the other contact information on my profile. Edited April 24, 2014 by Bun Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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