George Glass' Review Responses -- Original Fiction

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: "A Beach Like No Other"

Jomahawk2694 2015-02-19 id # 3000224780

Definitely cant blame Tony for his reaction. Pretty sure anybody would be like that if they met women like Angie or Cheserie. I really hope Tony gets to stay with them. God know he deserves to be part of this world.

Yes he does, which is something I'll get into a bit more in the last chapter.

Also, I really hope GlassFish (nice shout out to her btw) makes drawings of this story. That would be awesome.

Jomahawk

The story is largely inspired by Glassfish's comic, "A Day at the Beach" (which can be found in its entirety at http://xbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=list&tags=a_day_at_the_beach).If she drew a comic about my story about her comic, the paradox could destroy the universe.

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: "A Beach Like No Other"

Jomahawk2694 2015-02-19 id # 3000224781

Even more ideas for GlassFish to draw. I really want to see Angie in her waitress uniform, or Cheserie in her bikini. Speaking of that, please include both women wearing their thong bikinis in the next chapter.

I can guarantee that at least one will be thonging it up in the next (and final) chapter.

I seriously can't wait for the conclusion to this story, good sir. I expect nothing less than a well thought out and satisfying climax (pun fully intended)

Joma

I hope the last chapter will fulfill your expectations...among other things.

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: "Caitlyn's Punishment"

MaddamAndRobin 2015-02-22 id # 3000224866

I love this story. It's mean, entertaining, and delightful. The level of cruelty is just perfect. It's clearly fantasy so I'm not constantly reminded I'm going to hell for loving stories like this.

Thank you very much. I think you have hit on an important reason for this story's popularity (which has surprised me): The fact that it isn't entirely realistic makes it easier to just enjoy the sadistic/masochistic pleasure of it without thinking, "Ew, I'm getting off on something awful that happens to real people."

The descriptions are well done, they don't get silly when they easily could. It turned me on very much. Nice job.

Then I've done my job. Thanks again!

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: "Company Policy"

MaddamAndRobin 2015-02-22 id # 3000224868

This looks like it's going to be fun. I would like to see more.

I'm afraid that story is a one-shot, but I can never rule out the possibility of a sequel. Thanks for the comment!

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: "F**k Perfect"

MaddamAndRobin 2015-02-22 id # 3000224869

Great story. Fun and sexy. I love how much personality your characters have.

Thanks very much. Unlike a lot of my other stories, I tried to make this one as realistic as I could manage without making it boring.

And thanks for all the reviews!

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: "A Very Special Thank You"

Vexer6 2015-02-06 id # 3000224604

First off. my apologies for responding so slowly to your review. Email burial and all that.

Very awesome and hot story!

Thank you!

Funny thing is just before I read this I was thinking of doing a similarly themed futa fic with a student/teacher pairing. In my case I was considering doing a fanfic about the movie Freedom Writers with a pairing between Erin(the teacher) and Ava(the student) and the latter is the one with the dick.

Ah. The idea for this one came from a friend called Eh Steve, who won a raffle I put on for my watchers on Hentai Foundry. I had never written a futa story before, and I liked having the opportunity to try something new. I'm also glad that this piece came out as well as it did.

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: "Unbidden"

Anon 2015-04-17 id # 3000226225

Deliciously dark and well crafted. Kudos to you from this impressed anon.

Thank you! I'm really proud of this story.

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: A Beach Like No Other

RS 2015-05-13 id # 3000226994
Hope there's more. Like maybe meeting up, and getting together in the real world.

Glad you liked the story. It's finished, though.

Edited May 17, 2015 by GeorgeGlass

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: Activation Day

Jomahawk2694 2015-05-14 id # 3000226996
Well, this was interesting. And dark. I barely know these characters and the death of two of them has me feeling pretty bad. I also have a very bad foreboding feeling that as soon as they set up this teleportation system, they will find that the 37 years that have passed will equal everyone on earth being dead. Still, a very interesting premise, and that last paragraph has set up some lemons with very hot potential. I cant wait for more :-)
Joma

Thanks! I wasn't sure about whether opening with two character deaths was a good idea, but it seemed to me like an effective way to convey the gravity of the situation and the very real risks that the remaining characters face.

As for hot lemons--oh, yeah, it's teatime.

Re: Activation Day

RESCUE25 2015-05-15 id # 3000227030
This fine tale obviously calls for many additional chapters.

Thanks! I'm planning to write three more.

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: A Very Special Thank You

Jomahawk2694 2015-05-14 id # 3000226997
Very, very well written. The relationship seems very real and the trepidation both were feeling seems very genuine too. I know this was more than likely a one shot, but another one would be appreciated :-)
Joma

Thanks! I found this story hard to write because it is dialogue-intensive, and whereas I can write sex and fight scenes all day long, dinner conversation is tough. It is also the first futa story I've ever written, and that added to the challenge (both of explaining the character's futa-ness and figuring out how it would affect her personality).

I don't have any thoughts in mind for a sequel, but one never knows, do one?

Edited May 18, 2015 by GeorgeGlass

[GeorgeGlass]

RESCUE25 2015-05-15 id # 3000227029

Very unusual. Well written. Seems like additional chapters would ensue.

Thank you! The story ends where it does because I knew that the contest-winner for whom I wrote it would want an ambiguous ending.

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: Some Girl

RESCUE25 2015-05-14 id # 3000227013
Hot story. Would like to see a chapter 2. More adventures of the young ones. Well written.

Thanks! I am, in fact, planning a sequel story that would take place on Fourth of July weekend and would involve Carl and Robin meeting up with some cousins they haven't seen in a few years. Wholesome family fun ensues.

Re: Caitlyn's Punishment

mufasa 2015-05-17 id # 3000227078
Is that it? Only three chapters? I would love to read more of this story and what Jack has in story for Caitlyn.

Yeah, that's the whole enchilada. But I'm sure this isn't the last story of this type that I'll be writing.

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: "Caitlyn's Punishment"

Lavender 2015-05-21 id # 3000227183

I wish there were more chapters to read.

I'm really glad you enjoyed it.

There are not enough of these sort of stories here which is disappointing. Hope you write more like this. I would read/review them if you did.

Depending on what you mean by "like this," you might enjoy some of my existing stories. If you are interested in something viciously rapey, you might like "Unbidden" or "Cruel Nature." If you are interested in bestiality (albeit consensual), there's "Some Days, You Get the Bear."

In any case, thanks for the review!

Edited June 6, 2015 by GeorgeGlass

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: "Activation Day"

RESCUE25 2015-06-03 id # 3000227448
And yet another cliffhanger.

Hey, gotta keep you guys coming back.

Waiting on CH 3.

Not for long; I'll probably post it tonight.

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: “Activation Day”

Before I respond to the reviews this story received today, I just want to say how exciting and entirely unexpected these comments were. "Activation Day" is my half of a story trade with a friend, so it was written for an audience of one, to suit his very specific interests. I had no idea that it would appeal to so many other people.

Now, to the reviews:

Psy-girl 2015-06-13 id # 3000227570

Wow, normally i don't read a lot of Sci-fi fics. But this one caught my attention.

It really feels good to hear that someone enjoyed my story even though it’s outside the genres they usually prefer. Thank you!

Now, i can't wait for more.

I’ve got all kinds of stories in the works, so stay tuned.

But i kinda wonder what killed off all of humanity.

My bad—I didn’t mean to provide so little detail about that. Essentially, the sun began continuously putting out more radiation than it does now (if I correctly understood my astronomy professor back in college, this is at least theoretically possible), destroying the ozone layer and doing all the other bad stuff that charged particles do.

Spurred by your comment, I have added a few words to chapter 1 to make this point clearer. So I appreciate your feedback.

Soluna 2015-06-13 id # 3000227571

This has got to be one of your best, if not the best, writing you've done. And that's saying something because everything you write is gold. It was really emotional and fun to read. This is Grade A work with an original approach to the idea of migrating to a new planet to save humanity that is clearly you. I don't see how this could have been written any better than it is now.

Thank you!

It’s funny—a lot of the plot and scifi aspects of this story evolved from the specific fetishes my friend wanted the story to include (eg, prepubescent girls who nonetheless had substantial breasts, socially acceptable romantic relationships between these girls and adult men). I wanted to make those things happen in a way that readers would find plausible, and that’s where all the details about cryo and preconditioning and Executive Function scores came from.

Great job on this. I hope you had a lot of fun writing it, definitely different from what you normally write, but that's good!

As always, I look forward to writing more of your works.

Thanks for the great read!

You’re very welcome! I did indeed enjoy writing it, and I’m glad that the emotion I put into it came out the way it was meant to. Thank you.

Mona Thompson 2015-06-13 id # 3000227578

My word Mr. Glass! Absolutely amazing! You are an amazing writer...and I would love more sci-fi from you...perhaps a continuation of this story or the characters in it. But to be honest this already has the perfect ending...err...I mean beginning♥

Thanks! Indeed, I’m not thinking of doing more with these characters right now, but that could always change. I’ve got all kinds of other stories in the works, though, so I hope you’ll keep an eye out for them.

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: "Learning a Daughter's Duty"

Fnanon 2015-06-22 id # 3000227769
First review, only to say one thing

This was a rucking MASTERPIECE. Keep up the good work dear friend
/Fnanon, the prowler of the net.

Thank you! And keep on prowlin'.

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: "FIreworks"

Jomahawk2694 2015-07-02 id # 3000227933
Damn man! That was great! But way to go and end it right when it was getting hot. ;-)

You know me--I can't resist a cliffhanger.

Man, that's gonna be an awkward conversation, trying to explain to Astrid and Erik that not only are they not disgusted, but seriously turned on ;-).

A little awkward, yeah.

Knowing you though, I know you'll make it amazing :-)
Please hurry and post the rest of this soon
Joma

Thank you! Part 2 is in the works.

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: "Excuses"

Angel 2015-07-14 id # 3000228099
Yay! New story!
I'm always excited when I see one of your stories. I've been hooked since the very first one. Thanks for sharing your kinky stories with us & I look forward to the next one! =)

Thanks! I've got plenty more kinky stuff in the works.

[GeorgeGlass]

Jomahawk2694 2015-07-25 id # 3000228236

I liked the time perspective of this one.

Thanks! I decided that writing this in present tense (and first person) might make it more involving for the reader. I've got another story like that in the works.

And incest by you is always good ;-)

Still cant wait to see Fireworks though.

Chapter 2 is nearly done!

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: "Fireworks"

bolimi kuroc 2015-07-29 id # 3000228277
Your stories are so good! Reminds me of my childhood.

Thanks! You must have had quite a childhood.

Edited August 5, 2015 by GeorgeGlass

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: "Country Summer"

Jkjh 2015-08-11 id # 3000228456
This was hot and kind of cute

Exactly what I'm aiming for--erotica with a touch of sweetness and old-fashioned charm.

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: "Mommy's Home"

Jomahawk2694 2015-08-23 id # 3000228618
More please! I could totally see you expanding on this story, by making each chapter a few years into the future, Eric's sexual maturity showing, him learning more and better ways to seduce and pleasure his mom, Eric bringing a girlfriend home, or the sister coming over for a threesome. So many possibilities, I would love to see you do at least one :-)
Joma

This story was written as a one-shot, but that's an interesting idea. I'll consider it. Lots of other stuff in the works, though!

Edited August 29, 2015 by GeorgeGlass

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: "Mommy's Home"

Veron 2015-08-28 id # 3000228713
It was a great story. Always love these ones with big cock shotas and the naturally of all sexual acts.

I'd been wanting to write a story about an abnormally well endowed shota since I read "Hung Shota" by the talented SlutWriter.

Perhaps you could write a continuation where it's usual that the mother shares her son with females in a daily basis. Neighbors, their daughters, teachers, girl friends at school.

I don't see Ellie as necessarily the type to want to share her son with every...whatever the female equivalent of "Tom, Dick, and Harry" is. But I could see her sharing him with a few special women (not least her younger sister). And her love for Eric might compel her to--say, on his birthday--find him a woman who can give him sexual experiences she can't manage herself, like deepthroating or anal.

[GeorgeGlass]

DarkAlley_Muse 2015-08-29 id # 3000228714

Not my normal cup of tea but still pretty enjoyable.

Thanks!

Couldn't lose the idea as I read it that the story took place in a world where that old divorce law about not pleasing your spouse somehow survived. And drastically expanded upon unto madness and mysteriously moved over into criminal law.

It's not law--just social convention. You couldn't go to jail for failing to satisfy your spouse (or sibling, or child), but people would talk if they knew.

Now that I think about it, that could make for a good surrel comedy if that's your sort of thing.

Hmm. I do like to write comedy.

Thanks for the review.

[GeorgeGlass]

Anonymous 2015-09-01 id # 3000228764

I'm at a big water park today, my daughter and her friends are off on rides, and I'm chilling on a plastic chair under a big umbrella, feet away from other bored parents beneath the same umbrella. I pull up AFF on my phone and start reading this story.

I creamed myself. Halfway through chapter 3, I jizzed in my swim shorts. Never touched myself once. I haven't done that in well over 10 years.

Standing belly clap, my friend. That is some quality smut you've written here. Congratulations!

Wow. That's...really something. As the old saying goes, "A massive involuntary physiologic response is the sincerest form of flattery."

Seriously, for a porn writer, this is pretty much the ultimate review. So thank you!

And I hope the water park had showers.