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Re: “The Power Arcane”

From DreamWorlds on July 16, 2020

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Another absolute banger of a story! 

Thanks! And thanks for giving this series its first review.

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Every paragraph kept me intrested I really can't wait for more.

Well, there’s plenty more to come: 8-9 stories total. (I say 8-9 because the last one may end up being a two-parter.)

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Re: “The Power Arcane”

From AbigalTheAuthor on July 16, 2020

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WOW! All I have to say is WOW! This is one of the first stories I've read on this site and it's pretty amazing,  

Thank you!

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I want to see this story continue pleaseeee!!!! 

Story 2: Ramona should be up in about a month.

Thanks for the review!

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Re: “Keene’s College Weekend”

From Sage of Discord on July 23, 2020

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This is one of my favorite of your stories. No idea if it's your plan, but I'd like to see it progress to Keene actually getting Kiri pregnant.

Glad you like it. I’m not actually planning on getting Kiri knocked up in this story (Keene’s not old enough for that yet), but it’s possible that at some point I’ll make this thing a trilogy and write a finale story in which Keene and Kiri have a special weekend together.

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Re: “Mia: Confessions of a Dickgirl”

From Thundercloud on August 13, 2020

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Finally got time to check the ending for this story and I am happy to say that chapter six is lots of improvement compared to the previous chapter.

Well, chapter 6 (“The Best Day of My Life”) is basically the opposite of chapter 5 (“The Worst Day of My Life”).

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Lots of sex and just about every kink hinted in the story tags realized. Probably the best chapter so far in my opinion. Given the preg tag of the story it is kind of given how it will develop and end, but I still found it to be a very satisfing ending for the chapter and the story.

I’m glad. I wasn’t sure everyone would like the finality of the ending, but so far, no complaints.

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If there are anyone out there that are having second thougths about reading the story due to the rape and anal tags I suggest reading chapter 1-4 + 6 will basically give you the whole story but dodge those parts that are not Mia using mind controll to give herself the opportunity to knock up females.

Good advice.

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13 hours ago, GeorgeGlass said:

I’m glad. I wasn’t sure everyone would like the finality of the ending, but so far, no complaints.

I cannot speak for everyone obviously but the story have a far too low ratio of reviews considering how much dick girl fun there are. Keep the good work!

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12 hours ago, Thundercloud said:

I cannot speak for everyone obviously but the story have a far too low ratio of reviews considering how much dick girl fun there are.

I find that readers' tastes really vary among the sites where I post. Some of these variations are predictable, eg, furry stories are always most popular on Inkbunny, loli and shota stories go over best on Lolicit, and, of course, fanfics get the most attention here on AFF. But some of the differences aren't as intuitive, one of which is that dickgirl stories aren't so popular here, whereas they are a big hit on Hentai Foundry.

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Keep the good work!

Thank you, and I will!

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Re: “Flesh”

From DreamWorlds on August 14, 2020

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Nooooo, it cant be over! This is how I even got into this site.

Wow. High praise!

It can't be. All could things must come to an end I suppose. I'll say it once I'll say it again you write so compellingly I'm trying to reach your level, one day I will. I would also love criticism from you considering you are the master.

Thank you! I will check out your stuff one of these days.

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I cant wait to see what you have next.

Plenty more to come!

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Re: “For the Price of One”

From Pixel-King on August 18, 2020

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Holy Hell!

So this is where you keep your top-of-the-shelf, premium vintages.

Well, the temperature and humidity in the Originals section are ideal. :)

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This was great and so deliciously wrong. I liked the peppering of Spanish words and general tone.

I’ve been studying Spanish on Duolingo, so I thought it would be fun to throw a little in there (but hopefully not so much as to seem pretentious).

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My only change would be referring to the position with "doggy" instead of "dog" to cute-ify the language. Gotta use age-appropriate kiddie language after all.

Hmm, fair point.

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I guess my fantasies skew more posessive since making Maya a little putita was hot, but I hope she is only a slut for Daddy.

That was pretty much what I had in mind, at least until Maya is older.

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Great stuff George.

God damn!

Thank you!

Edited by GeorgeGlass

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Re: “Wishful”From Jomahawk2694 on August 26, 2020

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(Chapter 7)

Wow. Just...just WOW. 

That was fucking INCREDIBLE. 

Why, thank you. :)

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I honestly liked the explanation as to who Valerius is/was, and how the token played into it, and the whole baby-face turn from being the asshole he was to truly enjoying helping people find their desires.

Because the mechanics of the Wishful had to be more or less figured out right from the beginning, I’ve had Valerius’ backstory bubbling in my head for a long time. It was great to finally be able to tell it.

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And now on to the Angel lemon. Sheer. Fucking. Perfection. 
I can say, with all honesty, that it is now my new favorite lemon from you. 

Wow. I’m so glad you liked it.

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It's really hard for me to believe that this story started out as me requesting a simple "porn-no plot" one off from you. 

I’m actually pretty bad at writing PWP. I’m almost never able to jump right into the sex without at least a little bit of setup. And the world of the Wishful is fun to play with.

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Thank you. For being the kick ass writer you are, for writing this amazing story, for being a great friend. 

You’re welcome, you’re welcome, and right back atcha.
 

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Joma

...hmm?  What's this at the end?  Oh, it's Jace's boss calling him back!  Oh sweet! Jack ass is gone, AND Jace gets his job back!  Well, everything is coming up roses! Everything is going to be fi-

...you son of a BITCH. 

(lol jk)

I’ve read your review three or four times now, and this part makes me LOL every time. (Even right now as I’m writing this.)

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Re: “The Power Arcane”

From Jomahawk2694 on August 28, 2020

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(First story)

ok, I want to apologize about reviewing this so late. I absolutely LOVE this idea. And this first story was HOT!

No need to apologize. And thank you!

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The whole idea is hot. Magic and arcane abilities tied to a libido beyond any human mortal. And unlike other magic stories where sex is looked down upon and people are forced to quash their blazing libidos, here it's something to be celebrated and embraced as soon as possible! Love it!

Thanks! I’ve had this idea in my head for years, and I’m glad to be finally getting it out there.

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I loved the idea for the toy shop, and now I really want to see the aunt and the toy shop owner go at it lol. 

The toy shop is modeled after the one in my home town when I was a kid, before the big chains came along. As for Aunt Minerva and Michael Abingdon, well, I’m afraid there’s none of that sort of action coming.

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And after reading that you envisioned Christopher Lee as the shop owner, I can see it now as well. But at first, I was envisioning the toy shop owner from that one episode of Dexters Lab where Dexter and Dee Dee get stuck together with a Chinese Finger trap lol

I don’t remember that one, although I bet I saw it back in the day.

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Cant wait for more!

Joma 

 

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Re: “The Power Arcane”

From Jomahawk2694 on August 28, 2020

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Ramona

Wow, another really fresh idea!  That actually makes a lot of sense as to why kids will just hate on each other when they are young. 

When I corresponded with DirtyAngel (an actual 1st-grade teacher) about this story, she said that something like this actually does happen: two kids will have chemistry, their friends will mock them for it, and then the kids end up fighting.

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Reading this brought up so vivid memories of my own kindergarten class room for the setting, though I envisioned Ramona herself as the mom from "for the price of one" lol

If Serena were a goth, yeah, maybe.

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Cant wait for what's next!

Joma 

Hope you’ll like it!

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Re: “Wishful”

From Fairy-Slayer on August 29, 2020
 

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(Chapter 7)

Oh, so Valerius was eventually wise enough to turn his personal Hell into Heaven, and using only the magic of his wisdom. It also obviates the need to wish him his freedom… not like anyone would fantasize about that anyway. :)

 

It wasn’t his idea – making others’ wishes come true is his punishment. He’s just learned to like it. 

(BTW, I’d been waiting to write the words “For I have seen a thousand worlds, and every one a paradise” since the story began.)

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Also, the "his will be known to him or not" was a nice insight about Jace's idle fantasies, however slight or repressed.

Yeah, it seemed important to mention that.

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BTW, I can think of only two metals that the token could become next.

Don’t worry about Jace, uranium isn’t that poisonous. :)

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Nice of his shy little sister to finally ask for, almost demand, what she wanted from her brother, and you did a beautiful job describing how lovely their first time was. The running description of her body as she was undressing made a nice striptease of it too.

Thank you! This was kind of “the big one” in terms of Wishful sex scenes, so I put a lot of thought into it.

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(Also, even if you hadn't mentioned the inspiration I think any fan would realize it here. :) )

*chuckle*

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The moment I read the design of Lady Angel's black & blue panties I had a hunch what her latent kink was, even if only hinted at strongly during the "whore" phase of their lovemaking. If it bleeds over to the real world, Angel's submissive streak may make for an interesting dynamic.

We’ll see how much – or how little – Angel and Angelica have in common very soon.

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As for the storm, something tells me Jace Lyman needs to be concerned about the real world just as much as King Jace needs to deal with the impending war. Maybe his sexual escapades will cause problems at home, or maybe getting his job back will bring new challenges from a resentful boss. (Though I'm sure Valerius could help Jace go into business for himself if the need arises… just without the whole destroying-people's-lives thing.) Regardless of where or what, it'll be fun to find out.

This storm will bring many things. Not least some terrible traffic on the I-95.

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Thanks for more of this great story.

Thanks for another fun review!

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Hey George! I’m gonna skip the little sister chapter (chapters?) of Wishful for me own personal reasons and local legal wossnames but I hope to get back and read more on the later chapters. It’s been great so far and I figure I’ve picked up the deal with Valerius from the comments here.

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18 hours ago, GeorgeGlass said:

From Fairy-Slayer on August 29, 2020
>     Oh, so Valerius was eventually wise enough to turn his personal Hell into Heaven, and using only the magic of his wisdom. It also obviates the need to wish him his freedom… not like anyone would fantasize about that anyway.

It wasn’t his idea – making others’ wishes come true is his punishment. He’s just learned to like it.

Uhm… How exactly did you interpret my comment there as meaning something different? To me, it's just a more complimentary way of saying the same thing…no?

(Sometimes I seriously wonder if I've had a stroke and developed some subtle aphasia.)

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7 hours ago, Guest Roguesque said:

I love the story.  Is there a place where we can support your work….Patreon, etc?

That’s very generous of you! But no, I don’t have anything like that. I don’t want to turn my writing from a hobby into a job.

The best way to support and encourage me is to leave reviews of my stories!

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4 hours ago, JayDee said:

Hey George! I’m gonna skip the little sister chapter (chapters?) of Wishful for me own personal reasons and local legal wossnames but I hope to get back and read more on the later chapters. It’s been great so far and I figure I’ve picked up the deal with Valerius from the comments here.

“Wossnames”?

I’m afraid the next chapter is focused on the little sister too, but I appreciate your having come this far in the story.

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5 hours ago, FairySlayer said:

Uhm… How exactly did you interpret my comment there as meaning something different? To me, it's just a more complimentary way of saying the same thing…no?

(Sometimes I seriously wonder if I've had a stroke and developed some subtle aphasia.)

I misunderstood what you meant by “turn his personal Hell into Heaven.” I thought you meant that Valerius had somehow altered his world; now I realize that you meant that he altered his own perspective on it.

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Loved The Power Arcane “Ramona". The slow build up between the kids and the idea of Ramona watching for hours got me thinking of something that's been bouncing around in my head and that is possibly writing a side piece to Cutters Creek (the Homer Vargas classic)

 

Thank you Mr Glass for making me think of taking up the pen (for what is my very first time I might add)

 

Your thoughts of course would.be very welcome….

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16 hours ago, Guest simonscribe@protonmail.com said:

Loved The Power Arcane “Ramona". The slow build up between the kids and the idea of Ramona watching for hours got me thinking of something that's been bouncing around in my head and that is possibly writing a side piece to Cutters Creek (the Homer Vargas classic)

Thank you Mr Glass for making me think of taking up the pen (for what is my very first time I might add)

Your thoughts of course would.be very welcome….

Thanks!

I’m afraid I’ve never heard of Cutters Creek or Homer Vargas. But I’m glad to have inspired you.

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14 hours ago, GeorgeGlass said:

I’m afraid I’ve never heard of Cutters Creek or Homer Vargas.

Ages since I heard that name...Homer Vargas was one of big names among erotic author on the Internet around the period 1998 to 2002. His archive of stories should still be on ASSTR in case anyone is curious.

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17 hours ago, Thundercloud said:

Ages since I heard that name...Homer Vargas was one of big names among erotic author on the Internet around the period 1998 to 2002. His archive of stories should still be on ASSTR in case anyone is curious.

His focus was very much on preg. He wrote some great stuff. I'm unsure yet as to how to approach my first piece. The general premise is that a family (parent/s and 4 kids ages pending) come to town and are seduced into cutters creek culture through an elaborate and very pleasurable divide and conquer strategy.

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