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Re: “First Time: Jyani”

From ANON - CandlelitScribe on July 18, 2021

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Anthro isn't always really my cup of tea, but when it's a good author writing it, I'll check it out anyway because they can still make it hot. This was one of those times, greatly enjoyed it!

Thanks! I appreciate your giving this story a chance.

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Re: “A Day at the Beach”

From ANON - Johannes Longhardy on July 18, 2021

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That was great! I love the way you potray it as nothing out of the ordinary, just a normal day at the beach!

Thanks! During this phase of my writing “career,” one of my guiding principals was think of what would be normal or logical and then do the opposite. My original thought was to have the mom and son go to a secluded beach to have their fun, but then I decided that they should go to a beach that isn’t at all secluded but where their activities are the norm.

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The only downside really is, that is so short. Oh I really would love more Stories or Chapters in a Universe like this.

I’ve got several other stories that might fit the bill, such as “Keene’s Really Good Week,” “May’s Family,” and “Country Summer.”

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Also, however, I would suggest breastsize and penislength not be in cup size and inches. I know it is the preference of some readers of it is so and so large, but it is quite enough to ready that Terry's penis is longer than his finger and " Terry’s mother [...] grip [...] one of her big tits."

Yeah, I did eventually quit using cup size. I still use inches, though.

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Re: “Side Effects”

From ANON - Johannes Longhardy on July 18, 2021

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The writing style is outstanding, but the content is repulsive. I don't like the story because of the spitefulness portrayed by the adult characters. I had hoped for a gentle story where the characters were considerate of each other. In the end, I only finished reading the story because I was still hoping for a good ending and redemption.

Yeah, this story is not everyone’s cup of tea. You should probably avoid most of my stories that have the “Rape” tag.

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Re: “A Beach Like No Other”

From ANON - Johannes Longhardy on July 18, 2021

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This is my favorite fairy tale of all. After a stressful day, I just want to dive into this beautiful world and feel a gentle caress when someone says to me, "There, there - it's not so bad after all."

That’s really what I was going for: a sweet, utopian escapist fantasy where everyone gets a happy ending.

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Re: “There’s a New Seraph in Town”

From ANON - Johannes Longhardy on July 18, 2021

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Josh found a wallet and without even thinking about how much money might be in it and whether to take it, he returned it to its owner. That - my dears - is how to behave as a considerate person.

Yep, Josh is a solid guy. One might even say...saintly.

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The Story is great, the Dialog is witty and drives the Story, the Characters are loveable. How do you do that, George?

I love humor, so funny dialogue is fun to write. As for the characters, I just write ones that I love and hope others will, too.

Thank you for all the reviews!

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Re: “A Beach Like No Other”

From Lady Freelove on July 26, 2021

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This was really nice. Every young boy should experience pleasures at the hands of experienced, caring women like this!

With this story, I was aiming for pure sweetness and wish-fulfillment, so I’m glad that came through. Thanks for the comment!

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Re: “The Power Arcane” (Story 6: Kaya and Monica)

From Lady Freelove on August 14, 2021

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Hot and exciting! I love the intimate nature of this family and the power they derive from it!

After depicting several Arcanes who either have just one Arcane family member or are entirely on their own, I wanted to show what a full, intact Arcane family is like. Glad you enjoyed. 

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Re: “Delta Delta Delta”

From ANON - Daphne on August 19, 2021

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I really enjoyed this! Would love to see a sequel with Lindsey and Nikki. They were very sweet together. And sexy!

Thanks! I really enjoyed writing those two.

I don’t have plans for a sequel right now, but I’d be open to writing one if a good idea hits me.

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Re: “Anything That Moves”

From ANON - Johannes Longhardy on August 27, 2021

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I've read some very good stories from you and some that I didn't like at all. I usually like your style, but the first chapter of Anything That Moves feels more like a sledgehammer. That the gender roles between humans and animals have been reversed here is something new, but I haven't really missed it yet. On the whole, however, it is Rape and I do not like that. I rather like the respectful stories.

I understand. I have wide-ranging tastes, so my stories cover a broad gamut of interests and perversions. I’ve got some other stories in the works that you will probably like better. 

 

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Re: “Anything That Moves”

From ANON - Edward on August 31, 2021
 

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The first chapter is a bit too short for my taste but I love this kind of story.

Can't wait to read more.

Chapters 2 and 3 will be about this same length, but chapters 4-6 will be longer. Glad you’re enjoying!

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Re: “Weekend at Waltney World”

From ANON - on September 02, 2021

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I'll be honest, I expected you to expand on this idea a while ago.

Because I’m usually working on literally 20 different stories at the same time, it takes me a while to make real progress on any one of them.

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That said, I'm very glad you did get around to it and I hope you write more soon.

I’m finally about finished with chapter 2. I hope to get it off to beta this weekend, or early next week at the latest.
 

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Re: “Weekend at Waltney World”

From Lady Freelove on September 13, 2021

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Very nice! Well written and imaginative! Looking forward to the next chapter!

Thank you! I put a lot of thought into this chapter in terms of both coming up with things for the Murphys to do and thinking of Disney movies and TV shows to spoof (and how to spoof them).

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Re: "Anything That Moves"

From Dixie Freelove on October 09, 2021

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I like this. You write really well.

Thank you! I've had a lot of practice.

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Jack is an interesting and fun guy.

For sure. I'm glad he's fictional, though. :) 

 

Re: "Weekend at Waltney World" 

From Dixie Freelove on October 09, 2021

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I really love this story!

Thanks!

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Now this would be an amusement park worth going to! I could really see my family going there!

Yeah, I could see your family enjoying that. :)

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I really can't wait to read more!

One more chapter on the way!

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Re: “Anything That Moves”

From ANON - Herman on October 25, 2021

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This was already a great read but after this last chapter with his mom getting involved, the world needs a sequel!

Gosh, and there I thought that finishing the story with a chapter about the mom would make people LESS inclined to ask for a sequel. :) Glad you enjoyed it.

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Re: “Anything That Moves”

From Bilboswild on October 25, 2021

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Great story, covering all aspects, and whilst just fantasy, showed what good writing is about, and having read numerous stories of yours, is one of my all time favourites, along with Curfew.

Thanks! "Covering all aspects" was my main goal in writing this story, as I wanted to do something wider-ranging than the niche-type stories I usually write.

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Thanks for sharing and keep up posting. Older guy here and remember my boyhood years, lusting after certain friends wives, daughters, and hunting for my older brothers porn stash, which included a Nudist health magazine and Spic & Span.

Yeah, older brothers' porn stashes were a great source of, um, education, back in the day.

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Cheers

You too!
 

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Re: “Anything That Moves”

From Dixie Freelove on October 25, 2021

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This was a perfect way to end the story, with mom and son both getting what ther wanted.

Glad you liked that “surprise.”

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I loved it when she said "No daughter of mine is going to grow up to be a dry-boxed prude who only spreads her legs when she wants something.” Too many girls are like that. Rachel needs to learn from Lyssa!

I had a feeling that line might appeal to you. :) Thanks for reading!

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Re: “The Breeding Barn”

From ANON - Johannes Longhardy on October 31, 2021

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That was fun to read. I like the worldbuilding, like how Your Little Horsis can retract their hooves when they need to grip.

Hey there, Johannes. Thank you, and thanks for giving this story its first review!

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Good Story, please leave it as it is. But I am wondering, what if...

What if the Breeding Barn was not a secludet seldom used barn behind the house, but a common institution of that locality? And going to the breedin barn for the first time was an event in the life of every foal?

 

I imagined that every family has its own breeding barn, but there’s no reason why it couldn’t be communal instead. And visiting it for the first time is certainly a rite of passage.

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What if Mera’s huge member did not fit in Emmi's lovel-tunnel on the first try and they had to work slowly over days to make it work? What conversations would have ensued, and how would they have tried to solve the problem?

I’m not sure. I have dealt with that issue in other stories, though – like in “Little Rose,” wherein the dad does a lot to prepare his little girl before the first time they have intercourse.

Thanks for reading.

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Re: "The Breeding Barn"

From Dixie Freelove on November 05, 2021

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I like this. It was a surprise that Emmi's mother could knock her up but it was a good surprise.

One thing I like about writing furry stories is that since readers have to suspend disbelief anyway, you can really go hog wild with fantasy elements -- like moms having cocks. :) Thanks for the comment! 

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Re: “Big Sister”

From zeranoe on November 11, 2021

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While the theme of this one didn't do much for me (possibly because I'm not a girl),

You don’t have to be a girl to enjoy straight shota. I’m living proof of that. :)

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that was VERY competently executed. I continue to be amazed (and somewhat frightened) by your ability to put yourself in the minds of such a wide variety of characters so perfectly.

Thank you! Trying to think in ways that I usually don’t is part of why I like writing fiction. 

Thanks for the review!

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From Dixie Freelove on November 13, 2021

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I loved it! You described it so good! It was like I was tghere watching them!

Thanks! That’s what every writer loves to hear.

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How bout a fourth scene for after they get home and Gldys gets her triple?

I’m afraid this story is at an end. But if it’s any consolation, I’m currently working on a story in which 7 young girls get TP’ed at the end...

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