AlexPyrane Posted October 12, 2013 Report Share Posted October 12, 2013 So I'm looking for a beta for my original BDSM Erotica. It is M/F with some potential F/F somewhere down the line. The story is called the 7 Pleasures of Being a Whore and the first chapter is already live. And here's the link for those who are curious http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600106600 I already have Lesson 2 written and Lesson 3 is currently in progress. I need someone to look over chapter 2 and tell me if there is any sentences or words that seem really awkward and need to be rewritten. I also need some help getting chapter 3 rolling again. There is a lot of bondage going on in this story, plenty of foreplay, the female in my story is a Masochist and the male is a Sadist so expect spanking, caning, and other pain/pleasure activities. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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