Looking For Beta for Initial D

[Kurahieiritr]

I have 3 complete, 1st revisions done, and posted with 2 partially written and semi revised Initial D - Keisuke x Takumi novels for which I am seeking a second opinion. I would like to receive help specifically for imperfect bilingual dialogue. It has been brought to my attention that there are multiple forms of words like "What" and "Why" in Japanese that change with sentence context. The "Learn Japanese" book I have relied upon to create Bilingual dialogue is sorely lacking, as I have been instructed within several reviews at this site and FF net.

Seeking a beta with a sharp eye for minor spelling glitches such as "Form" versus "From" because I have mild dyslexia problems beyond bilingual dialogue corrections. I have an unusual Character P.O.V. heavy writing style, so wish to work with someone flexible to retain the syntax of each chapter. As a retired editor I can do the majority of my revisions, although, I do have my moments of hit and miss. I desire to work with someone who is not afraid to say something is wrong with a specific portion of a chapter, and will give me suggestions for correcting any accidentally missed problem spots. I am open to returning the favor of returned editing services in exchange for any help received. I am a dedicated writer, so tend to post 2 novels per year.

I write angst with romance/homoerotic themes. I am dealing in controversial topics such as stalkers, slavery compounds, and rape which are the result of having become somewhat famous. My stories include graphic M/M sex, violence, and other elements that some have difficulty reading. Rape scenes are in flashbacks. I have a 5th novel in the planning stages, so hope to find a committed individual with staying power. I have listed the stories I am seeking input for below in chronological order.

http://anime.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600053941

http://anime.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600054038

http://anime.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600054123

http://anime.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600053940