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Help! New author needs feedback for sci-fi M/M original


magicmau5

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Hiya lovelies,

I'm in rather desperate need of help with my M/M sci-fi story, The Invasion of Ian. It's basically a soap opera set in space. It does have some rape/violent elements in it, but that is over and done with in the first few chapters. What I need now is just some feedback with grammar, and maybe some suggestions with plot. I'm also having trouble with the motivation side of it, because I'm not sure if it's worth continuing. I would like to finish it quickly, but the research portion of it seems to take just as much time as the writing, and I think it might be about 25 weeks before it's close to being finished. I don't need someone to devote a ton of attention to it, just a little feedback when you have some extra time on your hands.

Thank you and happy writing/reading!

xoxoxoxo,

magicmau5

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