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Beta for a non-con Red Skull/OFC wanted (maybe others ...)


Barbayat

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I am currently writing a horror/angst fanfic featuring the Red Skull (strictly Avengers Reboot based, no comics other movies). It was supposed to be short pwp but somehow it got longer and creepier.

This story is not supposed to be romantic, apart from the unhealty relationship between the OFC and Johann Schmidt, I want to include a bit more about what is going behind the scenes of Hydra.

I just started (3000 + words), but I think I could use someone to look at what I have done so far. Honest feedback on the pacing and how convincing I am writing Schmidt's motivation. Then of course also the effect of what he is doing to her has on my OFC.

Short info on the OFC and plot, her brother is an important member of the French underground and the Gestapo caught her and uses her to black mail him to provide information. After her second escape attempt she is transfered to the Hydra base. Upset with the Gestapo interfering in his business (it's still pre-Tesseract area) and her defiant attitude, he is out to teach her a lesson after another escape attempt.

This idea formed for a while in my mind and it seems short of writing it - there is no getting rid of it.

Let me know if you are interested, I don't mind harsh criticism - but please don't waste both our times complaining about the non-con or basic idea itself, focus on criticising the execution of it ...

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  • 7 months later...

I would be willing to take a look. I've gotten very good at continuity and character motive analysis, thanks to my perfectionistic attitude towards my own marvel 'verse stories. Non con doesn't bother me if it is handled in a psychologically accurate way. The main thing that gets me on shoddy non-cons is the unrealistic and semi-Sueish way that some writers treat Stockholm Syndrome. As long as that pet peeve is acceptable, I think I can handle beta-ing for you.

My schedule can be variable, so it would help with punctuality if we had a set day I'll check your work, (such as every thursday I check my email for an update, and get my beta report back to you by saturday).

You can find samples of my work at

http://xmen.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600091111 (A request fic)

http://xmen.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600091101 (An alternate subtext fic)

http://xmen.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600090993 (this is my only attempt at round robin)

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