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Please critique my ReaderInsert Naruto fic, "Your Story"?

Kakashifan727

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Char Options Poll  

  1. 1. What character do you want for Hero/Heroine? PART 1

    • Naruto
      0
    • Sasuke
      0
    • Sakura
      0
    • Kakashi
      0
    • Sai
      0
    • Yamato(Tenzou)
      0
    • Kiba
      0
    • Hinata
      0
    • Shino
      0
    • Kurenai
      0
    • Shikmaru
      0
    • Ino
      0
    • Chouji
      0
    • Asuma
      0
    • Gai
      0
    • Rock Lee
      0
    • Neji
      0
    • Tenten
      0
    • Gaara
      0
    • Temari
      0

  2. 2. What character do you want for Hero/Heroine? PART 2

    • Kankuro
      0
    • Tsunade
      0
    • Jiraiya
      0
    • Orochimaru
      0
    • Kabuto
      0
    • Karin
      0
    • Suigetsu
      0
    • Juugo
      0
    • OTHER (please post it in the topic)
      0

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It's my first time doing an interactive fiction and I want to know what I'm doing right and doing wrong. I am looking for contrustive cirticism, you ca be blunt, as I am often blunt oo XD. But no outright flames, or I shall ask the mods to delete your posts. Bitching and moaning is fine just no insulting other/stheir opinions.

Author: Kakashifan727

Fandom: Naruto

Name: Naruto:Your Story!

Genre: Drama/Historical Parody/Romance

Summary: ReaderInser, "you" fic. Being the child of the daimyo, you have your work cut out for you doing your regular chores and helping your old father. When you get captured during a raid on the palace by some foreign ninja, can the Leaf save You? Abuse, Anal, AFFO, Angst, H/C, Humil, M/F, M/M, OC, Other, RapeFic, Violence, WAFF, WIP

Pairings: ReaderXVotersChoices

URL: http://naruto.adultf...hp?no=600104829

Made the poll: Have fun voting!

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