EMathews Posted August 26, 2012 Report Share Posted August 26, 2012 I figured this was probably the easiest way to respond to reviews (which I always want to make an effort to do), so if you've left a review, I will leave a response below! Chapter Four Review Response: FortunateM: Hahaha, slow-burning indeed! Sometimes I go back to these beginning chapters and I wonder why it's taking so long for anything to happen, but hey, I guess that's something for me to edit later. Live and learn, eh? At any rate, I'm glad you're enjoying it! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EMathews Posted September 8, 2012 Author Report Share Posted September 8, 2012 Chapter Five Review Responses: NeonGreenGummieBears: Aw thank you! I'm so glad you're enjoying the story! Haha, there is a special place in my heart for Zee, I just find him so interesting. And Ari is actually a lot more experienced than he seems--he just doesn't talk about it (or think about it, for that matter ). Enjoy the chapter! FortunateM: Hahaa oh Enric...I can't help but like him, even when he's being a douchebag. And Ari was definitely laughing because the idea hit a little too close to home for him. I hope you enjoy the chapter! Happy reading! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest emathews Posted September 16, 2012 Report Share Posted September 16, 2012 Chapter Six Review Responses: FortunateM: Ahh one thing that kind of sucks is that Ari is always worrying about something and so there aren't many moments where he and Zee can just joke around. And as for the women, some of them can definitely fight, but seeing as they trade for most of the weapons that they have, they're a lot better at hand-to-hand type of combat. Enjoy the chapter, and thanks for reviewing! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EMathews Posted October 13, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 13, 2012 Chapter Seven Review Responses: Uni: I'm glad you liked the chapter, and that you like all my characters! (I'm rather fond of them as well). Blair's just a bit shaken up, she still doesn't remember much of what happened. And while the fairies only make a brief appearance in this chapter, they will be back! So love them or hate them, you will see them again. FortunateM: So glad you liked the chapter! Haha, yeah Ari really sucks at combat, though with Zee there to protect him most of his life, I suppose he hasn't really had any real reason to learn. Hope you continue to enjoy! Thanks for reviewing! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EMathews Posted November 19, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 19, 2012 Chapter Eight Review Responses: FortunateM: I know, I've put him through the ringer, poor thing! Haha. I'm so glad you're still enjoying the story. I'm sorry for the wait, and thanks always for reviewing! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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