xXKuroTenshi666Xx Posted June 21, 2012 Report Share Posted June 21, 2012 I need a beta that can bring detail and life into my story, as it is now, it's much like a skeleton. I need someone that can go into detail, someone that will make the reader feel as if they are there with the characters and someone that will also be honest with me about my writing style (Which I know isn't very good. It's perfectly literate but...blah) My story is an original work, What Makes a Monster? What Makes a Human? It has four chapters currently published and has received a few ratings, but zero reviews. The story is M/M, it includes angst, violence, and is a mixture of supernatural, crime with a little bit of romance thrown in. If you're a person that loves dimension jumping, creatures that live in shadows and plot twists you did not see coming than please read what I have so far and see if you can help me because I think I really need it Please give me a sample of your writing work if you show interest in helping me out thank you for your time! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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