Natch Posted February 28, 2012 Report Share Posted February 28, 2012 So, Kracken has gone MIA on me and I'd really like to post the next chapter of my story. But first, I need a co-writer to translate my chicken scatch into a legit readable story! Really easy, just tweak it so it flows better and do some sceanry porn (like describing what a places looks like, ect.) LOOK! Examples! My original Line; "oh I do so love Paris!!" cried some young new wife to her hubby, "Yes I like it too, Sugar bear!!!” he said to his wife. The way better line; "oh I do so love Paris!!" cried some young new wife to her hubby, she had soppy blonde curls and a twang indicating the American Midwest. "I like it too, Sugar bear!!!” said her noticeably older husband his broad shoulders and garish I <3 Paris T-shirt obscuring his massive belly which wobbled as they kissed lightly for her camera phone. See how much better it is now? THATS WHAT I NEED YOU TO DO COME! JOIN ME!!! http://anime.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600051399 Here you can go read whats been done so far and too see if you'd like to help me out. It's a pretty cool story and even has a side story (was krackens' thing) Once I accept whoever i'll fill you in and everything about where this is going and how we're gonna go about fixing my scribbles into art! And yes, this is a partnership so if you need help with something I'll help. :3 Just know that for the most part I SUCK AT WRITING. So you'll still have to brush it up some. XD ANY QUESTIONS? YES I LOVE CAPS! <3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Natch Posted March 2, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 2, 2012 So I've noteiced nobody has posted ANYTHING in this fourm, not just my post. So now I think it's pointless to search for help here. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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