Curious Lyss Posted August 9, 2011 Report Share Posted August 9, 2011 I willingly admit I'm a flawed writer. I have issues with simple grammar and I'm really comma happy. (Trust me, I wish I wasn't.) After 10 chapters and nearly 4,500 views, someone finally came along and turned my attention to the problem. Simple mechanics were getting in the way of letting them enjoy the story! Embarrassing as that is, I needed to see that. Some of the problems I've found in my work make me want to smack my head on my desk. I've taken all the chapters down,except for the first. (I went back and fixed every single little error I could spot.) I intend on going through them one at a time and putting them back up. But I think I need some one with a fresh set of eyes to give it a look over and double check for small errors I may miss. (I'm not going to flood you. I'll give one chapter at a time.) Title: Among Wolves Rating: Adult + Summary/Codes: Being Kidnapped by Werewolves for reproduction purposes was not on the top of her list of things that could happen. AFFO, BDSM, Beast, CR, D/s, Fingering, H/C, HJ, M/F, M/s, OC, Oral, Preg, SH, Slave, Solo, TF, Toys, UST, Voy, WD, WIP. Orignal > HET I consider it "Erotica" but it's not particularly heavy with it as the story progresses. (There is erotic content in the first two chapters and then only harassment from chapter 3 to 9.)It does have a plot. I'm not sure how the Beta business works on AFF. I don't know if there's a system in place, or if it's done by e-mail exchange. I don't have a clue. (I'll be honest.) I really just need someone who is really handy with the polish. If you like what your read and you have suggestions I'm open to it. I'm not afraid of criticism, so long as it's constructive. (There's always room to improve.) You can see the story here: Among Wolves If it's something you'd be interesting in being a Beta for, let me know! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Curious Lyss Posted August 9, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 9, 2011 It's an original, it doesn't have a fandom. Still interested? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lycanthrope Posted February 5, 2012 Report Share Posted February 5, 2012 Wolves and violence.. still need someone i'm in. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HalfFallenAingyl Posted March 8, 2012 Report Share Posted March 8, 2012 Ditto here. Sometimes it helps to have more than one beta, too. One can catch things that the other doesn't. I currently use Microsoft Office Starter 2010, which I THINK is compatible with most word processors. If not, I can grab Open Office. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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