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As the title says, I need help with this character, main (rather basic) bio is here

Name;

Female - Amanda Cosgrove

Male – Gregory Cosgrove

Date of Birth; 3rd April 2088

Age; 22

Star sign; Aries

Parents; Sue and James Cosgrove

Abilities; Willing able to change into a male

Friends; Samantha (Sam), Emily (Em), Joe, Craig

Interests; Reading, Dancing, Sports, Computer work, Internet, Shopping, Walking, Woods,

Dislikes;

Body type; Athletic/thin

Clothing Style;

Female – Skirts ad strap tops, tights and hoodies

Male – Baggy jeans and tees

Eye colour; Dark Blue

Hair colour/Style; Brown, cut short

Race;

Reason for change; Natural ability, controlled by a birthstone pendant

When Change Started; Age 16, few days after birthday, random trigger

However, I'm stuck on a "race" (other than shapeshifter) and wondering if the way her "change" is too "out there" or too Mary-sue-ish. Right now it's rather basic, I know, but its just a small idea that I've had, and want the character to be more developed before I delve into the actual story, and this is my first voyage into this whole area of writing... so yeah, please, Help?

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