writeaddict Posted April 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 18, 2011 Oh I can SEE that in spades! This latest chapter was hot! Very smoking and Itachi is just made of all things bad and sexy and i love it!! I almost feel bad for Naruto cause he just has NO freaking clue... *sighs happily* Can see that Naruto is going to get messed up or see that I'm having fun? Thank you, you were the only one that commented on the sex- at all. It is as Itachi should be. Naruto will see soon enough. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
writeaddict Posted April 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 19, 2011 Review Responses for Chapter 26: Prism0467: Happy to please. moodysavage: I'm wondering if perhaps I should have asked you guys if you wanted me to write them having sex but it is as you pointed out. It will be a little hard for Naruto NOT to notice them sleeping together. So yeah, there's a bit of balance there and it's not like Shika won't enjoy himself with Itachi. Dorkchic: Thank you, I wouldnt have wrote it if I didn't have some way to make it work. Thanks, it never hurts to be called a genius. That was part of my plan, Naruto is his own downfall (as it were) if that makes sense. LOL. I don't think Naruto will be peeking anytime soon, unfortunately. I can't say that I have been reading Lelita's stuff. I checked it out when you mentioned it but I'm weird about reading stuff where the main character isn't one of the main characters. I'll work my way up to it, hopefully by the time I do it will be complete- I'm horrible at waiting. destiny_18: Then you have good foresight. I've been hinting at it so I'm glad you caught it. Unfortunately not in this chapter but maybe, just maybe, there will be some in the next. AngelTalion: Thank you. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Dorkchic Posted April 19, 2011 Report Share Posted April 19, 2011 Review Responses for Chapter 26: Prism0467: Happy to please. moodysavage: I'm wondering if perhaps I should have asked you guys if you wanted me to write them having sex but it is as you pointed out. It will be a little hard for Naruto NOT to notice them sleeping together. So yeah, there's a bit of balance there and it's not like Shika won't enjoy himself with Itachi. Dorkchic: Thank you, I wouldnt have wrote it if I didn't have some way to make it work. Thanks, it never hurts to be called a genius. That was part of my plan, Naruto is his own downfall (as it were) if that makes sense. LOL. I don't think Naruto will be peeking anytime soon, unfortunately. I can't say that I have been reading Lelita's stuff. I checked it out when you mentioned it but I'm weird about reading stuff where the main character isn't one of the main characters. I'll work my way up to it, hopefully by the time I do it will be complete- I'm horrible at waiting. destiny_18: Then you have good foresight. I've been hinting at it so I'm glad you caught it. Unfortunately not in this chapter but maybe, just maybe, there will be some in the next. AngelTalion: Thank you. Even if the story completely sucked (which it does not) it would be entirely worth reading just for the staggering, aching, almost inspiring porn. The sort of stuff that requires a cool down period after reading. The only reason I suggested it (besides that it is good) is that you seemed slightly unsure in regards to the sex scenes. I do not know if it was a comfort thing or if you were not sure they should be included at this jucture. If it was the first then just know that your writing is very good and just about anything you write will be worshipped by me. If it is the second reason then do what pleases you and see aforementioned worshipping remarks. Hugs, smoochies, and sly gropes for all! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
writeaddict Posted April 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 19, 2011 Even if the story completely sucked (which it does not) it would be entirely worth reading just for the staggering, aching, almost inspiring porn. The sort of stuff that requires a cool down period after reading. The only reason I suggested it (besides that it is good) is that you seemed slightly unsure in regards to the sex scenes. I do not know if it was a comfort thing or if you were not sure they should be included at this jucture. If it was the first then just know that your writing is very good and just about anything you write will be worshipped by me. If it is the second reason then do what pleases you and see aforementioned worshipping remarks. Hugs, smoochies, and sly gropes for all! Really? But I haven't written all that many sex scenes for this one. Aw, thank you, you're making me blush; I'm glad you think that highly of my sex scenes. Suggested Lelita's? It's more towards the unsure if it should be included there- like I did this one and no one really seemed to like it because of the characters but they're actually together for a while and Naruto was only holding back because he wanted it to work out between them while he jumped into bed with Sasuke. Comfort isn't really the issue, I actually enjoy writing sex scenes even if sometimes they feel torturous and do my best to make it as realistic as possible- anything that happens in my sex scenes can actually happen while having sex. If I wasn't comfortable I wouldn't write it because I think people can tell, generally those end up being bad sex scenes. Thank you, I take that as a very high compliment. I'll save the affections for my next scene more though, hmm? I think you'll appreciate it more. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Midnight Essence Posted April 27, 2011 Report Share Posted April 27, 2011 I've totally missed the last two chapter because I started a new job! Smexy Kimi/Naru time- Although I'm not a fan it was hot never-the-less. Ita/Shika I would love to see a scene there!!!! HOT! *_* lol. And sexy sweaty Shika bandages the wounds even though he highly disapproves. Sweet Shika... (Sighs) I can't wait to see mote! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
writeaddict Posted May 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 4, 2011 I've totally missed the last two chapter because I started a new job! Smexy Kimi/Naru time- Although I'm not a fan it was hot never-the-less. Ita/Shika I would love to see a scene there!!!! HOT! *_* lol. And sexy sweaty Shika bandages the wounds even though he highly disapproves. Sweet Shika... (Sighs) I can't wait to see mote! Aww...Well it's still nice to hear from you. Good to know you're still reading. Sorry I didn't notice your message till today, I just checked here randomly. Thanks, I'm getting the impression a lot of people weren't fans- you guys are so loyal to Shika. Though they (Naruto and Kimi) technically date for months so there's gotta be some sex in there. There should be one in a couple of chapters. I'll probably update tonight or tomorrow. So let me ask a question? Why do you want to see Ita/Shika but not Kimi/Naru? Besides the sexy appeal- I mean. Yeah, dorkchic gave me the idea for running Shika and I went with it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
marley_station Posted November 6, 2011 Report Share Posted November 6, 2011 Are you going to continue this story? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Dark_Faolan Posted May 4, 2012 Report Share Posted May 4, 2012 Ya know, I just stumbled upon this story today and couldn't stop until I reached the last chapter. Was kind of sad to see it end, then really bummed when I noticed the last update was a year ago. The story just suck you in. Its very heartwrenching to see Shika's love for Naruto and Naruto's obliviousness. I think the reason everyone wasn't on board with the Kimi/Naruto scene is because Shika's pain just pops into one's head. I can also see why one wouldn't have a problem with an Itachi/Shiki scene because there is no attachment possible. Its just a form of comfort and mindlessness for Shika and a...perk, if you will...for Itachi while trying to make Naruto open his eyes. If you ever get the inspiration to continue this story, I'm not gonna lie, that'd be fantastic! But if it never comes to a conclusion, just know that you have a wonderful way with words and storytelling. - A new and random fan Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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