KZ-01 Posted May 26, 2010 Report Share Posted May 26, 2010 Way long ago, I made a request for this one kind of story...someone tried writing it out, but it didnt quite pan out due to disagreements. I think it's been long enough since then to try to ask again. So one day, I was at a pool party/BBQ hosted by a youth pastor at my church. Everything was chill until the youth pastor's wife came out in her suit. Even though it was pretty modest (a one-piece), I could not believe how stunning her body was. She wears baggier clothing for the most part, so I hadn't noticed before. My story request: sometimes I do help around the youth pastor's house. One hot summer day, I come to clean up the aftermath of a youth event as a favor to the couple. The youth pastor and I are cleaning up and doing other backyard chores, when the pastor's wife comes home. Her interaction with him suggests that their relationship has become kind of detached, without interest. She's seemingly surpised to see me there...almost as if she had a plan in mind that didn't involve me (to be explained later). She goes back in, wanting to get on "some lighter clothing." We continue working, and soon enough, I hear the door open, and hear her voice commenting on how much "better this feels." I look up, and am greeted with the sight of the youth pastor's wife as never seen before---in a sexy bathing suit as seen above. What happens next, I want to be slow, with much build-up, centering on sexual tension. It would be disclosed later on the story that she bought this bathing suit especially to try and bring her sex life with her husband back on track. Of course, I'm the one to be ogling her, while her husband barely pays any attention. Of course, she notices me looking at her...and get an appreciative look on her face, as if she's pleased that at least one male is paying attention to her. From there on, she starts testing the waters, seeing if I really am turned on by her, that I like what I see (though I want the POV to be from me, and it would be shown through her actions/words). All the old tricks, from bending over to set her towel, to walking slowly whenever she's out of the pool, and toweling off every part of her body. The husband would be out of the picture---shortly after she arrives, he gets a call from the church to help fix a computer problem. Eventually, we'd just sit down and talk....she would steer the conversation to her lack of sex life...to me sypathizing with her....to her letting me know that she notcied my attentions...and that she likes that she can still turn a young guy like me on. We'd then get down to business....and then she'd take me by the hand, lead me to the master bedroom, fool around, and as a finisher, I'd take her from behind on their own bed....and then make plans for another meeting. I want the build-up to be slow, and "reasonably realistic." I'm one for details, so try not to skimp on that. I want her alias to be Allison, and mine Ben. Keep the suit a one-piece, as it's part of the magic. She's 30, while I'm 20. She's brunette, hair going down a little past on her shoulders, C-sized, chest and a gorgeous ass. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweet Candy Apples Posted September 20, 2010 Report Share Posted September 20, 2010 I'm new, and the idea of writing fantasies for other people is very exciting to me. Three things, does it have to be from your first-person POV? I'd much rather write it in the third person, with the main character being the wife. Second, it's a great erotic concept, the youth pastor's wife, and I think there are a million places to go with it. Your specific fantasy seems to short change it. Meaning, what you describe is the plot to a thousand different porns, each indistinguishable from one another. It could be much more interesting, say, if it takes places during a youth group retreat... or at the church itself. Third, I'd rather the youth pastor's wife's name be my own. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KZ-01 Posted September 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 21, 2010 I'm new, and the idea of writing fantasies for other people is very exciting to me. Three things, does it have to be from your first-person POV? I'd much rather write it in the third person, with the main character being the wife. Second, it's a great erotic concept, the youth pastor's wife, and I think there are a million places to go with it. Your specific fantasy seems to short change it. Meaning, what you describe is the plot to a thousand different porns, each indistinguishable from one another. It could be much more interesting, say, if it takes places during a youth group retreat... or at the church itself. Third, I'd rather the youth pastor's wife's name be my own. You can write it in 3rd person/make the main character whoever you wish. And I think your ideas of setting sound pretty good, so run with it. Third, yes, go ahead and make the pastor's wife's name your own. I don't mind. Haha,at this point it seems more like your fantasy than mine, but hey, your musings do have a point. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweet Candy Apples Posted September 23, 2010 Report Share Posted September 23, 2010 Give me 10 or so personal details about yourself that I can put in, like what you look like, what you're into... i don't know. Anything random, anything about the pastor himself, what he looks like, what he's into, his house.... Just little details. Also, are you actually a church-goer / believer? What other kind of things go on in this so-called youth group of yours? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KZ-01 Posted September 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 23, 2010 Give me 10 or so personal details about yourself that I can put in, like what you look like, what you're into... i don't know. Anything random, anything about the pastor himself, what he looks like, what he's into, his house.... Just little details. Also, are you actually a church-goer / believer? What other kind of things go on in this so-called youth group of yours? Sent you a message with the details. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest archon1980 Posted October 15, 2010 Report Share Posted October 15, 2010 Hmmm, this looks like fun. I could probably do it. I will do it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KZ-01 Posted October 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 19, 2010 Alright! Looking forward to it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KZ-01 Posted November 29, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 29, 2010 Nobody's written this yet. Is anyone interested? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest archon1980 Posted December 20, 2010 Report Share Posted December 20, 2010 I'm still interested and working on it. I have 2 or 3 other projects on the go, but I haven't forgotten your request. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KZ-01 Posted December 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2010 I'm still interested and working on it. I have 2 or 3 other projects on the go, but I haven't forgotten your request. Awesome. Good to know that it's going. =) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Archon Posted April 30, 2014 Report Share Posted April 30, 2014 Sorry I haven't done anything on this story. If you're still up for it, I'm working on it. If I don't hear from you I'll scrap it, but if you're interested, respond to this post soon. PS are you okay with me including with her giving Ben a BJ or not? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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