dolphina23 Posted December 17, 2008 Report Share Posted December 17, 2008 I'm looking for a beta reader for my story 'The Fall of the Dogs of War'. It's a Naruto fandom story. It is also a Naru/Sasu or Sasu/Naru wichever way you want to look at it. Basically, and specifically, I need sopmeone good who can go through perhaps the last few chapters posted, not much more than that, and critique and polish the grammar and diction a little. I've been told, and have noticed, that my detail and word choices are lacking in style and sometimes detract from the main body of work in the chapter because I overdo it. I'm not happy about that, but am more than willing to improve on it with the help of a good beta to edit/critique/comment honestly, but not brutally. I'm alos in no way looking for someone to re-write whole sections. If it really is that bad, comment on it and I'll take care of it. Anyone willing to help, please, please feel free to contact me here, or send me a mail message here: littledutchgrl24@yahoo.com Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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