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Mamacita

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  1. Peaches & cream 3832 • scentarouarousal • groin innt ont of • making tha that ... wes well as • smg evg evilly • Angeld, ad, • grangrand-sire • you did mes mess [didn’t] Dio divorare 3534 • P> Daniel shrugged Unforgiven 3119 • owedowed • hadpenepened • sat up sy, hy, holding • movinrossross • we we get in • awaowaroward • tok upk up a • held sld see it • hide wde was • beautiful n. [para] n. • heftlyftly • otheI beI believe • Look at Ple Please • was mucter ter when • fucktherther • whileke wke watched • dragged out out into • and Ang Angelus • fan fan of blood • continuo cuo cut • hnjurnjured • you hao leo leave • he d’t g’t get • felt a hon hon his House of lies 3074 • wond whd where The evil of wishing 3045 • He lookt hit his Inner workings 1928 • becsomesomething • will png ing into • his old nd ond out • ast hst his • lovand and • baf. H. Here • threeir eir • the bnd snd sent I'll be pumping him in no time 1793 • teahat hat • that hd cod covered • he ghe mhe more • in sise ise and • hhrushrusting Holding on for you 1804 Ch 1 • sheely. ly. • lac lack of • wnternterrupted • did dif different • Uh, sd I d I pass it • just gg yog your • heted, ted • perhapsve ave • WillWillow had gone • youldn’ldn’t be • desperatel blo block • th Mth May 1997 • Xander’ce hce • not.t wet we • gme ame any • kinda tht tht the • debed bed the • Giles frd. “d. “What?” • er ter took • Nrettretty. • libraren Ien I try • nou.”ou.” Xander • drig weg wet • sayihe she same Ch 2 • le, leaving • h”You”You know • haclasclasping • needndernder • “Oh,’ve ‘ve done it • Sni smi smirked • say.”es ses • Youw haw half • thaXandXander • lookin me me funny • Bath’s n’s not • ere,ere, let me • Xanderan, an, not • sleeXandXander • you won’t out out • thanouldould • untiln; hn; he wanted • hen amn amused Never on my own 1343 • shutess ess he • wit but but myself • hewantwant • s iss is heading • l nel never • Wine hne hand • are ng ing it • I unders it, it • How How did you • Xanderw low long • Yont tnt to go • okay, I’ay. ay. • thosthose • wid tid this Grave attraction 1344 • and what’s h [para] H [para] His hand The good boy 1350 • Maybe nout Iut I know All american boys 1220 • needunisunishment • killed hiis wis whole
  2. I'll be pumping him in no time 1793 • FLAME by Ugh, 3130 Holding on for you 1804 • by theCAT, 65258: nevere bee been ... love y. [para] y.
  3. The things people do 674 • Sha her her head • Onemy fmy favorites • thi> bo> book —at this point the rest of the story is in boldface • thoughtfullythe the • Spinortnorted • did yoad?ad?” • slick er eer easing • pant frhe she sheer • Itot lot like I • not poi point Everlasting love 672 • eling ing a gasp • No.han han • Giles,ten ten • his his cheek • hishtenhtening • and nng ong • goto kto kiss • candlelanklanked • in ate ate Look but don't touch 520 —story summary on index page: decides to som someone —au calls the pairing “Giles and just about everybody else” but it’s really Giles/Spike Miscreation 49 • movie-of-the-wewhilwhile How i spent my summer vacation 47 Ch 1 • disheveleond ond hair Ch 2 • wi bru bruised
  4. How i spent my summer vacation 47 IN REVIEWS • by BlackCat9, 246200: Spike’s g bac back
  5. Sacrifice 6632 —Chs 1,2 stuck in super-wide-screen format Ch 1 • wanted ow aow and • He d thd that Ch 2 • wouldnbe ibe in Ch 4 —i guess in an effort to “correct” the wide-screen problem she put returns after each line so now they’re really short! Ch 5 (also forced line endings) • He untieike,ike Ch 6 (back to super-wide format) • were stred ned near Ch 7 (oooo, normal spacing!) • didnealleally • elders wer the the • Lookirounround Ch 8 • arrierried as • the in in Buffy’s • about mylingling • “Wil”Willow, you • by a om dom demon • was sa dea demon The silent urge series 600031163 Ch 1 • and oh d sed see • off on itt I t I don’t • theer Her Harris • oundound • ythiything • d Xan Xan is • Whes nes nobody Ch 2 • hesi lic licks • simesimes • me.m inm insane Ch 3 • witgoodgood • startggliggling • grin right b [drops off] • eyes.is pis panicked • welcoo sto stay Ch 5 • glg blg blue Ch 7 • Fuckihip hip in my head Ch 8 • chip.ouldould • passr ser seat Ch 9 • out of thr anr and • at mth nth narrow • this bas tha that • Hisrk grk grows Ch 10 • I orryorry Ch 11 • silenceou aou alright • even sli slightest Ch 12 • RigI caI can • waiton hon his • ag Jum Jumping Ch 14 • sce scented • his eare are open • is the p dop doing Ch 15 • his tt, ht, his Ch 16 • to tridgridge • loim lim like • even reme it! it! • sing.ing. • woue pre prefer • picturain ain • sms.sms • Yea’m p’m pheromone • exns tns to me Ch 17 • one long swallo [para] Th [para] The clank • bar oud oud Ch 18 • nd sid silk Ch 19 • touchionetonetheless • mouldoulders • Hets ots out Ch 20 • two h he he has • Shoreak eak Ch 21 • hie rie right • on tall.all Ch 22 • [POV indicator glitched] ~ Xr ~ [para] r ~ [para] I open • Trecusesuses • throthrow him Ch 23 • Have tt tht them ... rid ofm. Hm. Have • str strong • for S. He. He is • at alher her then • reflen inn in a • moremalimalistic • [another POV glitched] Xan Xander ~ [missing beginning ~ also] • am. Em. Everything • youthatthat Ch 24 • dwel thi this • Biting ls wls wanting • quons!ons!” • turned dow down • other bl you you’d • nohen:hen: Ch 25 • my sch dch doesn’t • laparinaring Ch 26 • lng tng the • eacher, er, curse • peripering • I wa dri drinking • lay him don ton the • shieldelf elf • Disillusd? [para] d? Ch 27 • chainy chy cheeks Ch 29 • danith ith him Ch 30 • waitior yor you Ch 31 • here aherehere are a • whentherther Ch 32 • I’m aboo doo do Ch 33 • leadsinging
  6. Ghost in the machine 600031882 • by Josie_h, 3000022701: author comment on lack of reviews; not a review The silent urge series 600031163 • by attirb, 248109: not reeeeeeally a review...? i guess it depends on how hard-assed you’re feeling when you read it • by Spikeswilngslav, 291987: i think she accidentally cut herself off too soon, and she reposted this review with more text to it in # 291996 so i would delete 291987 • by attirb, 301161: what’s with the stupid smiley faces? is that a review?
  7. Touched by an angel 600031799 —DISCLAIMER is missing the “not making a profit” language. so i quickly looked thru her other stories and the same thing goes with 2 stories in other fandoms. she seems to want to get cutesy instead of just using the standard disclaimer, so she doesn’t include all she needs to. i don’t know if you want to deal with them at this time, but if you do (i was afraid they might get missed down the road) here they are: http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600030877 http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600030876 Bargain 10056 Ch 1 • damn i [para] “ [para] “I’m yours • to the sl. Re. Refute • and tlderlder • mand tnd the • on the s fas face • that boy boy was • was iniblyibly • Sthinthink • slavagedt gat garbage • inew new • some birdbird’s • wthatthat • the huhad had • undoing the c and and • seitteitten • what,ten?ten?” • och pch pale • a l a little weird • stretg thg the • exqte fte feeling Ch 2 • wXandXander • Kitten?e Bre British • replitryitrying • thle Sle Scooby’s • on his uns unsubstantial • colrd crd cock • youonstonstruction • his frs ars and • brain.ry try time • tried ub uub up • literally.s nos not • ifwantwanted • yousterster • expla, po, pointing • apsycpsycho Ch 3 • sensitnibsnibs • someg ing in • focks,cks • Spikked ked • ts bos boy’s • pinnguengue • le kie kitten ton Oh Oh • buickuickly Ch 4 • ey him him • towards bed bed • teased,reasreasing Ch 5 • of his s fos forehead • Spit it out,,” t,” • told hie she should • hadndednded • ng tng the • l bll blushing • the bede vae vampire • way way before • bd hid his back • cawaitwait • ooksooks Ch 6 • td jud just • for the of of his life • down de hde his • off hiice,ice • behins bas back • waon qon quivering • le tle toy • ouldouldn’t Ch 7 • pivelively • gottem adm addicted • out oftroltrol • theiinioinion of himteretered • hnagenaged • moc mocked • princbefobefore • he ohe other • associaith ith him • chil The The chip • did it fore? Pe? Problem • thung ung man • ding ing about Ch 8 • fa cer certain • spontaney coy combust • ou’rou’re • houthouth • beinrly rly got • thmpirmpire • ick ick once • The vampiad tad to • he wra wrapped • ge. [para] . [para] “He died Ch 9 • ymatemates • and tuhis his • thrtalrtal • going ave the the • soulSpikSpike • wyou’you’re • wited. [para] ed. [para] Spike couldn’t • trontront • That waod, od Ch 10 • strangchanchangment • werewolfwn awn • his rion.ion • had rned,ned • had plaon hon his • owo-tio-tight • thenchedched • riverive in his • do be tha than • in her her and silk • looked aem dem • ou mou misunderstand Ch 11 • wearskinskin • He hadair air idea it d bed be at an • aet yet you • with, Kn? Tn? The Ch 12 • The y man man watched • henevenever • he ‘t ‘t already • call f dus dustpan • mor mortal started Ch 13 • “Xand” th” the • tlondlond’s • Hnot not the • banto nto our • hards ths though • his tr ofr of a • mdetedetermination Ch 14 • han hand had been • apparpikepike • fore onl only • brunetsomesome • who’waysways • begaamn,amn • moaning loudOh, Oh, • I lfeelfeeling • iousious Ch 15 • jurumbrumbled • a pr twi twist • co, Ki, Kitten • mess,ess • thend dnd demon • viewview —reviewers comment on quite a long period with no reviews, so i’m thinking this is why there’s no more wordord past ch.15 12 days 16272 • in the eye and and her • they’rt ext expensive • Xr’s r’s r equest • moret Spt Spike • fiagaiagainst • plessless • rettrette • SpikSpike scratched • Spikt int in a bed • the er oer of • losThe The • thoverovered • dbreabreaths • thattertter • oaloualousy • hbrokbroken • ng Xng Xander • thinu muu much
  8. Bargain 10056 • by Aonikoi Liikin, 51522: if you’t ‘t post it • by RedPat, 59142: Great story the the way • by Margie, 64878: Lohe ahe angst • by gact, 79061: thawaysways ruining • by Raihne, 109430: Kee Keep up • by a, 135284: not a review, just “ ... “ • by snowpuppies, 207268: more, much , an, and
  9. A friend in need 18206 Ch 1 • didn’t wan jum jump Ch 2 • Onc the the bedroom • the the mug • come ie loe looked • teh res the the blood • I k itk its • erly.rly.ethiething Ch 3 • he coult int in him • aren’t g tog to hurt • feall all and • he s his his head • pikepike stiffened [oo-er!] Ch 4 • Xandigheighed • arowlrowled • in his e”No “No one • He fed, ed, • aurneurned • an smileLoveLove • waspisspissed • care’d e’d • th whi while Ch 5 • yo ful fully • it ld bld be • Myn lun luv • what tsay say ... Join them.’t dot do • Xannoddnodded • p int into Ch 6 • Angence nce • the bac the the • blushed,rry I diI didn’t • t’s t’s fantastic • waere.ere • apikepike Ch 7 • gl at at her • work outy. My. More Ch 8 • youndy Cdy Cordelia • Lornook ook ... he rd a d a sobbing
  10. Searching BDSM storys 600030957 —UN-STORY http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600030957 Search xander/spike story 600030956 —UN-STORY http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600030956
  11. A friend in need 18206 • by FainpatheElanesse, 222460: why Buffy’sing ing the • in same review: make hct tct that way
  12. Tears of the soul 600030491 —Ch 16 is only an AN, not a chapter http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php...&chapter=16 When chocolate and azure meet 544201487 —Ch 3 is only an AN, not a chapter http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php...7&chapter=3
  13. Tears of the soul 600030491 • DUPLICATE REVIEW: by Mandi, 3000016591,2 • i think it’s bubbysbub’s goal in life to write reviews that are longer than the chapters she’s reviewing • DUPLICATE REVIEW: by volumepainter, 3000019902,3 When chocolate and azure meet 544201487 • DUPLICATE REVIEW: by Sara, 2035641209,10 Never time enough 600030521 • DUPLICATE REVIEW: by spikespet, 3000019076,77 Missing you 600030900 —wo-ho! she just BARELY wasn’t a minor when she posted her first story, 9 days after her 18th b‘day!
  14. A vampire's eye view 28065 Ch 1 • theinisiniscences Ch 2 • wher her he was Ch 3 • wehinihining • nearusksusks • wits ous outstretched • Broodinenacenacing Ch 4 • shouldn’ fee feeling • hd jud just • Once car car was • the way way and Ch 5 • fell to sidesides and • he was pag nog now • littlanceance • ase ase tell me •offendingers,ers, • hadn’tn lon long Ch 6 • in thorwaorway • at onee ore or • nk ynk you
  15. A vampire's eye view 28065 —author links are missing on the Ch3 page which is http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=28065&chapter=3 but the rest of the story is fine so i'm not sure if you need to delete the whole thing or what.
  16. Got fangs 544203634 —that weird thing going on with the review page formatting where it’s super-wide and won’t shrink narrower when you narrow your browser
  17. To you i belong 600030690 —UN-STORY: Ch1 is only a request for a beta and there is no story text http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600030690
  18. After the fall 544195616 IN REVIEWS • by Josie_h, 2035383674: author response, not a review • by Josie_h, 2035383877: ditto • by Josie_h, 2035395771: ditto • by Josie_h, 2035404507: ditto • by Josie_h, 2035410454: ditto
  19. Cats are like shadows 544183002 —Ch3 and Ch4 are just ANs, not chapters Earth’s child 544187580 —Ch 4 is just an AN, not a chapter
  20. Protective custody 544199996 IN REVIEWS • by Cas, 2035429505: author response, not a review • by Cas, 2035433545: ditto • by Cas, 2035436046: ditto Sanctuary 22579 IN REVIEWS • by Mu-chan, 2035359947: there is no review, just a line of ********
  21. On the other side 25447 Menu 1 • somesomething • shaky th, th, Menu 2 • the inflaion.ion. • thy, hy, he • listenintenntently • growdreadread Menu 4 • ll! ll! Ewww! [Will! Will!] • youngey, by, but • chesAfteAfter Menu 5 • thime ime • T was was just Menu 6 • eynd snd sweet • thingide ide his Menu 7 • loa loads of • Willihut hut down Menu 8 • walforefore Menu 9 • fingelipplippery Menu 10 • gind fnd found • ppinpping Menu 11 • pleasell...Wll...Will • hiHe jHe jerked • and sext next to him • Buf Buffy, and Menu 12 • became and and • robarobably Menu 14 • wpproppropriate • rattratty locks Menu 15 • Shakinf thf the • be mak make damn Menu 16 • weekter,ter, • anloooloooong [think this is intended to be an exaggerated “loooong”] Menu 18 • openit ant and • could hole n son some Menu 19 • leg frg from • to be invie, te, • themselfromfrom • whs sts still Take me as i am 544189497 Menu 1 —extended AN, not a chapter
  22. On the other side 25447 IN REVIEWS • by Mel, 203274: pleaseh thh the next • by D, 2128978: let me know w, ok, okay? • by Mel, 215219: what’s goin? W? Who’s • by ukebishounen, 291551: love your hry ary and A spandery fairy tale 544199783 IN REVIEW • by Cas, 2035427573: author response, not a review
  23. Addictive personalities 24113 Ch 1 • recievn ann anonymous • If yost sst say it Ch 2 • at the pto and then • lic licked Ch 3 • ou tthe the shower Ch 7 —just an AN, not a chapter
  24. Addictive personalities 24113 IN REVIEWS • by Becky, 200230: tstorstory • by Argo, 201434: as soon assibssible
  25. Under my skin 600030225 —okay, this is really bothering me. i KNOW i have seen this passage in a story in the last few days but i can’t remember which one: ===== “Don’t see why I have to be tied up,” Spike pouted. “It’s just while I’m sleeping,” Xander yawned. “Like I’d bite you anyway.” “Oh, you would.” “Not bloody likely.” “I happen to be very biteable, pal. I’m moist and delicious.” ===== and since i haven’t read any dayrunner stories in the last several pages of story index...that worries me! i googled the last line by xander and apparently it was in one of the actual episodes...so maybe it’s just that more than one ff writer used it in a story. do you think that’s a safe assumption? if you google it, the quote is all over the place out there on quote websites.
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