Solaris

Indeed, the more beta readers like you, the better we writers will become. Beth

I have several chapters ready for beta and I would love to have someone who knows InuYasha anime to help beta this story for me. I have skype which is the same handle as my AIM handle. I'm on it every night. Please state you came from AFF when you contact me on Skype. Thank you, Beth

Yeah, she's even on DeviantART as Bonita Prime and even there she's nuts. She even threatened to commit suicide because her followers had found out that she was a thief and a liar, they returned to her and now believe her claims even after they learned that she lied to them. She is a big ass lying bitch and her stories that is done are rank to the point that I will never beta for her again. Beth

She lied about her age being 36 as that's her Transformers character's age and she is crazy. She even had a ED page filled with her lies and thefts of other people's photos and other stuff. Go here to see the stuff that is spoken about her: Mrs. Optimus Prime's ED Page. And there are other people on DeviantART who has encountered her craziness. TRMOP as everyone calls her, her stories are rank beyond belief. No beta reader in their right mind would really help her as she would rather just copy and paste someone else's story into her story and claim it as hers. Beth

She isn't mature for a 24 year old. I told her to read other people's stories and do the same with her story and rewrite her story. Send it back to me and I'll edit it. She e-mailed me telling me that she posted it. She was told to e-mail me the copy when she got it finished. She was told to send it to me but she posted it on FF.net. I left her a review telling her in no simple terms that a beta reader doesn't like being told that someone had posted a story before being edited, that is a slap to their face and I told her that don't consider me her beta reader anymore. She hasn't replied or sent me an e-mail since. I told the girl I betaed for the ground rules with a warning not to piss me off with any funny business and she sent me the test chapter to test me, with plagiarized stuff in the story itself from another writer I was beta reading at the time. Yes, she is a known plagiarist on FF.net her name MrsOptimusPrime or Bonita Prime on FF.net. Her stories are crap and plus she plagiarizes other authors' work in her stories. I make sure the people who I beta read for understand what I look for from them after I edit their story. I would give example of a page to the person I'm betaing for and tell them what I will be expecting from them as I will want to see the edits after I did the first edit as most people end up adding more to the chapter and I edit that before sending it back to them. Most of the time, I get it at least three times before it is posted online. I will now beta read for only one person and she knows what I want from her amd I know what she wants from me. Beth

I'm doing it and already at 22k. That image is clickable, which will lead you to my NaNoWriMo page. Buddy up with me if you are doing it, I'll buddy up with anyone who is doing it. It is fun. Beth

I beta read for this one girl and she sent me what she called a test to test my skill. I told her that no beta reader likes to be tested like that. She said it was her online daughter's idea to test me. I told her she could end up losing me faster than she thinks. If you were in my shoes and you were given this test, wouldn't you be pissed. She sent me the real chapter for me to beta read. I gave her a harsh critic to her story, basically telling her she really needs to rewrite the story, but she just took what I did and left my suggestions of rewriting the story entirely. Her story was not very good, as she didn't really do much of anything as in making her OFC more than a stick figure and a Mary Sue. I ended up dumping her soon after and it has ended my beta reading career but if someone I know and I know they write very well, I may beta read for them. Solaris

This coming Wednesday, I will be taking the driving part of my test. After taking 22 days of driving lessons (not every day, every other day, excluding weekends) from my mother, putting into use all of my years of watching them driving, I am finally putting their lessons into action and soon, very soon I will be a driver instead of a student. It would have happened on September 20th, but my older brother has the white car that I had been learning in. I have been driving my dad's vehicle and a loaner for a few days. Now on this coming Tuesday, I will be borrowing my grandmother's car to drive around town till Wednesday when I will take the actual driving test itself. Wish me luck gang, I may need all the luck, I can get. Beth

Thanks I forgot about the name generators. Now, I can work in my original story and work on giving offsprings to Sesshoumaru and my character's names. Beth

I'm actually working out a story plot to my next original story set on another planet and it is somewhat based on the idea of She-Ra, minus the woman herself. It is the names of the characters that is giving me bloody fucking fits! I have five males, two are not named yet, searching for names for them. I have 7 females of which two are not named and one of them is the leading lady of the whole story. I know I could use my handle of Solaris for one of the two characters but I do not wish to use it for the leading lady. Can anyone suggest good names for the characters who do not have a name? Thanks, Solaris

I would love to have you as a beta reader, if you are still open. I'm doing an InuYasha fic. OFC/Sesshomaru fic, though this pairing is not really matched up till later on in the story. The story title is The day love found me. There won't be any sex for several chapters, about ten to fifteen chapters or even longer. I have seven chapters ready to be beta read. I have problems with grammar, sentence structure and I tend to be wordy at times. I'm trying my best to make this story the best I can do. I can send the fic to you by RTF by e-mail either in chapter format or the entire story. Right now, the story is rated PG13, but the overall rating is NC-18. I have an original female character who will grow up alongside Sesshomaru and later they end up getting together. Yes, there will be at least two fights that they will do against each other, one when he's a young pup and when he's older. If you can help me with being my beta reader, I would like that very much. I can be contacted either by replying to this message or by e-mail at breyerloverz @ yahoo.com or by AIM ladyducaine. For AIM, please state you are from Adultfanfiction.net as I may end up ignoring your IM. Thank you. Beth AKA Solaris

Oy, but that is in a way a good thing to be able to upgrade the forum. How long will that take? Beth

Thanks Jennie, for the update. I will not be worried when the site doesn't come up on Friday morning. Beth

Star, those words are magic to my ears or eyes. I have sent you a PM. I hope you are still taking on authors. Beth AKA Solaris.

The story title is The day love found me. There won't be any sex for several chapters, about ten to fifteen chapters. I have seven chapters ready to be beta read. I have problems with grammar, sentence structure and I tend to be wordy at times. I'm trying my best to make this story my best. I can send the fic to you by RTF by e-mail either in chapter format or the entire story. Right now, the story is rated PG13, but the overall rating is NC-18. I have an original female character who will grow up alongside Sesshomaru and later they end up getting together. Yes, there will be at least two fights that they will do against each other, one when he's a young pup and when he's older. If anyone can help me with being my beta reader, I would like that very much. I can be contacted either by replying to this post, PM or by e-mail at breyerloverz @ yahoo.com or by AIM ladyducaine. For AIM, please state you are from Adultfanfiction.net as I may end up ignoring your IM. Thank you. Beth AKA Solaris

You can now relax, Melrick, she cannot bother you anymore and if she does report her butt. Solaris

Haven't had much time to consider reloading the avatar to my webpage. Will do it shortly. Beth

True, she just had to kick Jaxxy out of the account. Solaris

Yes, Melrick, it means Amy has been officially kicked out of being site owner, admin but now she is only a member of this site. She has no control over what happens on this site any longer. All she is now is a member. We no longer have to hear her whine about her life or see her demand donations from the members again. She is ousted for good. Apollo is back for good and everyone can thank me for bringing her back. I still had Apollo's phone number from when I was co-owner with her and I called her about a week ago tonight and told her everything that has transpired with the site and it was only yesterday, she talked with Greg at Nexcess and regained ownership over Adultfanfiction from Amy. Apollo is here for good and I am so glad! Solaris

*pounces on Apollo* Welcome back, Apollo! Welcome back! Solaris