Luminita

i have list of plot bunnie's i'm trying to compile. As for how many stories i could handel at a time 3 max as lon as its not the same series.

I really enjoy a good Yaoi or Yuri as long as it is well written I'll read everthing from non-con to Mpreg. But of course i have set of criteria for whether(sp?) a story is up to par of not, and it depends upon the if the story is a fanfic or original. Fanfiction 1.The character must be as close to character as possible. 2.No creature fics without some sort of explanation. 3.same goes for Mpreg. 4.Make sure all names of people and places are spelled right and located where they would be in the story.(ie. dont put hogwarts in rhode island if its in scottland.) 5. Spelling and puctuation is a must, especially if your using another language in your fic. 6. generally i like multi chapter fic. 7. A good summery is a must. Original Fanfiction 1. A good summery. 2.Above average spelling and grammar. 3.Well thought out main characters. 4.A good plotline is a must, and it has no set plot the plot must develope in a decent manner as the story goes. 5.Mpreg as always should have an explanation. 6. Flashbacks should always work for the scen in interupts or leads you to. 7. Build the world for your fic so i the reader can imagine what its like. 8. Chapter aren't over wordered or over simplified. 9. If its a periode type fiction stay reasonably inside that periode. 10. Enjoy what your doing no one likes a writter who seems to be pained to write there story!

Thank you, I'm glad that you don't hold my characters cleche profile against me or her. I'm making it a romance story were her love intrest actually has to some how get to her and bring her out of her rather hard shell. I could make that love intrest her best friend, but i think that would be to cliched and generic.

Yup I know what you mean, how about the name mercury blue. Mercury is silver in color, and at times it looks slightly blueish.

actually my grand dad had eyes that shade of blue, and both his parents were this kind of mix. His eyes were so pale a shade of blue they almost seemed silver.

Thank you, i appreciate your feed back. I hope that some others give me some feed back on my character.

I hope that this modified profile sound more realistic. Please give me feed back on it. Fandom: Original fiction Name of character: .Akira Caoimhe Nakamura Race of character: Mixed asian and european Age of character: 16 Height of character: 5 feet Weight of character: 135 lbs. Brief background of character: she was born in a small new england town. Akira moved to Ireland to be close to her maternal grandmother who was seriously ailing, at the age of five. Three years later her parents die in a car crash, and she is sent to live with a surpisingly liberal great aunt. Character's position or job: Tenth grade high school student Strengths/Skills: She's an exceptional artist. She can also make her own clothing, and frequently does so. Smart and well read. Are these skills typical of the fandom? If not, why?: Depends on the story really, it is in some stories, but most of the time it isn't combined. Weaknesses/Bad habits: Atisocial and slightly paranoid. she also tends to snap at every one even her best and only friend. Tends to nibble on the skin of her fingers when worried about something, or to bite her nails until they bleed. Distinctive features, if any: silvery blue eyes Are these features unique in the fandom? If so, why?: Not really Connections to canon characters (if any): It's my own piece of work so no connection to any cannon characters for other fandoms How does your character get on with those around him/her?: Generally apathetic, and disintrested in people. Seems to hate every one but her best friend. Doesn't speak to any one but said best friend unless absolutely nessecary, and even then might not speak to any one else. What does the other characters think of your character when they met her/him?: Generally other characters are put of by the way she acts. Most don't like her at all, and find her to be snobish.

I would greatly appreciate feedback about this character. I want to make her mutidimentional, yet not overly exagerated. She's destined to be one of the main characters in my next story, so I dont want her to drag down the story. Fandom: Original fiction Name of character: .Akira Caoimhe Nakamura Race of character: Mixed asian and european Age of character: 16 Height of character: 5 feet Weight of character: 135 lbs. Brief background of character: she was born in a small new england town. Akira moved to Ireland to be close to her maternal grandmother who was seriously ailing, at the age of five. Three years later her parents die in a car crash, and she is sent to live with a surpisingly liberal great aunt. Character's position or job: Tenth grade high school student Strengths/Skills: She's an exceptional artist and writer. Are these skills typical of the fandom? If not, why?: Depends on the story really, it is in some stories, but most of the time it isn't combined. Weaknesses/Bad habits: Tends to ignore people in general, and can have an overly acidic tone when speaking with others outside of her social circle. Distinctive features, if any: silvery blue eyes Are these features unique in the fandom? If so, why?: Not really Connections to canon characters (if any): It's my own piece of work so no connection to any cannon characters for other fandoms How does your character get on with those around him/her?: Generally apathetic, but fiercely loyal. Sarcastic and witty around her friends, but can seem condesending to others outside of her social circle. What does the other characters think of your character when they met her/him?: Generally other characters are put of by the way she acts. But if she allows them to see how she really is, they tend to end up liking her a great deal.

I don't mind, what words are used as long as they fit the story. But horrible grammer and spelling just turns me off of a story.

I need a beta fore my stories in general, I work in Harry Potter and original mainly. My beta needs to be able to look and identify and fix any cliches that pop up with out interfereing with the plot line of the story. They also have to be really good with grammer and spelling, i tend to have troube with little words like there and their. I work mainly in slash fiction, but do occationally get into het and femslash. You can sudjest different things to add or take away from the story as long as i get good examples, and it would fit in to the story in the long run. Constructive critacism(sp?) is really welcome as long as its well thought out. Deadly nightshade is an original slash story , and the first story in my poisonous matter series. It chronicals the last year of high school for my main characters, Archibald and Aodfionn. Changes in life is a Harry/Draco male pregnancy. Basicly a cousin comes to visit harry and changes his life for the better. Hybrid love is another Harry/Draco story, that takes place mainly at hogwarts. It follows how the boy relationship develops after the arival of my original character. At times it gets into the relationship of my OC and hermione. The story is also a male pregnancy type thing.

I need a beta for my story Changes in Life, Its a harry/draco story and a male preg. If your interested i could send you a couple of chapters to gt a feel for the story, I just hope you will do me the honor of being my beta.