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    JayDee got a reaction from FairySlayer in Week 22: 3-6-11   
    Pen Name: JD/JayDee
    Story link: Lara Croft's Sheep God Trials
    Type of fic: Flashfic
    Rating: Adult++
    Fandom: Games > Lara Croft/Tomb Raider
    Pairing: Lara(post TF code) x Sheep Chasing Guy
    Warnings: Beast, ChallengeFic, COMPLETE, Contro, Humil, M/F, MCD, OC, Oneshot, PWP, RapeFic, Scat, TF, Violence
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    JayDee got a reaction from FairySlayer in JayDee's Review Reply Thread (Books)   
    Eh, there's the problem. The hilarity! I can't match that style. I think I might just go for something Aussie so I can try and fit in the good old phrase "Sheepchaser."

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    JayDee got a reaction from FairySlayer in JayDee's Review Reply Thread (Books)   
    A first for me with the Dream prompt as I re-visited a previous prompt for a second part: The Horse and His Cock. There's a few folks who've done the prompts adding each one to ongoing storyline (you know who you are ) on and off, and I admire the extra level of challenge that brings - same with the extra level in the drabbles and twitfics, though in a different sense of course. As a PWPer (and 950+ views and a total of 6 reviews on two parts for degeenerate pwp probably has some of the more talented authors a little wound up.... sorry folks!) I just take the easy "different topic each week" button and only take the nosex route if it seems worthwhile (3 times now! 3! Proudest of slumber...)
    ...I don't know where I was going with that paragraph. I read it back and it kind of makes no sense. Just had to stop typing for a minute and sort something out and I completely lost my thread. I leave it here as a memento to "wha? huh?"
    So, two additional reviews for this story - thanks to both of you for your comments and reviews on this story! You rock my little world with your feedback.
    Fairy Slayer - Do you remember the story I did for Gifts about the too-well endowed Orc who didn't want to hurt his friend? Well, I originally had the basis of the idea to continue that but decided it would probably not work too well with the sweetness, so figured it worked better in an already PWP story. Idea recycling: Ya can't beat it! Yeah, I felt I needed to give Aravis a reason to dream of having the cock in her. Once again I am amused by the following week's prompt - I do a guy fucking a horse, and then the next prompt is "sheep" which just cries out for some crude rural stereotyping... Or maybe telling the story of the greatest romance ever alluded too in the Blackadder universe: Lord Melchett and Flossy/Ludwig.
    BronxWench - Yep, back to Arvavis/Bree - They're unlikly to have a movie but at least rule 34 of the internet gets them some porn! Interesting is one way to look at it, go to sleep, dream of that... some might say scary and offputting I'm just messin'
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    JayDee got a reaction from FairySlayer in Week 21: 2-27-2011   
    Pen Name: JD/JayDee
    Story link: The Horse and His Cock - Chapter 2: A Dream of Horse Cock
    Type of fic: Flashfic
    Rating: Adult++
    Fandom: Books > Chronicles of Narnia
    Pairing: Bree x Aravis, Hermit x Hwin(briefly)
    Warnings: AU/AR, Beast, ChallengeFic, COMPLETE, M/F, Oneshot, Oral, PWP
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    JayDee got a reaction from FairySlayer in JayDee's Review Reply Thread (Games)   
    Fairy Slayer - Thank you for your review of The Scout's Dream
    Yeah, I totally wanted to make it clear it was all a dream. The title may have been a little blatant in that regard, but at least it led to much merriment for me when I saw this week's Dream prompt I'm pleased the intensity came across, I was hoping for a fast acting came-a-gusher type feel. Related to an old promotional comic/one off war mode, I totally feel there was more to the Soldier/Demoman relationship than a deep love of projectile weapons... well, unless it was a certain fleshy type. So writing the Soldier getting curious about the Scout seemed natural to me
    My name is enough? Heh, I blush! You really are too kind, especially as I really don't expect most folks to want to look at some of the hardcore PWP shit I write. I expect you've got hardened to the worst links of the internet on 4chan!
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    JayDee got a reaction from FairySlayer in Week 20: 2-20-2011   
    Pen Name: JD/JayDee
    Story link: The Scout's Dream
    Type of fic: Flashfic
    Rating: Adult++
    Fandom: Games > Team Fortress 2
    Pairing: Scout x Soldier
    Warnings: Anal, Bigotry, ChallengeFic, COMPLETE, Language, M/M, Oneshot, Oral, PWP, WD, WS
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    JayDee got a reaction from FairySlayer in Who Do You Write Like?   
    First sample - Cory Doctorow (uh... was mentioned in some xkcd strips but no idea who s/he is)
    Second sample - Arthur Clarke (Him I know!)
    Final sample - David Foster Wallace (again, I say huh?)
    I can only assume it issues possibly flattering generalisations in the hopes of selling amazon books and getting the referral fees. Or some other commercial application I missed??
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    JayDee got a reaction from FairySlayer in Week 19: 2-13-11   
    Pen Name: JD/JayDee
    Story link: The Slumber Party of Evil Doom
    Type of fic: Flashfic
    Rating: Adult
    Fandom: Paranormal/Supernatural > General
    Pairing: NONE
    Warnings: AFFO, ChallengeFic, COMPLETE, Language, NoSex, OC, Oneshot, Violence(Mild, brief)
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    JayDee got a reaction from FairySlayer in JayDee's (Originals) review reply, story discussion and additional notes thread   
    Hmmm, so, Week 19 prompt slumber led to me scraping the bottom of the idea barrel with The Slumber Party of Evil Doom, because I didn't want to do another sleeping sex story so soon and, well, my imagination must be kinda narrow when it comes to that shit
    Apollo - Thanks for the review - She could always redeem them, but I think that might be Angelic euphemism for kill anyway... "There are sinners in Sodom!" "Redeem them! Use lots of fire!"
    pittwitch - Thank you for the review - I guess my evil theme is evilly continuing in an evil manner Yeah, it's kinda like that other old scary story if you ended it like "The suddenly cut-off threatening phone call came from within the house... but the babysitter wasn't worried as that phone was in the same room she kept a pet Nightgaunt while babysitting" Different approach to killer in the house stories
    Fairy Slayer - Thanks also! - Yeah, I guess the title hints the evil is doomed from the start? Thanks loads for pointing out the typo. I read this one even closer than usual to get the word count trimmed, and still missed that! D'oh. By "fish" it's also probably "fish shaped souls" in hell - what happens to the whalers after death "There's another demon standing over the barrel!" "Don't worry Ahab, she's a crap shot."
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    JayDee got a reaction from Shadowknight12 in Random journally stuff   
    Some parents have weird ideas about what's a good idea to put their kids in for. And that goes double for celebrity parents. Your friend's reaction was the smart one!
    I doubt anybody would want to act out that story. Maybe a big fan of violent movies.
    Oddly, I'm sure I read a story once about a teenager reading his older sister's diary, finding she wanted to screw him, and them ending up getting it on... now I kinda wanna go look for it. Was a pretty good story. Bah.
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    JayDee got a reaction from Shadowknight12 in Random journally stuff   
    I can see there's a funny side, but everytime I think about it all it comes back to the poor woman finding all this stuff out about how her brother feels and thinks. Give me a few weeks I'll be totally laughing at the unexpected weirdness of it all.
    Requests known fictional characters are still good - I'm pretty sure this forum's KZ-01 isn't Felicia Hardy's brother, say, so I'm not worried about that story
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    JayDee got a reaction from FairySlayer in Random journally stuff   
    Forum's here, so, eh... Lets see,
    I don't write real person stories/rpf/celeb whatcha wanna call it. I used to, and not all of 'em were especially violently themed. There was a Wrasslin' story that was pretty funny, and another one that seemed unpleasant but was an in character roleplay (which, got stolen and had the names changed by another "author" who then got banned from another site for submitting his version). Anyway, I took all my real person stuff down where I had posted it - except for one site where the admin refuses to remove any stories, but, hey, it's the internet ya don't stick stuff on the internet if ya don't want it to stay there in one form or another.
    I also used to do a lot of requests, celeb requests, fanfic requests, a couple original stories... I still would be 'cept I don't really get the time for writing like I used too. I liked requests, and they're about the only stories I write where it feels important to get a decent chunk of feedback from somebody, specifically the requesting person. Sure it's nice to get feedback on other stories, good or bad (gotta love funny flames), but I'm really not bothered not to get a review for most. I skimmed through and have 7 stories that never got a single review on AFF, though I know some of them got comments elsewhere, didn't stop me posting to AFF! Requests though, ya do a request someone wants, you try and get it close to what they want, and for them to not even tell you they don't like it (if that's the case) is sorta annoying.
    That's kinda a tangent though. The two points are: Used to write real person stories, and used to have time for requests.
    Anyway, back in early 2007 or so there was a guy who used to post on another forum who had an incest fetish. Not a "some stories with incest are kinda interesting" take on it, but basically it seemed that if it wasn't incest it wasn't sexy for him. Hardcore fetish type, ya know? He did a bit of artwork and he liked incest stories and I think he probably quite liked the Luke/Leia story I did, so he asked me to write him a story. It was pretty obvious that the male character was "him" or an idealised early 20s him anyhow. It was basically a self insert OC and so back then I had it in the originals catagory here. I'd also donet two other stories with his self insert because, as much as anything, I liked the feedback I got off him. As I say, seemed to count more with requests.
    A month or so after taking down my real person stuff - co-incidently, I figure - someone reviewed complaining he knew the guy's art online and since it was a real person it should've been in the other section, fair point. I hadn't thought about it when taking down the other stuff, because it was in originals. So I deleted it and being non-celeb/non-scifi/non-superhero etc it wasn't availailable in any of the other special interest places I posted my stuff, so getting it off AFF was enough. It had been on a gory story board, but I didn't think it kept stories on that were too old.
    Anyway, he seemed to drift away from other forums I'd seen him at and what with not doing any more stories with his self insert I pretty much forgot about it all until last sunday, when I got an email. The stories were visible in a subsequently posted archive from the old gory site and came up as first search result for the two characters names. One of the three had almost been randomly reposted on a music forum by one user trolling another, and that was the second result. Even on safe search. Now, the person sending the email was the current partner of the person who requested the stories, and she explained a few things such as
    1) His self insert used his real name. It's kinda a rare name and sort of cool, so that and the fact that requesting dirty stories that are identifably about you for the internet makes no sense, meant I'd always assumed it was a fake name.
    2) The sister character (these being tales of incest) was... his... real... sister. Real name, all the details and shit, were hers. Very much hers. This is slightly less belieable in taking a request from someone than them using their real name but then I did once see this guy say he admired Governer Palin (as was), so, y'know, alarm bells.
    3) They have another brother who discovered the requesting brother's incest fetish and, more specifically, the sister's central and focussed part in it. (Remember how their names brought up my old stories first of all? Well, I gotta assume that may have had a part in this amateur sleath's discovery. I mean, "I'm Feeling Lucky" has never been such a poisoned challace...)
    4) Said Brother told the rest of the family. I bet their aged Mom wasn't about to submit my writing to oprah's book club, that's all I can say about that get together. Oh, that and I feel very bad for the sister, you might think me incapable of empathy/sympathy... all of them except apathy, but I feel bad about this. That's not the kinda shit you want to read about you and your brother (or indeed, see depicted in Mr artistic genius' apparantly facially accurate artwork.)
    The places it was still being unexpectedly hosted removed the copies but it'll still be showing in web and search engine caches for a while to come to that family's irritation. Google auto remove copies from their engine at the click of a request button, but there's dozens more out there waiting for bots to re-spider across and update the caches.
    Anyway, long story short, a story I wrote back in 2007 partly to be nice to a guy and partly because I wanted me some feedback came back and boned me. Suprise booksex, even. And didn't buy me dinner first. I'm not posting for sympathy, ya don't write what I write and look for sympathy, but it's a cautionary tale. If somebody wants an original story writing.... tell 'em you're gonna pick the damn names. Unless it's something totally furry.
    Oh, and the other caution note is: If you want to request a writer do a story about your fantasy of your sister, use a few fake details, huh?
    Incidently, while looking into how many copies were around of that story I also found a celebriry fakes site that has taken one of my old and particuarly poor quality stories, made about half visible and has a link saying users have to register for more. If that's the level of their sales enticement they're lucky to still afford their domain hosting fees because it's a pretty shit story.
    Boy, I used anyway a lot in this here journally rant thing.
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    JayDee got a reaction from FairySlayer in Random journally stuff   
    Some parents have weird ideas about what's a good idea to put their kids in for. And that goes double for celebrity parents. Your friend's reaction was the smart one!
    I doubt anybody would want to act out that story. Maybe a big fan of violent movies.
    Oddly, I'm sure I read a story once about a teenager reading his older sister's diary, finding she wanted to screw him, and them ending up getting it on... now I kinda wanna go look for it. Was a pretty good story. Bah.
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    JayDee got a reaction from Shadowknight12 in User Posted Dribs, Drabs & Doggy Tales Challenge   
    This prompt is now closed (as of February 28th 2011).
    Nothing to stop you being prompted to write a story of course, but the rewards and whatnot are no longer available, not a problem there really
    Reminder: Same rules apply for user prompts as the weekly prompt.
    This user prompt is: Snuff
    Heartfelt thanks to anybody who takes part.
    In place of the AFF weekly challenge Reward banners: I will read & review at least the first chapter or a complete oneshot of any AFF hosted story - (Provide link at bottom of reply post) - OR - send you 10 million forum points (registered users only). Please state reward wanted.
    One reward only per user - while the reward is probably worthless to many, leaving only the challenge of the challenge, I feel I need to state this just in case a twitficing review fanatic with a spare hour feels like banging in 50 entries of gentleman's powder pinching, and asked 50 reviews on huge oneshots in reply. It's the internet - stranger things have happened!
    The closing date for this user prompt is 28th February 2011.
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    JayDee got a reaction from Shadowknight12 in Random journally stuff   
    Forum's here, so, eh... Lets see,
    I don't write real person stories/rpf/celeb whatcha wanna call it. I used to, and not all of 'em were especially violently themed. There was a Wrasslin' story that was pretty funny, and another one that seemed unpleasant but was an in character roleplay (which, got stolen and had the names changed by another "author" who then got banned from another site for submitting his version). Anyway, I took all my real person stuff down where I had posted it - except for one site where the admin refuses to remove any stories, but, hey, it's the internet ya don't stick stuff on the internet if ya don't want it to stay there in one form or another.
    I also used to do a lot of requests, celeb requests, fanfic requests, a couple original stories... I still would be 'cept I don't really get the time for writing like I used too. I liked requests, and they're about the only stories I write where it feels important to get a decent chunk of feedback from somebody, specifically the requesting person. Sure it's nice to get feedback on other stories, good or bad (gotta love funny flames), but I'm really not bothered not to get a review for most. I skimmed through and have 7 stories that never got a single review on AFF, though I know some of them got comments elsewhere, didn't stop me posting to AFF! Requests though, ya do a request someone wants, you try and get it close to what they want, and for them to not even tell you they don't like it (if that's the case) is sorta annoying.
    That's kinda a tangent though. The two points are: Used to write real person stories, and used to have time for requests.
    Anyway, back in early 2007 or so there was a guy who used to post on another forum who had an incest fetish. Not a "some stories with incest are kinda interesting" take on it, but basically it seemed that if it wasn't incest it wasn't sexy for him. Hardcore fetish type, ya know? He did a bit of artwork and he liked incest stories and I think he probably quite liked the Luke/Leia story I did, so he asked me to write him a story. It was pretty obvious that the male character was "him" or an idealised early 20s him anyhow. It was basically a self insert OC and so back then I had it in the originals catagory here. I'd also donet two other stories with his self insert because, as much as anything, I liked the feedback I got off him. As I say, seemed to count more with requests.
    A month or so after taking down my real person stuff - co-incidently, I figure - someone reviewed complaining he knew the guy's art online and since it was a real person it should've been in the other section, fair point. I hadn't thought about it when taking down the other stuff, because it was in originals. So I deleted it and being non-celeb/non-scifi/non-superhero etc it wasn't availailable in any of the other special interest places I posted my stuff, so getting it off AFF was enough. It had been on a gory story board, but I didn't think it kept stories on that were too old.
    Anyway, he seemed to drift away from other forums I'd seen him at and what with not doing any more stories with his self insert I pretty much forgot about it all until last sunday, when I got an email. The stories were visible in a subsequently posted archive from the old gory site and came up as first search result for the two characters names. One of the three had almost been randomly reposted on a music forum by one user trolling another, and that was the second result. Even on safe search. Now, the person sending the email was the current partner of the person who requested the stories, and she explained a few things such as
    1) His self insert used his real name. It's kinda a rare name and sort of cool, so that and the fact that requesting dirty stories that are identifably about you for the internet makes no sense, meant I'd always assumed it was a fake name.
    2) The sister character (these being tales of incest) was... his... real... sister. Real name, all the details and shit, were hers. Very much hers. This is slightly less belieable in taking a request from someone than them using their real name but then I did once see this guy say he admired Governer Palin (as was), so, y'know, alarm bells.
    3) They have another brother who discovered the requesting brother's incest fetish and, more specifically, the sister's central and focussed part in it. (Remember how their names brought up my old stories first of all? Well, I gotta assume that may have had a part in this amateur sleath's discovery. I mean, "I'm Feeling Lucky" has never been such a poisoned challace...)
    4) Said Brother told the rest of the family. I bet their aged Mom wasn't about to submit my writing to oprah's book club, that's all I can say about that get together. Oh, that and I feel very bad for the sister, you might think me incapable of empathy/sympathy... all of them except apathy, but I feel bad about this. That's not the kinda shit you want to read about you and your brother (or indeed, see depicted in Mr artistic genius' apparantly facially accurate artwork.)
    The places it was still being unexpectedly hosted removed the copies but it'll still be showing in web and search engine caches for a while to come to that family's irritation. Google auto remove copies from their engine at the click of a request button, but there's dozens more out there waiting for bots to re-spider across and update the caches.
    Anyway, long story short, a story I wrote back in 2007 partly to be nice to a guy and partly because I wanted me some feedback came back and boned me. Suprise booksex, even. And didn't buy me dinner first. I'm not posting for sympathy, ya don't write what I write and look for sympathy, but it's a cautionary tale. If somebody wants an original story writing.... tell 'em you're gonna pick the damn names. Unless it's something totally furry.
    Oh, and the other caution note is: If you want to request a writer do a story about your fantasy of your sister, use a few fake details, huh?
    Incidently, while looking into how many copies were around of that story I also found a celebriry fakes site that has taken one of my old and particuarly poor quality stories, made about half visible and has a link saying users have to register for more. If that's the level of their sales enticement they're lucky to still afford their domain hosting fees because it's a pretty shit story.
    Boy, I used anyway a lot in this here journally rant thing.
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    JayDee got a reaction from DemonGoddess in Random journally stuff   
    Forum's here, so, eh... Lets see,
    I don't write real person stories/rpf/celeb whatcha wanna call it. I used to, and not all of 'em were especially violently themed. There was a Wrasslin' story that was pretty funny, and another one that seemed unpleasant but was an in character roleplay (which, got stolen and had the names changed by another "author" who then got banned from another site for submitting his version). Anyway, I took all my real person stuff down where I had posted it - except for one site where the admin refuses to remove any stories, but, hey, it's the internet ya don't stick stuff on the internet if ya don't want it to stay there in one form or another.
    I also used to do a lot of requests, celeb requests, fanfic requests, a couple original stories... I still would be 'cept I don't really get the time for writing like I used too. I liked requests, and they're about the only stories I write where it feels important to get a decent chunk of feedback from somebody, specifically the requesting person. Sure it's nice to get feedback on other stories, good or bad (gotta love funny flames), but I'm really not bothered not to get a review for most. I skimmed through and have 7 stories that never got a single review on AFF, though I know some of them got comments elsewhere, didn't stop me posting to AFF! Requests though, ya do a request someone wants, you try and get it close to what they want, and for them to not even tell you they don't like it (if that's the case) is sorta annoying.
    That's kinda a tangent though. The two points are: Used to write real person stories, and used to have time for requests.
    Anyway, back in early 2007 or so there was a guy who used to post on another forum who had an incest fetish. Not a "some stories with incest are kinda interesting" take on it, but basically it seemed that if it wasn't incest it wasn't sexy for him. Hardcore fetish type, ya know? He did a bit of artwork and he liked incest stories and I think he probably quite liked the Luke/Leia story I did, so he asked me to write him a story. It was pretty obvious that the male character was "him" or an idealised early 20s him anyhow. It was basically a self insert OC and so back then I had it in the originals catagory here. I'd also donet two other stories with his self insert because, as much as anything, I liked the feedback I got off him. As I say, seemed to count more with requests.
    A month or so after taking down my real person stuff - co-incidently, I figure - someone reviewed complaining he knew the guy's art online and since it was a real person it should've been in the other section, fair point. I hadn't thought about it when taking down the other stuff, because it was in originals. So I deleted it and being non-celeb/non-scifi/non-superhero etc it wasn't availailable in any of the other special interest places I posted my stuff, so getting it off AFF was enough. It had been on a gory story board, but I didn't think it kept stories on that were too old.
    Anyway, he seemed to drift away from other forums I'd seen him at and what with not doing any more stories with his self insert I pretty much forgot about it all until last sunday, when I got an email. The stories were visible in a subsequently posted archive from the old gory site and came up as first search result for the two characters names. One of the three had almost been randomly reposted on a music forum by one user trolling another, and that was the second result. Even on safe search. Now, the person sending the email was the current partner of the person who requested the stories, and she explained a few things such as
    1) His self insert used his real name. It's kinda a rare name and sort of cool, so that and the fact that requesting dirty stories that are identifably about you for the internet makes no sense, meant I'd always assumed it was a fake name.
    2) The sister character (these being tales of incest) was... his... real... sister. Real name, all the details and shit, were hers. Very much hers. This is slightly less belieable in taking a request from someone than them using their real name but then I did once see this guy say he admired Governer Palin (as was), so, y'know, alarm bells.
    3) They have another brother who discovered the requesting brother's incest fetish and, more specifically, the sister's central and focussed part in it. (Remember how their names brought up my old stories first of all? Well, I gotta assume that may have had a part in this amateur sleath's discovery. I mean, "I'm Feeling Lucky" has never been such a poisoned challace...)
    4) Said Brother told the rest of the family. I bet their aged Mom wasn't about to submit my writing to oprah's book club, that's all I can say about that get together. Oh, that and I feel very bad for the sister, you might think me incapable of empathy/sympathy... all of them except apathy, but I feel bad about this. That's not the kinda shit you want to read about you and your brother (or indeed, see depicted in Mr artistic genius' apparantly facially accurate artwork.)
    The places it was still being unexpectedly hosted removed the copies but it'll still be showing in web and search engine caches for a while to come to that family's irritation. Google auto remove copies from their engine at the click of a request button, but there's dozens more out there waiting for bots to re-spider across and update the caches.
    Anyway, long story short, a story I wrote back in 2007 partly to be nice to a guy and partly because I wanted me some feedback came back and boned me. Suprise booksex, even. And didn't buy me dinner first. I'm not posting for sympathy, ya don't write what I write and look for sympathy, but it's a cautionary tale. If somebody wants an original story writing.... tell 'em you're gonna pick the damn names. Unless it's something totally furry.
    Oh, and the other caution note is: If you want to request a writer do a story about your fantasy of your sister, use a few fake details, huh?
    Incidently, while looking into how many copies were around of that story I also found a celebriry fakes site that has taken one of my old and particuarly poor quality stories, made about half visible and has a link saying users have to register for more. If that's the level of their sales enticement they're lucky to still afford their domain hosting fees because it's a pretty shit story.
    Boy, I used anyway a lot in this here journally rant thing.
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    JayDee got a reaction from FairySlayer in Is there such a thing as AdultFanArt.net?   
    There's a large number of free adult fanart sites. Listing any them will probably get this page moved to the site promotion room, but off the top of my head:
    wwoec.com (specifically, the guest artists area of the linked forum wwoecforum.com for most users - is also geared towards cartoons, but other stuff accepted).
    hentai-foundry.com (fan art, original art, quality standards apply meaning this one has a high standard of artists producing stuff.)
    rule34.paheal.net (as well as individual artists posting their work, lots of other fan art gets uploaded too, no quality standards only requirement is that it must be fan work, not original characters.)
    ...the list is endless. Really endless. Google image search is all very well, but you can occasionally find what you need by going to the regular search and typing something like "Where all the free fan art jpegs at?" ...or possibly more keyword based, and asides from the permenant galleries like those above and others you've got image sharing chan boards such as fchan (furries) or gurochan (uh, no furries there. at all. sadly.) and so on. and on.
    I personally would fucking hate to see AFF start being an art plus stories site. The stories always take second place and are seen by visually-oriented fappers as worth less than the most anatomically distorted scrawl. "You spent hours on it? Fuck you, that stick figure with titties is better!" Plus, in costs terms, a picture takes more bandwidth to download than most stories.
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    JayDee got a reaction from FairySlayer in JayDee's Review Reply Thread (Movies)   
    In this thread I will reply to reviews for any of my movies based stories.
    Wow, 18 prompt stories in before doing something movie related. Yeah, there's been all kinds of media for the Wizard of Oz but the prompt story "Poppies! Poppies!" was written with the 1939 movie starring Margaret Hamilton (oh, and Judy Garland...) firmly in mind. Easy enough to avoid an original book based story as the only books I've read are Gregory Maguire's much later take The movie also has the advantage that Judy played an older Dorothy, being 16 when they started filming. It's purely a personal thing and I mean nothing against other writers, but I'd feel squicky writing it with the book version. In the end though, what can I say, it has a scene in a poppy field! I know I did a sleeping rape story not too long ago, but I think this one was sufficiently different. Especially with the monkey.
    I had to refer to the Wicked Witch of the West just as "Wicked Witch", or I would have needed an extra three words each time (at least by that stage in the film she's the only known living Witch - you'd have to be a necrophiliac foot fetishist to go for the WWotE, not that there's anything wrong with that fantasy if it moves ya...) Only 100 words, dang it!
    Anyway, reviews:
    bloodravyn: Glad it appealed to you, thanks for the comment. Awesome porn is the best kind
    pittwitch: Heartless/evil, what's the difference? Weirdly the first image I had was zombies bursting out amongst the poppy fields of Flanders a little while after the first world war... Ding, Dong, the Witch got head... I'm constantly impressed that you manage to stomach this stuff, so thanks as ever for your kind review.
    Fairy Slayer: Thanks for your review! I didn't remember a full explanation for the curse in the movie - just figured he was all tinny (but not Tiny, if ya know what I mean) but I was reading about it afterwards and, wow, some of the Tin Man stuff in the earliest book fits in the old "messed up fairy tale" tradition! Going through that sort of thing you'd expect him to be more messed up with violence, really. He just needed the skirt out the way without taking off the whole dress, although the poppy leeching inside thing is a good idea. If anybody else asks I'll say sure, that's it
    "riveted for her pleasure" - haha
    I like that, ya gotta find a way to work that into a story of some sort The reason I made a point of saying no rivets was because I figured if I went down that route then it would have ended up a lot gorier, blood everywhere. Especially if they were rough edge rivets. Probably it could be specifcially described as being more like one of those bumpy dildos, but there is the word limit stopping too much detail.
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    JayDee got a reaction from FairySlayer in Week 18: 2-6-11   
    Pen Name: JD/JayDee
    Story link: "Poppies! Poppies!"
    Type of fic: Flashfic
    Rating: Adult++
    Fandom: Movies >The Wizard of Oz (from 1939)
    Pairing: Tin Man x Dorothy, Wicked Witch x flying monkey
    Warnings: the pairings, Anthro, ChallengeFic, COMPLETE, M/F, NonCon, Oneshot, Oral, PWP, RapeFic
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    JayDee got a reaction from MoonTart in Hermione/thestral fic?   
    In which case the author missed a chance for a brilliant double gag if he didn't stick America's most popular brand of condom on the Thestral - leading to any witnesses without the right experiance to say "Weird. Why is there well stretched condom floating in the air?"
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    JayDee got a reaction from FairySlayer in PW's Review Replies for AFF Prompts   
    12 chapters in, and more to come! Whoo!
    With the story firmly established as an ongoing plot, have you thought about adding a title that says more than the AFF prompt connection? Certainly, with the way you've weaved the prompts into the continuing story it is become more than the sum of the prompts. I wonder if putting the current title as a modified A/N inside chapter one below a more plot/theme related title would deservingly draw in more readers too, though the summary probably helps there already.
    Please don't get me wrong! There would be nothing remiss in leaving the title as it is, it just occured to me is all when I was looking through again today.
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    JayDee got a reaction from FairySlayer in PW's Review Replies for AFF Prompts   
    It's a good title and I see you already changed it. Really fits the story... Now I'm a go read the new part for Drowsy
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    JayDee got a reaction from moss gypsy in WHY hasnt anyone done this?!?   
    That's crazy talk! Everyone knows Bobby and Johnny are both Peter Parker's bitches!
    ...just kidding, good luck with your request.
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    JayDee got a reaction from FairySlayer in Week 17: 1-30-11   
    Pen Name: JD/JayDee
    Story link: Jenny From The Pond
    Type of fic: Flashfic
    Rating: Adult
    Fandom: Folklore
    Pairing: N/A
    Warnings: AFFO, Language, NoSex, OC
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    JayDee got a reaction from DemonGoddess in User Posted Dribs, Drabs & Doggy Tales Challenge   
    This prompt is now closed (as of February 28th 2011).
    Nothing to stop you being prompted to write a story of course, but the rewards and whatnot are no longer available, not a problem there really
    Reminder: Same rules apply for user prompts as the weekly prompt.
    This user prompt is: Snuff
    Heartfelt thanks to anybody who takes part.
    In place of the AFF weekly challenge Reward banners: I will read & review at least the first chapter or a complete oneshot of any AFF hosted story - (Provide link at bottom of reply post) - OR - send you 10 million forum points (registered users only). Please state reward wanted.
    One reward only per user - while the reward is probably worthless to many, leaving only the challenge of the challenge, I feel I need to state this just in case a twitficing review fanatic with a spare hour feels like banging in 50 entries of gentleman's powder pinching, and asked 50 reviews on huge oneshots in reply. It's the internet - stranger things have happened!
    The closing date for this user prompt is 28th February 2011.
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