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Fandom: Harry Potter Name of character: Bethany Crane Race of character: Human Age of character: 16 Height of character: 5'3" Weight of character: 135 pounds Brief background of character: Is the youngest child of a Muggle-Born couple, who adopted her when she was two years old. She has no memories of her birth family. She has had a happy childhood, however she knows that she is missing something. She is finely told of her birth parents. She is proud that they were pure-blood, however they were also Death Eaters in Voldemort's service and were killed when they refused to turn themselves in. This fact has her emotionally torn. Family was moderately wealthy though she does not have access to this money. Several members of her mother and father's families are trying to circumvent her rightful, legal claim on her property to get at the valuable relics within the vault. Eventually uses this by pretending to help her relatives to get this wealth in exchange for information on what Voldemort and his followers are up to. This results in her being ostracized by most of the students at Hogwarts. Though she is not trusted by those she claims to be helping either. While all this is going on she is plagued by a series of dreams and visions that show her just what will happen if she fails. She must help to gather information for Harry and the DA, however she is not trusted by either the DA or her pure-blood relatives which makes convincing both harder. The dreams and visions get clearer and more real as time goes on and her ability to tell what is real and what is in her dreams is slowly fading until she can no longer tell the difference between them. She has no idea how she can succeed when she can't even believe herself. Character's position or job: Student Strengths/Skills: Alchemy, Transfiguration Are these skills typical of the fandom? If not, why?: Yes Weaknesses/Bad habits: Can be thoughtless and immature, theatrical and cruel. Plagued by fears of her own design, second guesses herself. Can seem insensitive at times and can be domineering. Sometimes spaces out at odd moments. Distinctive features, if any: Stormy gray eyes and an aloof expression Are these features unique in the fandom? If so, why?: not unique Connections to canon characters (if any): Is related to the Goyles through her uncle by marriage. Mother was a Crabb. How does your character get on with those around him/her?: She is not in constant contact with the main characters since she is in Hufflepuff. What does the other characters think of your character when they met her/him?: She is quiet, however she slowly befriends Ginny. She is seen as aloof at times and nosy others. Some do not trust her because she is a pure blood and acts like it sometimes.

Title: No Rest For the Weary Author: Draygon_Icewing Rating: A++ (One scene of human on human loving and three scenes of Cybertronian luvin.) Summary: Sam and Mikaela are getting closer to their graduation and to each other. Their tranquility is shattered when old enemies with new faces appear on a mission for vengeance and conquest. Blatant SMBB, IHChromia Anal, Bi, Death, DP, Exhib, F/M/M, H/C, Language, M/F, OC, Oral, WIP Feedback: 25 wonderful reviews. I want to thank them all Fandom: Transformers (Movie-verse) URL: http://movies.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600091327

Thankyou those who reviewed Shadow War!

How do you deal with reviewers that have no sense of subtly? I use subtle cues and clues and foreshadowing a lot in my stories. You actually have to sit down with your thinking cap on and READ and not skim through. I hate it when someone reviews that they just didn't get what I was trying to say after they admit that they just skimmed through real fast. Then they have the nerve to tell me that I am leaving important information out when I include it all in the personal thoughts of the characters. My characters have thoughts and feelings, not just words. I also remember a beta telling me early on that it is better to 'show' what you mean and not 'tell' what you want to say. Some of these people are just out for a cheap thrill and care nothing for substance and all the work that goes into fleshing a scene out with the characters thoughts and feelings to 'show' what is going on rather than just 'telling' it in dialogue or outright narration.

This is a wonderful idea. I have already reviewed several wonderful stories I would not have seen without this thread. I have several fics spreading across more than half a dozen fandoms. My Harry Potter one is on hold since it is REALLY AU since the publishing of Book 7. The Star Trek one is on hold as well pending inspiration. It cycles through my obsessions pretty regularly these days. Take a gander at My Page and see what you think.

This is very true. However, minors looking for a cheap thrill can access the stories on FF.net where as here we try to protect their fragile little minds...and our fragile little asses from sueage.

I have only deleted on review. Why? Because the fucker read neither the summary or the Author's Note inside the story and commented on my story not holding completely with cannon. When I PMed him and told him that it had AU/AR in the warnings plus a note in the summary AND in the story itself, this person gave me the silent treatment. If someone is so stupid they can not read summaries or Author Notes then they have no business leaving a review complaining about the things that I CLEARLY warned about.

Bunghole comes to mind, but that's just too Bevis. Ummm...Taught ring of muscle, pucker... not many word you could use that are 'clean'.

I am afraid that would be me...now where is my 'bang'em silly'?

Chapter five up for your enjoyment. Make sure you leave a review, even if you thought it sucked. I would like to know what I am doing wrong when 200 people read but no one reviews.

This is very true. I get very irritated when I get hundreds of hits and no reviews.

Wow...I have never met another person with Aspergers. Great to know that I am not alone.

The way I write sex scenes is like riding a roller coaster. First, there's the build-up; flirting, touching, smiling, etc. Then there's kissing and the embrace. After that it gets into the beginning of foreplay and their thoughts considering the other person involved. Then comes the actual sex. It starts slow then goes faster and faster until you reach the peak and begin the exciting journey all the way back down. Then there's the after glow. You can fit all of that in the space of a paragraph or make it the entire story. It depends on the characters you are putting together, what their sexual styles are and how deep their feelings go.

I have to agree with this. The only time that I can orgasm from penetration only is when I am on my period. I don't know why, but any other time, no matter how wet I get (And I fucking drip down my legs, people) I can't get enough stimulation from penetration to orgasm. I need my clit stimulated most of the time except for those five wonderful days I mentioned before. Also... Myth: Women can not get pregnant when they are on their period. Truth: FALSE!!! I have known several women who can not get pregnant at any other time! How's that for a biological kick in the nuts? Which is why protection at all times is necessary. And guys, when she's on the rag, wearing a condom can prevent her from getting the mother of all yeast infections since everything is wide open for obvious reasons.