Melrick

You’re not wrong about some other forums out there.  There’s some real toxic places that just seem to attract dick heads galore, and they feed off each others negativity like some arsehole mosquito.

For Drawn Together
 
Thank you for your review!  And I’m glad you enjoyed it.   The cleaning lady was pretty much a last minute, spur of the moment addition, and I tossed around which direction to take that scene, so I’m happy you approve of the direction it did go in, and how that scene went. 

Author: Melrick
Title: Drawn Together
Summary: Perry’s trip from Australia to New York City brings him physically closer to his life-long friend than ever before, a friend he's always felt an undeniable connection to, a friend he never thought he'd meet.  They're close but still not quite close enough, or are they?
Feedback: Yes, as always.
Fandom: Original
Pairing: N/A
Warnings: AFFO, ChallengeFic, Fingering, HJ, M/F, M/M, Oral, Voy, Anal, D/s, Rim, 3Plus, DP, WIP
Solo story or chaptered story: Chaptered
URL: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600109288
Review Reply thread: http://www2.adult-fanfiction.org/forum/topic/64204-melricks-review-replies-original-fiction/
 
 
This was the first story I’ve written in 2 years.  It was originally intended to be nothing more than a simple one-shot, just to see if I could still actually write, but it ended up growing from that.  And it is my birthday today, so wouldn’t a quick review be a nice birthday present?  lol
 

You’re not wrong about some other forums out there.  There’s some real toxic places that just seem to attract dick heads galore, and they feed off each others negativity like some arsehole mosquito.

I banned the person permanently.

Very glad you’re enjoying yourself here! 

Very glad you’re enjoying yourself here! 

Very glad you’re enjoying yourself here! 

Can I just say it's really nice to have a forum and a writing forum especially where the atmosphere is generally pretty comfortable as well as actually helpful? Like I feel perfectly fine asking staff or other posters a question or for advice, because I’d actually get legit answers with no drama attached. I've been on plenty of forums before, and this is one of the very few that I feel like I'm going to be sticking with. For some reason I've noticed that people who are open about writing adult material come off as much less high-strung then people who don't (or who loudly proclaim to be against it).
TL;DR: Just wanted to show my appreciation to AFF’s forums for being a non-toxic place (if it is, then it’s very well-hidden, lol). I don’t see that very often.

I banned the person permanently.

I banned the person permanently.

I’ve removed request for a copy of the story to be sent to you, because as is stated here…
 

Majordomo – A person whose job is to make arrangements or organise things for other people. Delegate – A person designated to act for or represent another or others. Commissioner – A person commissioned to act officially.

Majordomo – A person whose job is to make arrangements or organise things for other people. Delegate – A person designated to act for or represent another or others. Commissioner – A person commissioned to act officially.

Majordomo – A person whose job is to make arrangements or organise things for other people. Delegate – A person designated to act for or represent another or others. Commissioner – A person commissioned to act officially.

Done.

So, yes, I have a short story featured in this soon to be released anthology from the wonderful NineStar Press:

I’m really excited about this re-release of a story I’d published before, and I’m really hoping people will enjoy the other amazing authors in the anthology!

I guide you to read this to see how your post is meant to be set out.

Pretty good, just remember the golden rule. Every woman is different, just like every man. What might work for one woman, might no be the case with another. There’s lot of factors to this stuff.

I’m doing my best to send you some rain, @Melrick, I promise. It’s been almost dry here for two days now, so maybe it’s working… ::crosses everything, knocks on wood, shouts, “seven, nine, thirteen!!”:: Stay safe, and I hope my little loves will be safe down there too. 

@WillowDarkling Much of NSW is in its worst drought for well over a century, so it’s getting awfully dry.  I just hope we get plenty of rain before summer gets here, otherwise it’s going to be a bad bushfire season.

I deleted it.

Honestly @Melrick  if I could, I would mail you some rain. I’ve got people I love very much down there in NSW, and I swear every time I hear that there are brushfires down there, it makes my heart sink. But this weather is just getting ridiculous all over the planet. 

Just a friendly reminder that stories aren’t to be uploaded to the forum.  That’s what the archive is for.

I know it’s all down to what you’re used to, but 33C degrees is pleasant summer’s day, not a heatwave. lol  This is an Australian take on the ‘heatwave’.