cherrydoll

So I just posted my first story and was wondering if anybody would be willing to review it? I’m just curious as to what others think and what I should right next, or if I should continue with this story as the MC gets older ^-^ http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600109560

Author: CherryDoll Title: Baby Girl Summary: Lily's goodnight routine with Daddy. Feedback: Always welcome! Fandom: None/Original Writing Warnings: COMPLETE Inc MF Minor1 OC PWP Solo or Chaptered: Solo URL: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600109560