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Number two and number three sounds pretty good. I’m currently working on another challenge atm, as slow as that’s going (XP), but I’m definitely interested on this challenge.
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5 minutes ago, Guest hjk829 said:
how’s the new chapter?
A bit slow, unfortunately.
Had a bit of a personal issue, which included organizing my time and goals.
I will make it a personal goal to upload the chapter within the 15th!
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On 12/26/2019 at 7:49 PM, Guest MAX3810 said:
what's up friend ? when the next chapter ??
My apologies for the late reply.
I am about 50% done with the chapter. Assuming that I don’t suddenly change the chapter radically, I should be done within the next few days or so. You should expect the next chapter by the end of this week.
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On 10/10/2019 at 5:10 PM, Guest Hot Kushina said:
Hello, is there a chapter 2?
Not yet, but keep your head up! It’s a WIP, but unfortunately, college gets in the way.
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4 hours ago, Guest There will be trolls said:
I hope EHey guy. How soon shall we expect chapter 2?
hold up. I have a theory about kushina virtues defenders out there. You know, guys who are taking canon and the series a bit too seriously, and their attack of fanfics such as yours have become (I like to say Vague). Unless you actually know them on a personal level. I dont know. I mean? why go out of your way to shoot down someone's work unless you are offering ideas for betterment of a writing style and not criticizing the writer's idea choice. That show you something is not right.
Watch out for those vague critics. They will look for ways to discourage you to stop writing because they don't like YOUR DEPECTION OF A CARTOON CHARACTER.
Thank you for your warning. I shall think about it every time I get a criticism.
Honestly, your response does make a lot of sense. I mean, not everyone has to have the same taste in lemons, and that’s alright. What’s not cool, however, is to try to discourage others simply because it’s not their cup of tea. I actually got that kind of criticism in HentaiFoundry, and the only reason why I bothered to listen to it was because I found it a bit constructive as well.
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4 hours ago, Guest Yes nuce said:
Hey guy. How soon shall we expect chapter 2?
I’m a little tied up with schoolwork, so maybe the next one will be published around 9/21.
I’m seriously taking some of the criticisms I got into consideration, and I’m planning on rethinking about the plans I have. Not to mention that I’ll have to essentially study similar stories to try to improve the writing style.
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This is the place for comments and questions, as well as constructive criticism, tips, and ideas.
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Just found your story, and grew interested in it. I, however, would like to play the game. Can someone please tell me where to find the link for this game, or at least give me the directions for it?
Many thanks.
(PS: I have recently taken up the challenge for “Loving Nympho Kushina” and “Kushina Slut of Sluts.” It’s called Kushina’s Infidelity, which you can find on AO3, HF, and AF. Please let me know what you think of it, and here’s the links.)
https://www.hentai-foundry.com/stories/user/LuciusWalker/37368/Kushinas-Infidelity
http://naruto.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600106564
https://archiveofourown.org/works/20501378/chapters/48653141
http://www2.adult-fanfiction.org/forum/topic/68260-kushinas-infidelity/
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Hey guys! I finally finished and uploaded the first chapter for “Kushina’s Infidelity.” It is on HentaiFoundry, AO3, and on Adultfanfiction.
Here’s the links:
https://www.hentai-foundry.com/stories/user/LuciusWalker/37368/Kushinas-Infidelity
http://naruto.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600106564
https://archiveofourown.org/works/20501378/chapters/48653141
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On 7/30/2019 at 8:18 PM, Guest MAX3810 said:
Excuse me, could you pass me the fanfic link please.
I don't find it
I have yet to post the first chapter. Until then, please wait patiently. I’m almost done with the first chapter, which is surprisingly hard to write.
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1 minute ago, Guest Guest said:
I think it would be better to keep them as separate series as they don’t really blend together imo.
Reporter Kushina seems more like a modern AU story as opposed to the canon universe I assume “Kushina’s Infidelity” would take place in.
Yeah, I guess you’re right. I could always just make a separate story instead of trying to fuse it together.
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3 minutes ago, Guest Guest said:
Did you read the manga, what are your thoughts on it?
Read the first few pages. Hadn’t finished it yet, but it looks promising!
Again, I would either take up this challenge after “Kushina’s Infidelity,” or I might even add it to the story as part of the series.
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Never mind, found it with some help.
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2 minutes ago, Guest Guest said:
Wait a minute, is it this?
Holy crap, yes it is! You’re a legend man!
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2 minutes ago, Guest Guest said:
I just found the doujin that was mentioned, its completely unrelated from the news reporter idea.
Not the one I had in mind.
It’s also possible that my memory betrayed me, and that maybe there wasn’t a doujin in the first place. If that turns out to be the case, I apologize for the goose chase.
Please let me know if you actually do find the doujin, and/or when you finally made your account.
Happy Writing!
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On 8/23/2017 at 4:14 PM, Guest Skilla said:
Plot – Kushina is 38 years old, happily married (to Minato) house wife with an 18 year old son (Naruto). She is also a famous news reporter that works for Konoha TV and does dirty things on TV for ratings. She is a good wife and mother but she is also a nympho, she often wears scantily clad outfits while reading the news, much to the delight of her legions of horny fans (and much to the dismay of her son). Guys as old as Danzo and as young as Naruto constantly flirt with her and try to get into her panties, sometimes they are successful and she ends up getting fucked by them, without Minato’s knowledge of course. Minato enjoys watching her (relatively) softcore acts on TV, however he often goes on business trips, leaving his horny wife alone and as time goes on, her televised escapades become more and more extreme (she probably thinks she can get away with it because he isn’t there). She sometimes gets completely naked on TV and on special occasions, even fucks the staff.
Requirements:
- Modern AU (perhaps like modern Konoha in Boruto since they have a news station it seems)
- Kushina is 38 years old
- Minato is 38 years old
- Naruto is 18 years old
- Kushina is really curvaceous in this AU (bubble butt and huge perky breasts)
- No incest, despite Kushina’s job being somewhat acceptable in this universe, incest is still a huge taboo
- Kushina loves her husband and son dearly and that won’t change (despite how depraved she might become)
- Naruto hates Kushina’s job, but still loves her (in a platonic way)
- Kushina fucks guys her son’s age (and younger) both off, and eventually on camera for everyone to see
Optional:
- Naruto has a sister
- Maybe Naruto does have some kind of sexual feelings for Kushina (some incest subtext maybe) but its heavily suppressed and never comes to anything
I’d love to see someone take this challenge, if anyone has any questions please feel free to ask me!
I believe that this was based off of a doujin. If it was, can you please give me the link?
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41 minutes ago, Guest Guest said:
I’d love to hear what your ideas are, maybe we could bounce ideas around to see what would work best.
Was the news reporter idea based off a doujin? I’m not aware of that.
If you wish to exchange ideas, I think it would be best if you logged in with an official account, since it gives us a way to chat each other or something.
And yeah, it was based off of a doujin. I can’t find it now, but I believe it was mentioned in the Kushina Slut of Sluts discussion.
http://www2.adult-fanfiction.org/forum/topic/59369-kushina-uzumaki-slut-of-sluts/
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1 hour ago, Guest Guest Guest said:
OP here, I agree, looking back at my original post, I personally think it would be better if Minato didn’t know too. I’ve got a few more ideas if they are useful for you.
-Maybe Kushina is a Jonin with a Genin team constantly trying to get in her pants. (similar to Stop Teasing Us Sensei)
-Kushina teasing those she likes (bending over, sticking her butt out, pulling down her pants to give her target a sneak peak of her thong etc.)
Another thing I’ve wondered about, what do you think of this idea for a fic? It isn’t mine but I’d love to see this given a go even more than my idea:
I’ve been thinking about adding the “Stop Teasing Us Sensei” idea to my fic. I’m actually thinking about dividing my into “arcs,” since I have a lot of ideas, but I need to divide them into an organized matter. That’s kinda the reason why I haven’t even started writing yet. I need to plan and organize the events before I put anything on paper.
As for the news reporter idea, I’m actually kinda interested in it. The thing is that I need to read the doujin that it was based off of, I kinda want to get started onto “Kushina’s Infidelity” first, and in the same time I need to plan and organize what’s going to happen for the reporter idea. Then again, maybe I can make it into a spinoff arc or something for KI. I dunno.
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1 hour ago, Guest ABC said:
Just wondering, what ideas do you plan on changing?
For now, it’ll just be the idea of Minato knowing what she’s doing and being okay with it. I find it to be more kinky in a way for him to not know.
Then again, this isn’t definite, since even I’m starting to reconsider this idea. It would certainly make the scenarios much easier to write, although the idea of the 4th Hokage killing whoever finds out should be incentive enough to not spread rumors. Again, not a definite change, may or may not reconsider that bit.
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6 hours ago, Guest Guest said:
Awesome! It’s been years but I’d love to see you take up this challenge, can’t wait to see what you come up with!
Just a heads up, I might change a few ideas, but other than that I’ll do my best to not disappoint. So little decent Kushina fics man.
With that being said, until further notice I will be calling the fic, “Kushina’s Infidelity”, and it will be posted on AO3, HentaiFoundry, and Adultfanfiction.
I’ll let you know when I’ve posted the first chapter, and I hope it’ll kick ass and raise boners! (lol)
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On 4/19/2015 at 7:10 PM, Guest Guest said:
Kushina is a loving wife and mother to her husband and 16 year old son, but she has a problem; she's a complete nympho.
She and Minato used to have all sorts of kinky sex when they were younger and this is what turned her into a nymph, but when Minato became Hokage he became too busy most of the time to fulfill her needs.
Kushina didn’t complain because she knew her husband was busy but he knew of her frustration and came up with a solution, he allowed her to have sex with other guys.
Kushina is viewed as one of the finest MILFs in Konoha that many men and teens fantasize about and she knows it, so it shouldn't be too hard for her needs to be satisfied.
What I would like to see in this story:
Kushina having sex with younger guys (Naruto's age and below)
Exhibitionism
Gangbangs
Happy Sex
Maybe throw in Tsunade aswell and they can be considered the MILFs of Konoha
Kushina still being a loving wife and mom despite her slutty behaviour
Minato knowing and approving
What I wouldn't like to see in this story:
NTR (Netorare) (gets boring after seeing so many)
Incest (Narukushi) (too many of them imo)
Loads of women being involved (every woman in the story being a slut kind of ruins it for me)
I’m willing to take this challenge. College might get in the way for a bit, but I’m sure I can manage to find some time to write. I’ll also need some time to think of ideas, as well as organizing them.
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37 minutes ago, Guest Anonymous said:
thanks for the information about the location and, in regard for the help will I would very like to do it I cant help you because 1) English isnt my first language, I know not very original as an exscuse but is sadly the truth; 2) the true and important reason I make this a challenge is because I am an horrible writer, I had try to create the first chapter several time in mine language and in English one worst than the other; 3) Im in my last year of university so I have little time to help.
Again sorry but I cant help and I can only point you to search for the Taimanin Asagi wikia if it exist because the most I know of the Taimanin series I only know it by watching the video and play the introducion of the nutaku game
Ah, that’s alright. I’m not asking you to be my beta writer. All I’m asking is if you can help in any way, the help would be appreciated. All I really need is the plot and the lore, which while I am taking notes while playing Battle Arena, I could still use some help on at least that, since I only started taking notes around Chapter 6ish, so I kinda have to restart through the beginning to remember how it started.
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21 hours ago, Guest I'll Need Some Help said:
I guess I’ll write the story on hentaifoundry. Also, are you willing to help me write this thing? At the very least I’ll need some info. If you’re willing to do so, then would you please give me your email so that we can share a document or whatever on google doc?
But seriously though, I’m gonna need some help when it at least comes to the lore, the characters, etc. It’s hard to keep track of all the characters, and sure, I might not include ALL of them, but I still need some help with their background, who they’re fighting, their powers, etc.
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2 minutes ago, Guest I'll Need Some Help said:
I guess I’ll write the story on hentaifoundry. Also, are you willing to help me write this thing? At the very least I’ll need some info. If you’re willing to do so, then would you please give me your email so that we can share a document or whatever on google doc?
(Sorry, this was me. I forgot to sign in before I replied. Had to go through some BS to log in and to reply.)
Kushina sensei
in Naruto
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I started a series called “Kushina’s Infidelity” a while back, and I’m just getting back into it. I was thinking about adding an arc where she become a sensei or something. Should I do that, or should I just make it into its own series?