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    Sinfulwolf got a reaction from Wilde_Guess in Dear Male Writers - an unofficial guide to writing women   
    Pretty good, just remember the golden rule. Every woman is different, just like every man. What might work for one woman, might no be the case with another. There’s lot of factors to this stuff.
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    Sinfulwolf got a reaction from Wilde_Guess in Unattractive, but Redeemable Flaws   
    How about things like struggles with addiction (Smoking, drugs, alcohol, gambling), is not good spouse but is a great friend and/or parent. Someone struggling to make ends meet yet is terrible with money that opens them up to exploitation. A crooked cop that believes the system is fucked anyway so they’re just going to look after themselves (or perhaps some loved ones). A soldier that enjoys killing a bit too much, but has learned to channel it to the battlefield.
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    Sinfulwolf got a reaction from GeorgeGlass in AFF Halloween 2021 Revews   
    from @GeorgeGlass
    Thank ye! The mouse wasn’t Ravyn’s familiar, just a presence in her home kinda meant to show her isolation and her connection with nature. Plus I thought it was cute hence the turning over and over. So glad you liked!
    And that ending… I struggled with how I wanted to end it for weeks. It was originally gunna be far darker, and had plans for all kinds of follow on chapters, but I decided I had too many WIPs and this might be better as a fun little poly ending. Thank you!
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    Sinfulwolf got a reaction from InvidiaRed in AFF Halloween 2021 Revews   
    From @InvidiaRed for Samhain Night
    Amusingly, it was meant to originally be far darker. But, I kinda wanted a happy ending for Ravyn so I switched gears a bit part way through. It was fun to write, though it took me the better part of 2 months to do so. Still, thank ye! Glad the succubus came across well.
     
    I will read the other tales posted thus far, tomorrow!
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    Sinfulwolf got a reaction from JayDee in InBrightestDay's (Originals) Review Reply & Discussion Thread   
    I’d love to see you tackle some space battles in the future. But getting yer start with Gundam, it does show, and yes! Action scenes are always fun to write (least to me). And thank ye as well, I do pride myself in my action scenes.
     
    It’s tricky aye. Sometimes it helps to have those little details pushed in elsewhere, so you can concentrate on the flow of stuff in the moment.
    Certainly! I’m glad you did lamp shade it in the end, and it certainly allowed for a bit more depth to things. Made it read better to me at least. It’s nice to see more of the Non-Action guy that’s not just comic relief.
    I’ve not played enough of Evil Within, but I can see the influence and aesthetic, while still being very much your own thing. It was very very cool, and as you said, visceral. Very visceral.
    And yes. Fuck that guy.
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    Sinfulwolf got a reaction from InvidiaRed in Halloween 2021   
    Huzzah! Worked Now
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    Sinfulwolf got a reaction from InvidiaRed in Halloween 2021   
    I’ll try again. If it works this time, cool! If not I’ll PM to you there George.
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    Sinfulwolf got a reaction from InvidiaRed in Halloween 2021   
    I attempted to post my chapter, not sure if it’s loading though...
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    Sinfulwolf got a reaction from InvidiaRed in Halloween 2021   
    Samhain Night
    Warnings: 3Plus, Cuckquean, Oral, HJ, M/F, Voy, Bond
    Summary: A witch is asked to exorcise a succubus from a married woman
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    Sinfulwolf got a reaction from InvidiaRed in Halloween 2021   
    That’s a win then!
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    Sinfulwolf got a reaction from InvidiaRed in Halloween 2021   
    I’m currently trying to write a Halloween tale. If I complete it in time, I’ll push it this way!
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    Sinfulwolf got a reaction from GeorgeGlass in InBrightestDay's (Originals) Review Reply & Discussion Thread   
    So ye did… missed the email as I’ve not been home. I’ll get a reply short. 
    and comment to IBD shortly as well.
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    Sinfulwolf got a reaction from GeorgeGlass in SinfulWolf's Review Responses   
    @GeorgeGlass called my out rightfully for not replying to his comment, while I was being pouty face in another thread. So take that Sin!!
     
    I just wanted to write a pure smutty mc smut tale. And I think I succeeded. I wanted a bit of rivalry that stirred in a lot of sexual tension for these two, just to have some fun in a library setting. Thank ye kindly for the review!!
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    Sinfulwolf got a reaction from Desiderius Price in Halloween 2021   
    I’m currently trying to write a Halloween tale. If I complete it in time, I’ll push it this way!
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    Sinfulwolf reacted to Sparrow in InBrightestDay's (Originals) Review Reply & Discussion Thread   
    I can't do as good a job as all these fine people have of reviewing WitS properly, so I'll just try and get to the point. 
    First off I want to apologise for taking so long to finish it. It certainly wasn't because of any flaws in the story, but more because of me. I won't get into all the details right now, but a large part of it was because after blitzing through most of the story I'd somehow got it into my head that it was leading up to some kind of soul-crushingly bittersweet ending. I think I may have glimpsed you discussing something else with someone on here and mistaken that for a spoiler for WitS, so maybe that's why. 
    In any case, I was afraid of getting attached to these wonderful characters of yours and then seeing them die. But then, earlier, I found myself in one of those sleepless, tortuous nights that never seems to end and thought what the hell. 
    And you know what? Having now finished it I feel a lot better. Which reminds me. 
    Shut up. This ending was perfect. It couldn't have been more satisfying if I'd done it myself (in fact it probably wouldn't be anywhere near as satisfying if I had) and I would not change a thing about it. Kevin and Luzurial have the happy ending I was so afraid would be snatched away from them, and the demon gets a seat of his own in the hot place. A part of it that I was unexpectedly touched by was how the devil mentioned that the lesser demon's messing around on Earth had screwed up its own, more subtle plans to corrupt the place, to the point where it was considering abandoning the Earth entirely as a lost cause. At least that was how I interpreted it. 
    You couldn't have known that little detail would appeal to me so much, but it certainly put a smile on my face. 
    Well done indeed, my friend. I'm glad to have seen this through to the end, now. 
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    Sinfulwolf got a reaction from InvidiaRed in SinfulWolf's Review Responses   
    A review for Pressed Violet from @InvidiaRed
    Awww, thank you! I’m glad you enjoyed it, I had a lot of fun writing it.
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    Sinfulwolf reacted to GeorgeGlass in AFF Holiday Party   
    Due date? This isn’t homework, ya know. But I suppose if you want people to be in the holiday spirit when they read it, you might want to post it by New Year’s or thereabouts.
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    Sinfulwolf got a reaction from JayDee in AFF Holiday Party   
    Will try and get something finished for a party, but I’ve got so many damn projects on the go right now. When will the due date be?
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    Sinfulwolf got a reaction from GeorgeGlass in AFF Holiday Party   
    Will try and get something finished for a party, but I’ve got so many damn projects on the go right now. When will the due date be?
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    Sinfulwolf reacted to GeorgeGlass in George Glass' Transparency Thread   
    Okay, last post of 2019!
    First, a recommendation: I recently started reading @FairySlayer’s Spazzgirl Letters, and so far, I’m quite enjoying it. It's an anthology of sex stories, each one about a lesbian encounter between two loli characters from two different cartoon series. Each story comes in the form of a “Penthouse Letters”-style tale told from the POV of one of the participating characters. This, to me, is next-level stuff: Writing dialogue that is faithful to a character’s voice is one thing, but writing an entire story that way is quite another. (I’ve never been bold enough to try it.) I’m not familiar with every character, but four chapters in, I’m finding it plenty entertaining.
    Second, I’ve been doing another cycle through all 20 stories, and it’s looking like the next thing I’ll finish is a one-shot titled “Kiss and Make Up” (my thanks to @Sinfulwolf for the title suggestion). The summary: When her teenage son and daughter won't stop fighting, a mother forces them to confront the true cause of the tension between them. But she might wish she hadn't.
    Happy New Year, all!
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    Sinfulwolf reacted to GeorgeGlass in AFF Halloween Party 2019!   
    People might not be checking anymore, so I thought I’d alert TCR and PlagueClover that there are new reviews on their stories.
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    Sinfulwolf got a reaction from GeorgeGlass in AFF Halloween Party 2019!   
    Now time to start reading… sorry I’ve not been reviewing folks.
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    Sinfulwolf got a reaction from InvidiaRed in AFF Halloween Party 2019!   
    Now time to start reading… sorry I’ve not been reviewing folks.
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    Sinfulwolf got a reaction from BronxWench in AFF Halloween Party 2019!   
    Now time to start reading… sorry I’ve not been reviewing folks.
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    Sinfulwolf got a reaction from JayDee in AFF Halloween Party 2019!   
    Now time to start reading… sorry I’ve not been reviewing folks.
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