Sinfulwolf
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Starting a new Amazon tale, this one with a focus around the Festival of Motherhood.
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- CloverReef and Tcr
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I legit can’t wait to read it!
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Author: Sinfulwolf Title: Shadow and Lust Summary: When a storm knocks out the power to her home, Cassies heads out into the rain to get her generator working. But something alluring, deadly, lurks out in the dark, watching. Feedback: Always welcome Fandom: Original Pairing: F/F Warnings: Anal CR Dom Ds FF Fingering Hum MC Solo story or chaptered story: Solo, though connected to Blood and Lace through setting. URL: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600109632 Review Reply thread:
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Computer been busted for 2 and a half months now. Had to get a chromebook to get some writing done and post, and have to use data.
So… that’s where I’ve been.
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Author: Sinfulwolf Title: The Handmaiden’s Contract Summary: Olivia is invited to the Duchess’s palace, where she discovers the court of vampires is full of lust, and taboo reveled in. Feedback: Always Welcome Pairing: F/F…./F Warnings: Threesome, Blood Play, Incest, Oral. Solo story or chaptered story: Solo URL: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600109465 Review Reply thread:
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Now time to start reading… sorry I’ve not been reviewing folks.
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Woo, it’s up
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I mostly just got a sudden rush of inspiration one night. Yarps!
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Well, seems mine is written and ready for posting.
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Fair nuff. I felt the words themselves brought enough emphasis, but I suppose I could put some more ommph into it. And I did not know that particular rule about dialogue. I just use comma’s for a pause…. I usually throw a lot of grammar rules out the window with dialogue anyway. Just due to the way people speak. But… I suppose good to know.
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So @Tcr has left me two reviews! I’ve got em here: First is for A Private Triumph, the Amazonian recreation of Rome. I felt showing would work really well here, vs. the typical telling. So I wanted to really show her in action, how she’s earned her accolades. Besides, I thought bringing it into the action right away would hook the reader. Now. I think I may have overdone it a bit, as others have wanted to know more about that character. But, this may be a mileage may vary moment. It’s still something I’ll have to ponder. And yes, I really tried to show some accurate Roman tactics at the century level. It is certainly a tricky balance. Especially in an AU world. To build and create a wider setting, without info dumping and boring the character. I thought about a few lines to mention the actual Romans, but I stopped myself. If I ever return to this with a proper story, I’ll mention what happened to the Romans. I think I might be getting a kink now for parties holding political machinations behind the curtains. But glad you got Rhoda’s discomfort. And glad the sex was hot! And the second review was for Blackburn Chapter 2 A few touches here and there to build some context, to build on the character. Cause as I always say “Context makes things hotter”. I’m, really not entirely sure what you mean here. I don’t think your own italics went in, and I’m not sure what commas you’re referring to. Heh, no, I imagine most don’t. But that’s the thrill of erotica no? Bring the fantasy to life. And thank ye. I think it might be my first main use of toys, but I can’t imagine I’ve -never- used em before. Glad you enjoyed.
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Chapter 10 is up now. Kris and Derek venture out. Mia is on the run. Rasha is given no choice.
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I’ll be in. Lydia will return.
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A review on A Private Triumph from @CloverReef, thanks dear. I keep that more in mind now since you’ve mentioned it before. I guess it was always something I’ve kind of done, but now I’m a bit more aware and keep trying to work it in. I like that it works and helps sell the story and setting. Glad you liked the gore. I do like to think I can do gore decently. Good to know about the lack of a proper introduction. While opening with a bang is good for the hook, I do like decently lengthed battles, so perhaps I need to think of other ways to open. Even if with action, cause you are right: need to give the reader a reason to root for Rhoda, and leave those longer battles for later when you actually care about her. I added bits more in there, mostly cause it’s this central little display piece, but it’s moving, and it’s erotic. So I put more detail into the stuff than I had originally planned. Perhaps I’ll get more opportunities to explore her character, but yeah I did want to play with the stoic soldiery type, and part of me writing this was my fascination with the Romans, but also the debauchery they used to get up to. So I figured a dedicated soldier would be just as up for that debauchery. Plus, real soldiers often are Labda was fun to write, and interesting. Slavery is so frowned upon in today’s society, yet I had a slaver character who I wanted the reader to look at just like any other merchant. Well… a sexy merchant that really likes sex anyway. Glad you thought it was all hot. that’s pretty key for a short like this me thinks. And that the part was absorbing like that is pretty good to hear.
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Author: SinfulwolfTitle: A Private TriumphSummary: As an Empire spreads across the Mediterranean and quells rebellions in Libya, an Amazonian centurion fights for her nation and is declared a hero. The party thrown for her afterwords is its own nest of vipers, but there’s wine. Feedback: Always welcomeFandom: Original – FemslashWarnings: F/F, Oral, some M/M with anal and handjobs.Solo story or chaptered story: Solo story. Might be more?URL: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600109425 Review Replies:
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A review on Blackburn Chapter 2 (or, the second short I did) by @CloverReef Glad you liked her. I based her off a character I saw in a video, with them big glasses and top hat. Besides, a tailor has to be well dressed. Glad you liked it, glad it was hot. And, immediate contradictions is fun. Especially when lust is involved.
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Review on Blackburn Chapter 2 by @JayDee Glad you were happy to see more. I don’t have solid intentions of keeping this particular thing rolling, but as I get inspired and come up with ideas, I’ll certainly write more. That was a fun little bit, fish out of water sort of bit. Never thought of the Pretty Woman correlation, but it is a bit of a trope. The atmosphere… oh I had to get that. I tried to nail it without being overbearing, to really sell that this was Victorian London in an alternate history (not that alternative. Just more female presence I suppose ). Glad you enjoyed that. I took some inspiration from ASMR stuff for how to write it, and just had to work on translating it to smut. The polite company line was just one of those amusing little bits I had to throw in.
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A second short story about Captain Lauren Blackburn has been posted. More lesbian fun, but this time with a tailor.
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@InvidiaRed does have great ones. But you can also go something a little closer to the subject matter. “Time Out” or playing with that kind of concept. “Time Out Tension”, or “Steamy Time Out”. “Kiss and Make Up” a kind of sister title to @CloverReef’s “Hug it Out” There’s always that classic line “While under this roof (instead thing here)”. Could play with that a bit. “Under this roof” If Ii think of anything else I’ll toss it your way. Unless you already found it.
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Unattractive, but Redeemable Flaws
Sinfulwolf replied to CloverReef's topic in Original Character Development
How about things like struggles with addiction (Smoking, drugs, alcohol, gambling), is not good spouse but is a great friend and/or parent. Someone struggling to make ends meet yet is terrible with money that opens them up to exploitation. A crooked cop that believes the system is fucked anyway so they’re just going to look after themselves (or perhaps some loved ones). A soldier that enjoys killing a bit too much, but has learned to channel it to the battlefield. -
Possible to have them as artifacts, but with such isolation and desolation, they may not work very far outside those little areas of gathered people, because upkeeping the cell towers would just be too damn dangerous. Hell, getting signal could be such a relief because you knew you were close to a pocket of civilization.
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Seems the internet situation will not be better. Home for a weekend, but it seems these homeward visits are gunna be few and far between.
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I’ll have you know I partied pretty hard for about half an hour in 2001.
Won’t be forever, I guess, good luck with the future stuff either way!
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Thank ye folks. Dunno when the second course I’m teaching is wrapping up, so we shall see when I be home. Later in August I presume.
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Barely home at all, and already I’m taking off tomorrow morning. At least the internet situation should be better, and I hope to get some writing done at least.
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Chapter 9 is available for your reading pleasures. Kris and Derek interrogate a demon. Rasha tries to get out of a sticky situation. Mia’s hunt for Sabine continues.
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I’m home, finally home! For… about 2 days. Bloody fuckin ‘Ell.
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Wooooo!!!! 2 day party!!!!!! Welcome back!
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I hope ya have a good two days break!
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I hope I do as well. Hoping to get the next chapter of Blood and Lace up in that time period.
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Last day at home for a bit, not returning til late May, internet unexpected during my month away.
Chapter 9 of Blood and Lace is out for editing, so hopefully can post it on my return.
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See you in late May, and take care of yourself!
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I’ll do me bestest. Not looking forward to the plane rides, but eh… can’t be helped.
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Look forward to your epic return of epicness! Have fun!
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