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  1. You could still tie jane into it. Possibly as an anthropologist trying to disprove, then study, then protect the lion people.

     

    Hmmm

     Maybe. But i like the idea of her being stuck as a cat for the early chapters.... although maybe she was a tower apprentice that happened to be the one who opened the letter from la. It'd add weight to hiccups capturing her

  2. Jack would, but i haven't yhought how yet.

    There's actually quite a few hercules girls, I'm adding the list soon

    With the tmnt, they have figures. I had art illusgrating it but it got taken down. Think of it as a very curvy girl in a flak jacket or bulletproof vest

    Blackfire would be affected.... though i may use batgirl. I have another way of geeting blackfire involved...

  3. 7 minutes ago, Jwsponky said:

    An idea has occurred to me…

    Given that one if La's main powers is the ability to turn leopards into leopardmen, what if the Pridelanders and Outlanders were the result of her trying to make lionmen long ago, according to the TV show La is very old, only for them to escape and every so often La would attempt to recapture them?

    Then once Hiccup conquers the lionmen's territory, he retaliates after once such attempt by conquering La's territory of Opar?

    That works, really well.

     

    And thank you for the comments.

  4. 21 minutes ago, Jwsponky said:

    Given however that this story would already have shape shifters in the form of the dragons, the wolves of Nordberg, the spiders of Everlight, and the salamanders of the Wastelands, perhaps the Pridelands and Outlands could be a territory of shape shifters that turn into large lions

    That works. Quite well. The city could be desered at night because la controls them under the moon or something so they lock or bat themselves inside. And allows for some interesting stortlytelling.

    Oh and sorry i kept calling her za. I know who she is i just forgot her name. Used to watch the show too

  5. 7 minutes ago, Jwsponky said:

    Given that Mirage is apparently supposed to be an anthropomorphic lioness, what there was a whole race of lion folk, with some characters based off lions from the Lion King franchise, and Hiccup conquered/liberated their territory from the Empire, taking anthropomorphic versions of Zira and possibly Sarabi as mistresses?

    Hmmmm.... okay. This could stretch disbeleif a little far.... or.…

    Remember what i said about tying characters into each other to make the easier to swallow? Well, mirage isn't the only anthroponorphic cat you have. What if lion king was an african kingdom.... one not only beseiged by the empire, but queen Za as well. Part of her spell with jane could involve enslavinv the kingdom by turning them into catpeople, including queen sarabi and princess nala. Jane could be a researcher or trade spokesman or both who had the bad luck of getting caught in the middle and has been doing her best to provide the kingdom with as much medical and other assorted knowledges as she can. By overcoming za, she's the new true chosen queen. Sarabi was an acting queen because the people were trying to contain the mad queen Za

  6. I've been meaning to ask, but are you including the wingmaidens in you hiccup story? And Atali? The leader? If not you can have one of his male friends go off and recruit them, getting his own mini harem. Even if they aren't nessecary for soldiers they can trainf flying minions or act as quick couriers

  7. Actually, better idea. Alice is a courier (part of an inernational post service) that keeps getting sent afyer him by vatious kingdoms amd is kind of spacey, always getting lost in weird places that SOMEHOW he's always in. They note that if either of them actually went were they were going they'd miss each.other entirely

  8. Yep. And most of them bet never, too her face. Though privately have more accurate bets.

     

    Two more ideas, (it's in the name), what of for the 'summon' mechanic hiccup had to condemn a set amount of minions to take their place, or a lesser amount to summon his queens and their girls/special units. I suggest this because it would give them more interactions with him (and some mother-in-law time with the girls) and an excuse for inter-girl interaction. And becase he needs to ibteract with them every now and again in some way.

    Are the sorceresses going to have remote observing powers? It could be interesting to have them as mission control, and telepathically acting as the tutorial and advice text. Thos could also be used to keep the girls involved by giving them a scrying portal. It would keep him up to speed anyway

    Also, i had some ideas for more mistresses, alice (another former tower apprentice who banished herself to the dreamlands. Mirage and the sorcerers tbought she was dead) could be mistress of the dream-world and acts as hiccups courier through the aether. Wendy and a female peter could also be residents. Fem peter might be a better fit for the job actually

    Casaandra from tangled could be a mysterious hunter cjasing down rapunzel... because like in canon she's her bodyguard and is trying to protect her

    Maleficent should have a dragon and dragon-girl form

     

  9. 15 minutes ago, Jwsponky said:

    I had intended for the sorceresses to be his lovers, for example in the beginning of the second chapter when Hiccup is deemed ready to start 'Overlording', his 17th or 18th birthday, they 'make him a man' before sending him out to slaughter the halflings of spree.

    How do they manifest?

    If we do the summon thing they could be the full-power summons.

    13 minutes ago, Jwsponky said:

    Perhaps Mirage could be a sorceress who was turned into a cat, either by a rival or a drastic accident, who Hiccup adopts during the prologue and manages to turn partway back to normal?

    That would be great! We could find out immediately, but hiccup doesn't know for ages and just thinks's she's a clever cat. The sorceresses could mock her for it.... actually what if she's a failed tower apprentice. To some VERY sink or swim sorceressea. Shes's following hiccup to 'redeem' herself

  10. Them raising him works nicely, good idea.

    though will they become his lovers after? I know a manga that did similar. It's not a request, i'm trying to understand the direction of the narrative.

    You could have mirage be his cat fpr the first few chapters, maybe have her wisper some things to the girls while they sleep or be oddly intelligent and obedient

  11. Or, queen za is a spirit trying to posses a host, jane. So her men hve captured her, and jane becomes more cheetah-girl when za's influence is stronger. Hiccup could try to sace her but it doesn't exactly work, bit jane is still nore or less in charge ans trying to get rid of za, then trying to take her powers from her

  12. Well, jane is an anthroplogist and could help identify amd research people and culturea. Pkus she could make a nice 'trophy' for queen za to have captured.

    As for the heartland, what if hiccup is seperated from his army while trying to teleport akd winds up ind the heartlands and makes havoc while trying to escape, figuring it slow them down. (book hiccup did something similar when his slavemark was exposed.). Or a raid goes wrong, and to save him while ge's unconcious one of his girls dsiguises him as a slave, which they take, and he has to get her back from interrogation before he can escape.

    He meets Tiana and charlotte because they're the unofficial head slaves, heads of the ubion so to speak

  13. 5 minutes ago, Jwsponky said:

    . Queen La from Disney's Legend of Tarzan, admittedly not sure though how Hiccup could end up all they way in Central Africa... Maybe he learns the Empire sent troops there and decided the fact that the Empire wants something there is good enough reason to not let them get it...

    This is a good idea, and hiccup has flying dragons, so that works.

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