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  1. So to repost my earlier suggestions I was thinking something similar to the drive systen i mentioned, though reversed. with Hiccup (and maybe other magically-gifted girls) acting as a source, the girls would gain more combat-capable forms and abilities, further transforming them and allowing them in turn to empower troops under their command, with characters directly connected feeling the effect much stronger. To further the connection, This could have the side effect of tapping into or CREATING latent abilities that they could refine and use in their own time. Some examples of possible drive forms: Jasmine becomes a tiger-girl and gains powerful fire magics (a reference to the ifrit, which also ties into he history with rajah and the genie as well as a nod to her villain, mirage). this also gives her immense speed, sharp claws and catlike flexibility. possibly throw in a few of the more dangerous tricks from the genies she’s seen, like jafar’s sword-summoning. the harem girls also transform Ariel becomes a living water-spectre like her kingdom-hearts 3 summon, and gains the ability to swim through the air and land as well as a a trident which grants her incredible water magic and lets her summon phantom sea life. her sisters also transform. Astrid grows twice/three times as tall, gets stormfly wings, scales, spines and tail and gains flight, lightning breath and the ability to call down actual storms (e.g cloud, galeforce winds etc). The other vikings…. probably have their own forms Cinderella turns into living crystal and gains absurd agility, luck and causes things around her to repair themselves to her wishes. or she gets a fairy-self to protect her and carry out her bidding. Merrida would probably be a full-on amazon with will-o-wisp fire around her blade. Aurora grows taller, gains the powers, clothes (modified to be more erotic) and some traits of maleficent and summons fairies to do her bidding. or she gains dream-weaving powers and makes all her enemies fall asleep. or both or she gains fairy-clothing and trais and can make solid ‘dreams’, like giant thorny vines Alternatively, hiccup and a girl are removed from battle, but the abilities are spread to EVERY harem girl. being powered by their ‘connection’, hiccup and the girl sleep together to keep it going
  2. Theres other girls too, but usually the titans.
  3. I don't know if it helps, but tumblr user ravenravenraven has an art blog of the teen titans girls in erotic usually-lesiban positions with enhaced breasts and butts. Theres a lot of height and shrinkinh stuff too, and i don't think that's what you're going for bu it could still be a useful reference
  4. Ummmm. Tara would probably be better, since the's into ron.For chapter two..... nothing yet. Although you couod end it with kim examining the toy and admitting it's not big enough, as in too thin. Bonnie eould probably be doing this to see kim humiliated, so it be nice for her monique to trick her into suggesting a turn system (thinkinh it'd just be monique abd kim with her watching) then goad her into going first. Basically, when she's done, monique pulls out a thicker one and tbey point out it's her turn now, to her horror. That could be her reason to join with ron later, nothing compares now and she's furious with kimAlso, a way to bring in tara, bonnie has her distract Ron while the girls have tryouts
  5. I saw that one. I'm looking forward to it. If you can, please bringg in Yori. You could have kim musing afterwards that if Ron did sleep with another girl she thought it'd be, oops. Cue her guiltily calling Yori and delicately trying to suggest it while bot mentioning she already did it once.You could alsoprobably bring in shego by having her notice a certain glow abou kim at her next fight and refuse to beleive her accidental insinuations about ybe she has cammile leon stand in for kim and tell ron she agreee to a threesome with her because she has to see.... and even canille notices how much she keeps going back to 'kim'Also, the hymen breaking being natural is a myth. It retracts, that's what foreplay is for. If it was permanantly closed, how would perioda work, let alone the bathroom.
  6. Are you sure? https://m.fanfiction.net/u/10771450/ This one? It's not showing up yet And while that works, I was asking about yori, who traditionally is into ron.
  7. Though one thing, a minor thing, but something to point out. Yori's crush on kim comes a bit oit of nowhere. How are you going to solve that? Not an accusation, I'm just really curious.
  8. I like it. I'm going to do my own version, as i said, and yours is distinct and very interesting on it's own! It works out nicely
  9. I had some other concepts too, if you want a look. I was told it's a bit mesy so I'm splitting it up into individual ones.
  10. I do but it's fairly new, and i don't know hoe to work doc x yet. It's also 'strange idea', but with a space inatead of a _ We are on almost the exact same wavelength on this. I don't think i communicated clearly enohgh, but yeah that's pretty much whwre i was going, down to the video chat. You're free to go a different way, but what do you think of the 'Kim asking Yori to go help Ron' subplot?
  11. That was generally were i was going with this. Good eye. And yes, feel free to. If you have any questions feel free to post them or PM me. Try to keep everyone in character. Good luck. But i should ask, can you give me examplea of what the fluff would be and who would have the lesbian scenes?
  12. Rules: no rape No NTR, I’ve been told what it is and now I KNOW i don’t want it No gore No bashing No edgey nonsense No downer endings or wanton character killing Quality of writing is important to me, so if you try your hand please give it your best. I know you can make it interesting. Character development Story is king, erotica on it's own is not enough. Take your time ans build, the pauoff will be worth it. Im more interested in character interaction and experimenting with relationship writing prefer to use erotoca to enhance, rather than making it the whole point. If you get burned out on such a story it's hard to enjoy after all. No scat.... eww Try and keep people in-character or a twist on the character Make it as beleivable as possible, at least by internal logic a reminder that i do intend to write at least a version of this story, but am completely okay with other’s trying their hand at it Kim possible In an erotic comedy of errors, kim is forced out of town for either a mission, or a family event. Ron has to stay behind, but the two keep in touch via videochat. However, rumor gets round that the two have broken up, and a suprising number of girls try to make their move. Ron and kim tell each other about this, and reassure each other. Optional subplots Subplot 1: kim calls in a favour to have a friend keep an eye on this. She accidentally makes things worse. If yori, she wanta to support them and do this for her friends but part of her sees this as her chance to earn a threesome, possibly permanantly.she is sincere, just tempted and frustrated by her failure. Subplot 2: shego also hears and tries for kim. Kim and Ron bond and comfort each other over this. (Drakken's with someone else)
  13. Rules: no rape No NTR, I’ve been told what it is and now I KNOW i don’t want it No gore No bashing No edgey nonsense No downer endings or wanton character killing Quality of writing is important to me, so if you try your hand please give it your best. I know you can make it interesting. Character development Story is king, erotica on it's own is not enough. Take your time ans build, the pauoff will be worth it. Im more interested in character interaction and experimenting with relationship writing prefer to use erotoca to enhance, rather than making it the whole point. If you get burned out on such a story it's hard to enjoy after all. No scat.... eww Try and keep people in-character or a twist on the character Make it as beleivable as possible, at least by internal logic a reminder that i do intend to write at least a version of this story, but am completely okay with other’s trying their hand at it Danny phantom 1) A retelling of the series from desiree's first appearance onwards. Sam happens to wish for a 'another girl for a friend', and desiree is accidentally stuck being that friend. She is cut off from most of her powers and can only grant Sam's wishes or act on her behalf. She disgyises herself as an exhang student and chooses sam as her guide to keep in character and annoy her.danny and the others are worried where desiree went, but sam reluctantly covers for her 'friend' at least until she can prove she's still hostile. At first, Desiree fakes it, pretending to be sams friend and provide support against ghosta to make havoc and push her to bad decisions, but she grows fond of sam, even allowing her to 'borrow' her ghost powers to give danny backup annonymously (danny is suspicious of the new girl, ironically correctly thinking she's the missing desiree performing a long plan, but grows to trust her) and get a second perona to flirt with him (she's terrible at it). In return, sam pushes for her to be a better person, and cuting her off from her wishes causes Desiree to think it over and realise she's been a slave to the power so long she doesn't know what she wants anymore. Thinking back to her time in the harem and how she is of her new master, she realises what she wants. She starts puahing danny and sam together, but also subtly seducing sam (passing it off as quirks or tips on getting her man) and trying to help her appreciate the female form (by drawing her attention to pretty girls), laying the ground to be their mistress (while also making note of 'potentials', though this subplot is optional). This breifly backfires whem sam does begin to appreciate girls, but is desensitised to desiree. Sam eventually finds out what she's doing, and is mad and offput at first thougj decides she'd be okay with it but she needa time to adjust and to figure out how to approach danny. Danny also finds out due to meeting a greiving desiree in the 'ultimate enemy' future, and uses this to talk to sam and desiree about it. This may be where sam learns desiree's plan. They have a bit of a fallout, but not too much since desiree has shown she's more or less a goodguy. They reconcile and decide to start tenatively dating. Epilouge is their happy married home life. The fic follows the series initially, but changea begin to stack up and take things in new directions, while also exploring underused concepts from season 3. This is arguably less of an adult fanfic, unless danny phantom story prompt 3 is included as a sublot. 2) in a world were Danny has yet to ask sam out (ironically being about to before this scheme gets in the way) Sam and Ember (who is canonically a big enough secret admirer to shave his logo into her head and make a guitar shaped like it based on the ‘10 years later’ design) both independently come to the conclusions that danny needs another human/ghost hybrid as both a partner and for a girlfriend (They both want to be both, but sam mostly wants to be there for him and take some weight off his shoulders, awkwardly sputtering over the girfriend implications and missing his interest in her, being ironically frustrated he hasn’t noticed her but having accepted it. Ember, however, tells herself she wants to seduce him and admits it would be fun to fight alongside him, but is covering more tender feelings of belonging and admiration). It's an idle fantasy, until they each happen to learn they other thinks so too, meet up and agree to team up and be that ghost girl. Sam is annoyed working with someone as unruly and self-confident as ember, and ember is annoyed at having to team up with her ‘main competion’, but they put things aside. The plan is to half possess sam, giving her ghost powers and leaving her with free will, and letting ember live out her wild side while doing so. (insert montage of bonding over failed attempts here, or not, skipping to the end result) the process, however is a bit more... intimite then the exepected, due to both exerting their will to be solid. They also both feel a sensory overlap and, well, one thing leads to another. The new form isn't created until they both reach release (having both forgotten about it in the process) and collapse into each other, which they later realised worked because they both were blanked out and so relaxed and willing to accept each other. they then fly off to find danny. part two has the new ghost-girl, essentially sam with ember-like characteristics such as fire hair in sam's style alternating between trying to aid and seducing danny. (possibly insert a montage of times she wunexpectedly shows up and danny’s changing reaction, also the girls discovering they can just fuse at will now without the ‘lead-up’ and are both privately disappointed). He resists first out of wariness then frustration, but eventually respects and trusts her enough to sit down with her and tell he he’s not interested, he’s got this friend he’s been trying to tell he loves her… Sam reveals it;s her and he FINALLY recognises her. they confess, and begin kissing. (ember is heartbroken but asks sam to let her stick around for this one. sam agrees) After Danny lays with ghost-sam, she splits back into two and ember tries to leave, but sam insists she stays, and danny has no objections or idea what’s happening (having gotten the girl of his dreams and even more). they then have a threesome 3) A combination of the aboce two with three sets of ghosts and girls competing for Danny's attention and hand. Sam/ember, valerie/dorothea, and paulina/desiree. More Stretched out than number 2 and allowing for more growth. If worked into number 1, pairs will be desiree/sam, valerie/ember and dorothea/paulina.The erotic method is part of desirees plan and 'lets her give more power the stronger the connection is'. She talks ember into making a similar play and even suggests a candidate. Ember keeps up the erptic conection charade, partially as a favour to desiree and partially for her own amusement. Paulina steals the amulet to become a ghost girl, but dorothea is a suprisingly positive influence, though in her case willingly channeling power i to the amuet actually IS that erotic. I;m considering writing this as just a relationship story with minimal erotic elements.... but it could work either way 4) during a christmas truce party, danny notes that sam, paulina and valerie have been icy towards each other recently and wishes the girls intereted in him would ‘work something out’. a drunk desiree overhears and grants the wish in a way she didn’t intend.
  14. Rules: no rape No NTR, still not sure what it is but i hear i don't want it No gore No bashing No edgey nonsense No downer endings or wanton character killing Quality of writing is important to me, so if you try your hand please give it your best. I know you can make it interesting. Character development Story is king, erotica on it's own is not enough. Take your time ans build, the pauoff will be worth it. Im more interested in character interaction and experimenting with relationship writing prefer to use erotoca to enhance, rather than making it the whole point. If you get burned out on such a story it's hard to enjoy after all. No scat.... eww Try and keep people in-character or a twist on the character Make it as believable as possible, at least by internal logic So, learning from my mistakes, i’m creating a thread for each of my story ideas. If you want to discuss it, have thoughts or suggestions or want to have a go, feel free to PM me or simply post in this forum Samurai Jack: Since he became immune to time, we can use that. Have him either lay with, give a blood transfusion to the girls that strike you and have THAT slow down and eventually stop their ageing, so everyone's in the endgame era. Oneshots for everyone, they realise offscreen and go looking for him. They find him an join him, seeking to use the chance to end aku and since he's propbably the only one who'll lice like them so they want answers. If you like, this has the side effect that more sisters survive the fight, but ashi is the only one he doesn't loose when the worm swallows them, so she falls for him first and is put in charge of convincing her sisters when the others catch up (Daughter of aku prisoners in tow). The ending is different in that the greater 'time immunity' means they all survive the trip into the past. Girls include the rave girl, josephine the bounty hunter, ashi and the sisters and at least one scottsmans daughter. - josephine - olivia (Rave girl) https://www.google.com/search?client=ms-android-samsung&biw=360&bih=318&tbm=isch&sa=1&ei=mk0KW7b8DISx8QWesa-4Bw&q=olivia+samurai+jack+deviantart&oq=olivia+samurai+jack+deviantart&gs_l=mobile-gws-wiz-img.3...2579.4384..4766...0....267.2566.2-11......0....1.........0i30j30i10.hQ7uc1VsoRE%3D#imgrc=GvaVko3pPuo9ZM: - Maybe kuni http://knowyourmeme.com/photos/1271333-samurai-jack - Priness mira - ashi - daughters of aku - at least one scottsman's daughter (probably flora) - that girl who kissed him in the past. The fandom calls her 'cricket girl'
  15. was it the pictures? too long? If you;d like to make me a suggestion for any of them or take a crack at one please feel free to PM me. Gravity falls and transformers prime were two of the more interesting ones to me as well. They’re not so much ‘adult’ fanfics as fanfic which happen to contain threesomes i was going to get around to writing. I like ot3s, and it’s fun coming up with creative and plauible enough ways they could happen. Not that the other two aren’t. they’d be good to work with i think. The important thing is a that the story be fun to write, and interesting to read. erotica is not enough on it’s own. though i must ask, which version of transformers? the first, with the reformatter or the second, with the ‘succubus’
  16. well, given the disney princesses and some general kingdom-hearts similarities, i used a kingdom hearts mechanic to describe it. basically, a party member (it being a real-time action free-roaming jrpg) would be sacrificed to empower the main character, boosting stats unlocking new gameplay and powers. it even is sued to actually permanently teach new powers. Since this results in a new wardrobe the fandom joke is that they become your clothes. I was thinking something similar here, though reversed. with Hiccup (and maybe other magically-gifted girls) acting as a source, the girls would gain more combat-capable forms and abilities, further transforming them and allowing them in turn to empower troops under their command, with characters directly connected feeling the effect much stronger. To further the connection, This could have the side effect of tapping into or CREATING latent abilities that they could refine and use in their own time. Some examples of possible drive forms: Jasmine becomes a tiger-girl and gains powerful fire magics (a reference to the ifrit, which also ties into he history with rajah and the genie as well as a nod to her villain, mirage). this also gives her immense speed, sharp claws and catlike flexibility. possibly throw in a few of the more dangerous tricks from the genies she’s seen, like jafar’s sword-summoning. the harem girls also transform Ariel becomes a living water-spectre like her kingdom-hearts 3 summon, and gains the ability to swim through the air and land as well as a a trident which grants her incredible water magic and lets her summon phantom sea life. her sisters also transform. Astrid grows twice/three times as tall, gets stormfly wings, scales, spines and tail and gains flight, lightning breath and the ability to call down actual storms (e.g cloud, galeforce winds etc). The other vikings…. probably have their own forms Cinderella turns into living crystal and gains absurd agility, luck and causes things around her to repair themselves to her wishes. or she gets a fairy-self to protect her and carry out her bidding. Merrida would probably be a full-on amazon with will-o-wisp fire around her blade. Aurora grows taller, gains the powers, clothes (modified to be more erotic) and some traits of maleficent and summons fairies to do her bidding. or she gains dream-weaving powers and makes all her enemies fall asleep. or both or she gains fairy-clothing and trais and can make solid ‘dreams’, like giant thorny vines Alternatively, hiccup and a girl are removed from battle, but the abilities are spread to EVERY harem girl. being powered by their ‘connection’, hiccup and the girl sleep together to keep it going.
  17. forgive me for asking here, but what did you think of the ideas in my new thread?
  18. actually, better question, are you including any other ben 10 characters
  19. actually, that reminds me, have you plans of including korra and company? it’s doable i think
  20. Im not trying to insult, or suggest its a bad story, Simply explain why i didn't read it. I don't deny your right to read it, but the.scenario holds no appeal to me in a genre based around appeal and enticing atmosphere. That said, Thank you for explaining my mistakes and assumptions. I agree though, from whay I've seen those are weaker stories than your typical ones. Apologies if i offended For emotional depth though, I'd reccomend Ivy. She comes closesr to breaking the jokers hold on harley and they work well together. Her reaction to this and attempts to reason with and save her friend could add some real thoughtful moments. Particularly if in a heavy contrast, Ivy is not written sensually at all in her quinn interactions. The two have had a lot of great character moments.over thr years and provide a brilliant contrastin, positive relationship. Which is NOT and easy feat for a borderline sociopath (she's not quite there yet). For extra points, ivy does have a few minor habits which mirror the jokers hold, so self-awareness of those in this extreme situation coul make for some excellenf growth. Theres also an issue where ivy stops her breakout to beg harley to come with her and leave the joker behind, but she can't. Joker doesn't even have to say anything, but harley can't do it. Ivy nearly calls the whole thinh off, but the guards are getting closer and packing for metahuman, ao she has to flee. The issue ends with harley acreaming at Arkham just what she'll do if she gets a hint of harley bwing hurt, dodging bullets to get a few more moments protectimg her clown. A great thing would her calling this the final straw and going for hero help. Doesn't have to be batman, harley has ties to powergirl and wonder woman The big tragedy of harley is that she's not a bad person. Crazy, yes, but more wild than maliciois or dangerous wothout reason. She's a trained and gifted psychologist, and actually is really smart. She knows the fine pointsnof what's happening to her, but is helpless to stop it.
  21. Again though, apologies, but mad love is not my thing, and it’s conceptual content is so unappealing to me that i cannot read it as an erotic piece not make appropriate judgements on the literary concept. sorry if i took it too seriously
  22. This is Guest, Maybe writer. I got my account! please check out my idea/prompts thread and leave thoughts or suggestions and pick one up if you like: As for your question. Not currently. I’m going to be honest, i avoided Naruko’s pact because i got a bit burnt out on Naruko stories but i will give that a peruse if you like. and I avoided Mad love because… Okay, forgive me for this, the story isn’t to my taste and there are a few reasons. Frankly Harley is one of my favourite DC characters and she has a chronic history of her awesome and complicated character being reduced to ‘the joker’s girlfriend’, so seeing her literally devolve into the joker’s ‘ultimate sex toy’ and be gang-banged for his amusement is a bit too much. The entire relationship was created with the express purpose of being tragic, and was never meant to be appealing, so that it often is shown that way annoys me. (animatio history is a favourite subject, Harley’s home series happens to be one of the most significant in comics history and she is one of the most multi-faceted characters there is when written well. I suppose my problem is that I’ve developed minimum harley quinn standards, even in official works. Suicide squad’s quinn was also annoying to me.) on top of that, I tend t read for personal intimacy and interaction, so extreme debasement is very unappealing, and there needs to be an underlying consent. While there is here, it’s an extremely twisted one that border’s on one-sided and is used as a form of entrapment. I gave it a quite peruse on a random chapter just in case, but yeah. It;s not my thing, and it likely never will be. Sorry. I could look it over and critique it, but I have a distaste for the whole and most of it’s components that would colour my review. I apologise again, but i also thank you for asking my opinion. …. seriously, Harley’s awesome! she killed a megelodon underwater with a spear, ripped it’s head off and carried it around on the spear. she out-gymnastic-ed catwoman, she can heal from bullets in seconds. she punched out killer-croc. She received amazon training from granny goodness and beat the female furies when they tried to collect their due. She's canonically holding back in combat at all times out of not taking anything seriously, and can still kick Tim Drake’s butt then reach a neither-can-touch-the-other stalemate with cassandra cain (the dc answer to taskmaster ‘s hyper-reading for those who don’t know) in the same fight. Harley won anyway, but psychology tricks probably don;t count. On the few occasions she’s serious, batman himself admits he can’t stop her. She’s not only Ivy’s humanising influence, she’s friends with EVERYONE in arkham….. except puddin. The joker has CANONICALLY been trying to kill her off for years, including giant mecha with a mallet and stuffing her inside a missile, (with the explosives,)then firing her at a building, and harley shrugged both of those off. It bugs me so many people forget all this.
  23. Book of life. Following the events of the movie, Jaquoin starts receoving gifts from a secret admirer, but slowly begins to realise it's not one, but two, and that they may be skeletons. The girls are manifesting through possesed calavera dolls, and are depicted as skeletal or not as convenient to the narrative E.g
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