This is FDomFan with a new account, it’s a different name. This is my pen name on the site proper as well. If you see the Anime section, I currently only have one Evangelion story, that’s me.
Anyways, I am currently writing the story. It should not take me more than a week to post the first chapter. I have the basic outline of the first three chapters already planned.
Chapter 1: Toneri’s thoughts, finding Naruto, and ordering his dolls to take him/her. Ends with Naruto/Narumi (as she will be called later) being undressed, shaved, have his chakra sealed, and chastized.
Chapter 2: Narumi is told of her new life, the initial rejection. Toneri rapes Narumi.
Chapter 3: Narumi is given to the dolls, the start of her training.
Later chapters will be pretty much as smutty as possible. No holds barred.
Basically, I want any pointers you can give me. Particularly when it comes to traditional Japanese customs and wife duties. I have been surfing on the net to find some, but I would like to hear some suggestions.
The other thing I wish to ask is if I could add another character. It will be a surprise, but suffice to say that it is a canon character that is now in service to Toneri, and will take a leading role in Naruto’s development. I feel like having another human supervising the training is better than the emotionless dolls. I would really like to add her to the story. There will be an explanation as to why she is now servicing Toneri, so it won’t break to much character.
Another thing is the name change. Is Narumi alright? Or do you have suggestions for another one?
Finally, I wish to comment on the seals that will be forced on Naruto. I may be going overboard with what is possible but I can justify it with Uzumaki/Ōtsutsuki secrets. There was never any concrete science that I know of to seals anyway. So here’s the basic ones.
Will prevent Naruto from growing more than, say 5’4.
Will remove any bodily excretions (no need to use the toilet). Enemas will still be applied as punishment, though.
Chakra sealing
Muscle/physical force reducing, will help with Naruto becoming more “womanly”, will also greatly limit his strength to fight back.
Territorial seals that will knock Naruto unconscious if she tries to leave a determined area.
Punishment seals, similar to Hyuga’s caged bird seal.
Later seals will be added. Part of Toneri’s plot will revolve around finding new ones that will allow Naruto to bear children and make her anus wet like a vagina. Immortality seals, etc.
Finally the ongoing list of fetishes.
Feminization (Female clothing, makeup, women’s sandals, underwear, painted nails and toenails, etc.)
Anal (Toneri has no use for Naruto’s penis, so the only way she will orgasm is through her hole)
Chastity
Bondage (very heavy, even after the marriage she will spend very little time unbound. Even when fully clothed with a latex kimono, her feet will be shacked and arms will be tied behind her back under her clothing, etc.
Femdom (from head doll and secret character)
Yaoi (with Toneri, even if he doesn’t think of Naruto as a male)
Latex (there’s really no latex in the Narutoverse. I will make it so it’s a secret art from, that only the Ōtsutsuki clan know how to do. Thanks to this, Toneri will force Naruto to wear it, seeing as he doesn’t want his wife to “wear commoner’s clothing”)
Leather
Feet (mostly a femdom thing), big fetish of mine, so I really wish to add it.
Toys (dildos, strap-ons, buttplugs, sybians, fucking machines)
Give me your thoughts.