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Hi, Deadman. The reference is to “Cold Ethyl” by Alice Cooper. If your story is BTVS, that’s even better. To paraphrase Hall and Oates, “Some chicks are better left undead...” Cheers?

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Hi, all. … perhaps even more so if her name is Ethyl? Cheers!

Hi, all. … would spreading your newspaper across her shoulder-blades to read while engaging in the act be a bit too much? Or perhaps using her breasts to prop up your smartphone but not using it for the camera? Cheers!

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Not quite a cool as the next post, but close.

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Hi, @Desiderius Price and all. To the all the above, I would add, “First, read the story.” There are some readers “out there,” in multiple meanings of the phrase, who will pan a story over points that were covered in the story with crystal clarity had they only bothered to read it. Otherwise, @WarrenTheConey’s key points are a very good start. Keeping in mind that beta readers are scarcer than hen’s teeth, most fanfiction writers are having to figure out everything all on their own. Any advice sincerely and honestly given will help the writer in posting a better story. The “great story, keep posting” reviews are also nice, especially for longer stories. While I don’t write for reviews, I also don’t turn my nose up at good reviews that only tell me that the reader is enjoying the story. Cheers!

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