Sephslover

Hello! ^^/ I'd like the help of a beta on a very short Diabolik Lovers fanfic I wrote. It's shonen-ai and there's some blood sucking as the boys are vampires. Any grammar and spelling corrections would be welcome but what I really need is an accurate opinion on my choice of two words. I don't know if I made a right choice and I haven't found anyone to give me a good explanation. I'd greatly appreciate some help here. Thanks! EDIT: Already got help on another forum.